Reading Reviews From Member: SilentConfession 325 Reviews Found
Review #1, by SilentConfessionPorcelain Hearts : Prologue  16th
April 2014: I really like how you've formatted this. I am
actually always a fan when someone formats stories a bit
differently because it raises so many questions and I felt that
with this first chapter. I also liked how you've packed in a lot
of information into the first chapter and yet it was done in
such small snippets. That is really a neat thing to be able to
do and capture it well enough so you get the readers attention.
I think that is your strongest bit here is how you've introduced
your story. You thrust the readers into the world were we see
James finding out about Bellamy and Scorpius. Then we learn that
they were together, James was going to propose, a friend knew
that Bellamy would break James' heart but, for some reason,
cannot actually do anything about what she knows. I think it was
skilfully woven into the first chapter and definitely makes me
interested in what e