This is my First Story, so I’m still a novice. Constructive
criticism is welcomed but please don’t nag/complain/flame. Your
criticism will help me to decide weather to write the next
chapter or not.  Thank you and enjoy reading. Hannah XxX  It was
a warm summers night as per usual and as the sun faded there
wasn’t a sound to be heard except for the occasional twitter of
woodland animals hobbling off to there night-time retreats.
Hannah walked on to the balcony wearing nothing more than a silk
lilac coloured thong and matching push up bra. With her dad
working nights at the police station she could get away with
whatever she wanted, and plus She had nothing to hide since
there wouldn’t be anyone around until late morning when the
farmers would be out in force. Sewing seeds and rounding up
sheep. So walking around in her underwear or in most cases
totally naked was normality. She thought about how privileged
she was as she sat down at glass table and rested her head on a
folded sweater, her 36D cup perky breast