Here it is, the first chapter of the remake of Run. I hope it's
an improvement over the first!   Chapter 1: Escape and Capture
By: Helena F. Lupin  The prison grounds were vacant and bathed
in shadows that played hide and seek with the blaring light of
the almost full moon. A chilling breeze cut the air, a chilling
presence of the cold winter. The only sounds to be heard were
those of the prisoners who happened to snore or who happened to
be involved in acts that a lot of the others pretended not to
notice.  He laid on his back. His eyes were open but he was not
trying to focus on anything in the half shadowed cell he had
lived in for the last seven years. That was about to change. He
was causing too many problems lately. He had picked one too many
fights. He was going to be moved from one set of stone walls to
another in the early morning.  In less than an hour he would
have one single chance to escape so he could finish what he had
started seven years ago. He should have run when the trails had
begun. Ther