Take the tour ×  Is it correct to combine multiple clauses (sub
sentences) into one?  For example, let us consider this
sentence:  On managerial side, I am experienced in accounting
software, have been working throughout the life cycle of
product, and have considerable experience for enhancing and
improving existing products.  Here I am combining 3 clauses to
make they one sentence, so I am wondering if it is grammatical?
share|improve this question There's nothing wrong with combining
multiple clauses, but you have several other mistakes in your
sentence (missing the_s, redundant "for" in "have experience
_for", and it's not obvious whether the leading clause "on the
managerial side" applies to all three sub-clauses). –  aaamos
Apr 23 '12 at 2:54 Thanks @aaamos. Can you please correct my
sentence and write it in full ? Thanks once again. –  user576510
Apr 23 '12 at 3:04 Your statement is a bit ambiguous. Does 'on
the managerial side' mean that you have actual management
experience (using accounting software