Reviews for Othermother Air Rey chapter 1 . 7/22/2010 wow! the
narrative was quick. I normally don't like narrative poems for
they are dragging. But you used a variety of stanza and line
length to make this concise, yet powerful.  You evoked emotions
with clarity and precision but still left a moment of ambiguity
and vagueness for your readers to absorb and process the actions
in your poem.  What an ending! The sigh could mean so much
things that left this poem open-ended giving room for your
readers to predict or conclude the poem on their own.  I loved
this. I hope you could review my poems as well. Thanks for
writing such a great poem. YasuRan chapter 1 . 6/28/2010 There's
a beautiful sort of complexity in your words, as if painting a
picture or weaving a tapestry with heaps of layers to it. The
series of contradictions lining this piece - the wariness of the
mother to be, the apparent joy of those around her ("Darn,
Marla. You're getting bigger everyday!") - contrast and connect
perfectly. It makes me rea