Unrealistic portrayal, chaotic brushstrokes, unclear depiction, lack of detail in lotus, muddy colors, distorted shapes, unrecognizable subject, exaggerated elements, rough texture, lack of depth, mismatched colors, unrealistic lighting, haphazard composition, lack of harmony, over-saturation, unnatural blending, poor execution, amateurish strokes, inconsistent perspective, lack of serenity, absence of atmosphere, unrefined technique, lack of tranquility, lack of realism, lack of emotion, absence of beauty, stagnant skies, stagnant lake, lack of variation, absence of dynamics in the sky, absence of movement in water, lack of depth in light and shadow over the lotus and lake.