Reviews for Virtuoso's Ultimatum Eleve Osirian chapter 6 .
1/7/2010 I must admit that you are a good storyteller. Your
story is one that managed to grab my attention and though I only
read three of the chapters, I find myself wanting to return
(once I’ve gotten some sleep) to keep reading. Good job with the
hook!  The Preface was helpful, in the fact that you explain
what certain words mean at the very bottom. However, I think
that you could have explained what they were in the story
itself; after all most novels/stories might include such a list,
but on top of the list, explain in the story as well. I didn’t
notice you doing that in the first three chapters.  On to the
prologue: I like the imagery here. One sentence that I
especially liked was, “That was the night I felt for the first
time the morbid chill, of what it feels like to stand on the
line which separated life from death.” To me, this sentence
builds up a lot of tension for the next event, and leads the
reader onward with a good push. It's fair to