Need Help with Hooking My Reader  iVillage Member Registered:
08-29-2013 Need Help with Hooking My Reader Thu, 08-29-2013 -
1:27am  Here are a few options for the first lines of my novel.
 I'm having a hard time deciding on which gives the best hook.
 All feedback is helpful!  Sitting in a busy airport terminal,
waiting for her boyfriend and her flight, Kath gazes around for
a moment before focusing on the pages in front of her once
more.  Knowing she was about to take the longest flight of her
life so far, she knew she would need a good read, and one that
would ground her nerves.  Her on and off again journal from the
last 5 years was her choice read.  She purchased a new one
before she had left, the old one filled to the brim, mostly in
the past year’s time.  She was halfway through reading the 2011
portion, knowing graduation was coming and it was about to get
good.  Kath couldn’t wait for the next part, knowing her journal
life was about to change forever.  The airport terminal noise
was only a buzz throu