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A careful balancing act  Released on 2012-10-11 16:00 GMT
Email-ID 199205 Date 2011-12-01 21:55:44 like Anthony said, it's
clear you've done your research, but there's a lot of
information here that doesn't relate to the development of your
point (particularly at the beginning). Also, going switching
geopolitical angles within a paragraph, explaining the interests
from a certain country's POV in one sentence then anothers in
the next, can make it hard to follow so be aware of that. There
are some awesome points in this piece it just needs to be
trimmed down a bit so those can shine!  On 12/1/11 2:06 PM, Jose
Mora wrote:  After taking office President Obama announced a
policy of reengagement with Asia and implemented a dual-track
approach, talks combined with sanctions, to Myanmar. This policy
hadn't received much of a