Reviews for The Devil's Own Hospitality Xion is my fate 'Laura
Heart chapter 1 . 10/22/2009 It was very good. I know about
"dream writing" and it is very difficult to make understandable.
You have a natural talent. Lasgalendil chapter 1 . 12/1/2008 I.
Am. Intrigued!  The whole dream like sequence showed us how
bizarre and confusing the events must have seemed to Molly
herself. I still maintain that the strongest part of this piece
is the ambiguity-did Molly dream the whole thing, starting with
the inn, or did it actually happen? The reader is forced to
choose an option, which elevates the tension.  Grubbing around
in the dirt under the bridle gives me the creeps...her horror
and acceptance of the revelation were vivid. Realizing, or
knowing concretely, for the first time, what sort of horror this
creature is is quite terrifying. Especially given the
foreshadowing of 'losing' when playing a fae's game.  The
repetition of Schmendrick's warnings/plea tied the whole piece
together-and left us even more intrigued.