"I Linger the Night" by Matt Johnson  Logline: A homeless man
tries to make it through the day with little money.  Genre:
Drama  Cast Size: 4  Production Status: Unavailable  Contest:
More of Less is More (Jun. 2010)  Contest Scores
PoorFairGoodVery GoodExcellent  Comments Made During the Contest
Aralis Bloise (Level 4)  I guess he'll get his bed in jail?
There really isn't a co-relation between the kid's wish and what
happens at the end. Maybe if she gave him something that the
cops mistook for a weapon? There needs to be something that ties
it all toguether, otherwise it's just a random series of events
in this guy's day.  Barry Katz (Level 3)  I really enjoyed this
one! The ending totally took me by surprise, giving the story a
bit of a twist. When the hobo first pulled out a switchblade, I
really wondered what he'd do with it. As it turns out, the
little girl's contribution DID help him find a bed for the
evening. Not so sure a prison cell is all that great, but hey...
it's a bed! When using a number for