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& 1337 08:43, October 9, 2011 (UTC)  Humour: 5 Okay, very good.
I see where this is going, certainly. What's there is satirical
and sarcastic and that's very nice. The unfortunate thing is
that as of yet there's nothing really new here in the realm of
making fun of gay-hating Jesus freaks. Yes, it is funny because
it's true, but it's been true for a very long time, and people
have been making it funny for almost as long. There needs to be
something more. Something either less "noticeable" about the
issue at hand, or something entirely bizarre altogether.
Whatever it may be, there isn't anything here that wasn't
already obvious to me when I began reading the article. It has a
good structure already set up, that's for certain, and there's
nothing inherently wrong with its prose and direction, but the
jokes are just stale and old. They n