{"action":"created","issue":{"url":"https://api.github.com/repos/bartvm/blocks/issues/338","labels_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/bartvm/blocks/issues/338/labels{/name}","comments_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/bartvm/blocks/issues/338/comments","events_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/bartvm/blocks/issues/338/events","html_url":"https://github.com/bartvm/blocks/issues/338","id":58666393,"number":338,"title":"'Building with bricks'  tutorial typos and improvements","user":{"login":"fvisin","id":4639261,"avatar_url":"https://avatars.githubusercontent.com/u/4639261?v=3","gravatar_id":"","url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin","html_url":"https://github.com/fvisin","followers_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/followers","following_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/following{/other_user}","gists_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/gists{/gist_id}","starred_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/starred{/owner}{/repo}","subscriptions_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/subscriptions","organizations_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/orgs","repos_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/repos","events_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/events{/privacy}","received_events_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/received_events","type":"User","site_admin":false},"labels":[],"state":"closed","locked":false,"assignee":null,"milestone":null,"comments":2,"created_at":"2015-02-23T23:17:52Z","updated_at":"2015-03-14T00:20:24Z","closed_at":"2015-02-25T01:40:57Z","body":"Hey,\r\n\r\nI have a few comments on the _Building with bricks tutorial_:\r\n\r\n1. In the _lazy initialization_ section you claim:\r\n\r\n    > In the example above we configured the Linear brick during initialization.\r\n\r\n    If I am not wrong, this should be 'during configuration'\r\n2. In the sentence:\r\n\r\n    > which is quite common: We want to take the output of one model,\r\n\r\n    'we' should be lowercase\r\n3. It would be nice to explicit the lifecycle of a brick object earlier in the tutorial, maybe with a very simple graph (`construction/configuration` --> `further configuration` --> `allocation` --> `initialization`). Also, I think that an introductory part briefly explaining the meaning of each life phase would be of help to comprehend the rest.\r\n\r\n4. Finally, in the Brick documentation\r\n\r\n    > Allocation configuration of children\r\n\r\n    is not very clear."},"comment":{"url":"https://api.github.com/repos/bartvm/blocks/issues/comments/79566713","html_url":"https://github.com/bartvm/blocks/issues/338#issuecomment-79566713","issue_url":"https://api.github.com/repos/bartvm/blocks/issues/338","id":79566713,"user":{"login":"fvisin","id":4639261,"avatar_url":"https://avatars.githubusercontent.com/u/4639261?v=3","gravatar_id":"","url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin","html_url":"https://github.com/fvisin","followers_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/followers","following_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/following{/other_user}","gists_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/gists{/gist_id}","starred_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/starred{/owner}{/repo}","subscriptions_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/subscriptions","organizations_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/orgs","repos_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/repos","events_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/events{/privacy}","received_events_url":"https://api.github.com/users/fvisin/received_events","type":"User","site_admin":false},"created_at":"2015-03-14T00:20:24Z","updated_at":"2015-03-14T00:20:24Z","body":"Addressed point 3 in https://github.com/bartvm/blocks/pull/473"}}