Be a Supporter!  Credits & Info  Apr 17, 2009 | 11:27 AM EDT  If
you liked this, check these out!  Author Comments  oh and your
character's so very very high on acid  plz say what happens
next!    Rated 5 / 5 stars   *thinks for 5 hours...*  i know he
steps on a nuke mine   Rated 0.5 / 5 stars  what happens next?
anyone could add anything onto the end and it would make sense,
there is no plot so how do you expect people to keep it going?
the idea for the flash is there definately, i havent seen many
'continue the story' flashes, not to say there arent any. but if
you had made a little bit of a plot it COULD work. the guy needs
to actually be running on the line rather than floating a
centimetre above it. music fits. colour is fit-worthy, dont
think that is necessarily a good thing but nevertheless get a
plot on board and THEN see if it can be continued.  People find
this review helpful! lolghurt responds:  the RED LINES are the
actual ground   Rated 1 / 5 stars   did sonic become anorexic
and shave his head?