Reviews for Experiments Dragonfly-Moonlight chapter 5 .
10/26/2012 Okay, I came back to this and I'm utterly baffled.
From the way you wrote this, it doesn't even sound like you
played Till the End of Time or The Last Hope, or you'd have
written Fayt a little more appropriately and remembered that
Faize, Arumat, and Lymle all have offensive symbols and special
skill sets. Fayt is a hero. He doesn't like to see anyone hurt
or tormented like that, and he's been experimented on himself
without his knowledge or permission. As for Arumat and Faize,
they could TELL the researchers how they reproduced seven
hundred years in the past. They are not technically inept.  The
only things I can really praise about this story are the
technical aspects of your writing and the idea. You've utilized
proper sentence structure, punctuation and spelling, and that's
something I always enjoy, no matter what I'm reading. You also
had a good idea. Unfortunately, you didn't execute it well
enough.  P.S. I don't care that it's fanficti