Report a Review   Review:Hippothestrowl says: Very interesting
and intriguing story. Nicely written, good grammar and syntax.
Maybe a little over-explaining here and there (characters
explain to readers about no-Apparating from Hogwarts instead of
talking as they would to the other character.) Perhaps rather
simplistic and over-light (considering the seriousness of the
situations.) Some logical anomalies (chatting, scraping off
gloop yet wands out when they go upstairs? Also why aren't they
asking the Ministry (ie, Kingsley) about her dad being in
prison. Isn't that the most likely place to start looking for
him? And why wait 10 days? Wouldn't the first thing you want to
do after months locked up at Malfoys then fight in a battle, is
to go and find your father? Maybe I missed something.)  However,
overall, very readable and promising and the author has
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