Report a Review   Review:Rebekka says: I'm kind of moved by
this. In a strange way I really did like this. It's not your
favorite, and you have improved, but for some reason, I find it
sweet, sad and just right for the mood I'm in at the moment.
Here's my favorite part (sorry about the long quote): He loved
her. He had meant to tell her that. He had meant to marry her.
He had meant for her to be the mother of his children. He had
meant to grow old with her. He had meant to kiss her, hug her,
hold her, and make love to her. He had meant to dance with her,
cook with her, buy a house together, and teach their children
magic together. This actually made me all teary eyed. ^_^ It
just touched me.  Oh, here's one error: Harry watched as Ron
wept and wept, and Harry’s own eyes streamed its own silent
tears. Should be "streamed their" because eyes is a plural. And
maybe you could leave the second "own" off. ^_^ Otherwise, there
weren't any mistake that I could find. Although, I think that
Voldemort was a bit funny wi