07-288 To: J3 From: Van Snyder Subject: Comments on Clause 9
Date: 2007 October 10 1. Edits w.r.t. 07-007r3 [212:35-213:10]--
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if an error condition occurred before a REWIND or BACKSPACE
statement? Either specify "occurred after what" or replace
"occurred" by "occurs" throughout Maybe use "occurs during data
transfer" or "occurs during execution of a data transfer
statement" at [226:35], and maybe insert "upon completion of
execution of that statement" after "indeterminate". It isn't
necessary to include all that detail throughout the subclause
since the first paragraph isn't about any particular kind of
connection. [217:31-34]-----------------------------------------
---------------------- Editor: Move to [221:36+]. [218:34-37]---
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Editor: Move to [221:36+]. [218:238-40]-------------------------
------------------------------------- Editor: Move to [220:32+].
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