Critique the writing skills of the person being addressed in this text and provide suggestions for improvement.
It is truly incredible how hypocritical you are. You are talking about her painting a bad picture of herself? What about you? You have contradicted yourself at least once and probably more times, as well as exhibiting a writing skill level that would get you a C at best on any high school freshman paper. Get a grip, look at yourself, stop making a fool of yourself. Once more, your writing will improve if you stop capitalizing random stuff.