Reviews for When the World Ends Beautiful. I hope your friends
realize how much you love them. Most of my poems base around
amazing friends as well. simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/8/2009 I
think the idea is cliched, but the way you described it was
actually pretty unique except for the last line. That was kinda
cheesy, but the rest was pretty good.  It read well. It flowed
nicely and the rhyming worked well when read out loud.  My only
issue is your punctuation. Your first stanza is not a sentence.
All of those lines are phrases, you need the rest of it. As this
happens, this happens (or doesn't happen). That would be the
second stanza. Also, in the second stanza grammatically you
don't need a comma after every line.  Still the piece itself is
good. I also like how it can be applied to different
relationships. lymli chapter 1 . 2/11/2009 it's a sweet poem,
true friends should be like that. teenagedirtbagbaby chapter 1 .
2/11/2009 i like it :) short and simple