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After Interrupting Bush's "Important Presidential Work"  It
seemed funny when i made it. Any way i can improve it? --Moneke
05:25, 7 October 2007 (UTC)  Humour: 6 Though there were plenty
of jokes in the article, they never exactly came to a dramatic
head. In most articles I've liked, jokes were either subtle,
incredibly obnoxious, or totally random. Often an entire
paragraph would work toward setting up a predictable conclusion
and have the joke at the end be a logical but slightly-less-than
possible surprise. However, in the article you tended to have a
lot of exposition before giving the joke, which tended to be
cliche. Though this article seems focused on critiquing the
white house, it tends to jump around a lot and at one point
focused completely on a Mr. I. R. Bent. Concept: 7 T