Report a Review   Review:padme_alejandra says: I think this was
probably my favourite chapter yet - maybe because I'm on holiday
and actually had time to read through it at a proper pace, but
probably because it was absolutely lovely.  I like the contrast
between Minerva's concentrated effort not to think of Grimm and
the fact that Grimm just thought of her constantly - she
permeated his every thought (though he did say he wouldn't think
of her, he said it an awful lot, thereby thinking of her a lot
haha). Anyway, I think it was really reflective of their
respective characters - Grimm's tendency to be the pursuer and
Minerva's to be the pursued.  Your writing, as always, blows me
away and keeps me captivated throughout (even though my
attention span is generally zero, I never looked away from the
page). You've managed to create such a real character in Grimm
in his weaknesses and flaws that adds such a real aspect to him.
And you've hit young Minerva spot on - I can definitely see how
she came to be the Profe