{"action":"closed","issue":{"url":"https://api.github.com/repos/AlderArts/foe/issues/308","labels_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/AlderArts/foe/issues/308/labels{/name}","comments_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/AlderArts/foe/issues/308/comments","events_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/AlderArts/foe/issues/308/events","html_url":"https://github.com/AlderArts/foe/issues/308","id":86652754,"number":308,"title":"Plaza/Inn typos/suggestions","user":{"login":"CalmKhaos","id":11616123,"avatar_url":"https://avatars.githubusercontent.com/u/11616123?v=3","gravatar_id":"","url":"https://api.github.com/users/CalmKhaos","html_url":"https://github.com/CalmKhaos","followers_url":"https://api.github.com/users/CalmKhaos/followers","following_url":"https://api.github.com/users/CalmKhaos/following{/other_user}","gists_url":"https://api.github.com/users/CalmKhaos/gists{/gist_id}","starred_url":"https://api.github.com/users/CalmKhaos/starred{/owner}{/repo}","subscriptions_url":"https://api.github.com/users/CalmKhaos/subscriptions","organizations_url":"https://api.github.com/users/CalmKhaos/orgs","repos_url":"https://api.github.com/users/CalmKhaos/repos","events_url":"https://api.github.com/users/CalmKhaos/events{/privacy}","received_events_url":"https://api.github.com/users/CalmKhaos/received_events","type":"User","site_admin":false},"labels":[],"state":"closed","locked":false,"assignee":null,"milestone":null,"comments":0,"created_at":"2015-06-09T16:14:19Z","updated_at":"2015-06-10T17:18:02Z","closed_at":"2015-06-10T17:18:02Z","body":"For your review. Combined these together.\r\n\r\n-Plaza-\r\n\r\nIn the middle of the ***plaza,*** there is a large fountain in white marble, full of clear water. **(Could also do: ‘In the middle of the plaza is a large fountain in white marble, full of clear water’ if the intent was to not have a comma introduced.)**\r\n\r\nIn the middle of the fountain on a raised ***pedestal*** stands a stone statue of the Lady Aria, covered in robes of silk that sway in the wind.\r\n\r\n***The*** **Inn is over there.** **(Just a thought: Perhaps give the inn location some sort of direction?)**\r\n\r\n-Inn-\r\n\r\nThe large room seems almost empty with so few people, although there must still be at least a ***score of*** patrons eating, drinking, and chatting together.\r\n"}}