these parameters, authors can structure the presentation (e.g.,
format, language, and level of detail presented) to the
appropriate audience. The following comments on document format
and presentation provide specific recommendations toward that
end.  Length of TSDs: Some TSDs are excessively long, not
because there is so much relevant data, but because the
presentation has not been limited to information focused on
deriving AEGL values.  TSD format: Consider a revised format for
TSDs that would make the document easier for the intended
audience to read and understand. A modified outline format,
using subparagraphs with indentation, bullets, or other ways to
set off specific elements may be helpful. A single paragraph
that consumes half a page or more is almost certainly too
long—and far too common in the TSDs.  TSD summary: Authors of
TSDs should not only cut-and-paste from various sections of the
document to form a summary. The summary should be phrased
differently from the text of the document as the reade