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The Last Pepsi  talk page me when you've done. If you feel
really generous, review my other articles too. :3 SadisticWolf
17:46, May 17, 2010 (UTC)  I'll do it. It's either this or study
for finals, and I sure don't want to be studying for my finals.
--Sirrah CatshirE Chess the Striker2117 18:20, May 17, 2010
(UTC) Humour: 5 Your humour isn't bad, and there are some great
parts in this article; however the article seems a bit short and
some of the jokes seem to lose their humour in the phrasing of
your article (which I'll cover more below in the Content and
Prose sections). The constant torture of the Pepsi as the
narrator tries to find something else to distract him could be
very nice if you expand the article to cover more of his day
(You tried to take a nice refreshing walk outside but even the
dogs started to turn into Pepsi symbols.) The reference to the
Nigerian Prince scheme also