  Various comments on pre-04  From: koen holtman
<koenh@fatima.dds.nl> Date: Sat, 1 Jun 1996 17:13:25 +0200 (MET
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<Pine.SUN.3.90.960601171156.26850A-100000@dds.dds.nl>  The dail-
in service I normally use to send mail has conveniently broken
down just this weekend.  I have therefore batched several
comments on the pre-04 draft, which I originally planned to send
in separate messages, into one big message, and am trying to
send it via an different mail account.  Note that I am at this
point unable to read any http-wg mail and any private mail send
to koen@win.tue.nl.  Messages are separated with =========.
** Some wordsmithing remarks  3.1, the sentence at the start of
the last paragraph:   Proxy and gateway applications must be
careful in protocol versions  different from that of the
application.  looks like it is missing some part.  In the 03
draft, the sentence   Proxy and gateway applications MUST be
careful in forwarding r