Posted on November 7 , 2013 by Lucia Hi Bloggers , this term , 4VA have been working on writing narratives . The theme was losing someone that we love or something very important . Here are our stories that we have written . I liked your storyline and your description . There were some grammar mistakes though . There was on sentence that mentioned you and your brother and you wrote " me and my brother " not my brother and I . Other than that great job . Perry November 7 , 2013 at 9 : 55 am • Reply Narrative : The Lost Child One spooky Halloween night my friends , my family and I went trick or treating . I wore a terrifying vampire costume and most of my friends did as well . We went to all the houses in our street , and got so many lollies . We were really tired , but exited at the same time . The last house we went to was my grandpas house . He told us to come in and watch television . He was watching " The Spooky Curse Of Halloween " . Since it was Halloween it was a bit scarier than it usually is . My grandpa talked to all of my friends and learnt their names . He then asked me where my sister was . I said she was right in front of him and pointed to her … but she wasn 't there . We looked all over the house , she wasn 't there . We looked in every street she wasn 't there . We even looked at the park down the road but she was no where to be found . Since we had all left our phones at home we asked grandpa if we could use his phone to call the police . He said it was broken and he needed to get a new one . We zoomed back to our house to call the police . We had to run three blocks to get there . As soon as we got there we went in to my sisters bedroom since she used the phone last , but when we got there … . we found my sister . She said that we left without her and she was to scared to catch up by herself . We told her her that we looked everywhere for her , but mum told her that since we were all safest was okay . So we all sat in the living room , shared our lollies and watched " The Spooky Curse Of Halloween " . I really enjoyed reading your story . I found it really interesting as you repeated words to give it an effect . I saw some small mistakes that might 've happened while you were typing . You wrote exited but I think you meant excited . But overall I really enjoyed your story and I think you did a great job . Evan November 7 , 2013 at 12 : 41 pm • Reply Dear Perry I realy liked your description like a terrifying vampire . I also liked that your sentences and it was the right size for a sentence . I thought you could have double checked your work , because the were some spelling mistakes in your last paragraph . I liked how your story was at a high school and I think it 's great that you took on a different kind of genre , as you usually do fantasy or horror ! Some things that you could work on is the way your sentences were written . I personally thought they had a bit too much in them which made me a bit confused in some parts . Especially the second last sentence in the first paragraph . Another thing is when you suddenly put talking marks . The way I read meant that she was talking to herself when she was introducing herself . Also , just one last thing , maybe you could have written less about her going toilet ? Just thought I 'd point that out , kindly . But anyway , it was a good story with lots of detail and an interesting storyline ! From Lucia Thanks for the feed back . You said I didn 't really need talking marks when I was introducing the character . Well , that part was my character speaking to the reader and it wasn 't quite obvious but I thought it was easy to tell they they were talking to the reader . Obviously not . Well , I the first paragraph it went from present to past tense so maybe you should double check for the correct tense . I also have some more warm feedback . I liked the words you used to make your story more interesting ! It was the first day of Spring , when my large family and I decided to visit a new shopping centre called Anima Shopping Centre . In my family , there was my impossibly tall mother , father , my three irritating and naughty younger brothers and sister , my old and frail grandmother and my cold - hearted older sister . No one really volunteered to push my grandma on her brand new wheelchair , so I had no choice but to push her all around the massive shopping centre . It felt like being locked in an iron maiden since my family spent hours buying useless items in many shops . The longer my family spent walking , talking and buying clothes in the shopping centre , the more tired I got and harder it was to push the wheelchair . It felt like days when my bossy mother said it was time to buy lunch . ( She took more then half an hour to decide what she would eat most of the time . ) I was extremely exhausted by then , not being able to even lift a finger . I rested against an iron pole , trying to catch my breath , while grandma 's wheelchair was near the stairs , next to my silent sister . My grandmother did not seem too bothered to have a rest ; she was more gleeful and excited when I was pushing her around the shopping centre . My dull , boring family was taking way too much time , so I walked to the rest of my family without thinking about anything else outside me . ( Although , I think I forgot someone …… . ) I was so distracted that I did not hear my grandma in her wheelchair , crashing down the stairs , looking as calm as ever . ( I still wonder why she was not screaming though . Hmm …… ) I found my family at the chaotic and crowded food court ; it was full of people walking in different directions . I decided to find something for lunch until my mother appeared out of nowhere and asked me where I left my silent grandma . I was covered in sweat and my heart was pounding . I forgot everything about grandma ! This shopping trip is an absolute disaster ! ! I ran around the crowded shopping centre , my vision was blurry , but I was determined to find my missing grandmother . It was not easy though , there were so many people that I had to shove out of my way . I felt like I was stabbed on the back multiple times , why wouldn 't the rest of the family help me out ? ! I just remembered where my old grandmother was last seen ! I rushed towards the stairs , hoping to see my grandmother fine and in one piece instead of being injured or even worse : dead , but the only thing that was at the bottom of the narrow stairs was grandma 's new , now broken wheelchair . Tears started to pour out of my eyes as if my eyes were a tap being turned on . As I thought of my grandmother , my heart felt cold and lonely as ever . Suddenly , a beautiful , slender woman ( Around twenty three years old . ) appeared out of nowhere , but the strange thing was that the lady was flying ! She had white , feathery angel wings and fiery red hair . Luckily , it seems like only I can see her . ( At least it didn 't cause a great panic . ) She gracefully came down and touched my shoulder , without making a sound . Do not feel guilty ; it is not your fault . Now , I will take her place and your grandmother will finally rest in peace . " said the kind angel . Her melodic voice rang like ringing bells in my ears . " I have erased memories of your grandmother from your family , but I shall tell you this : No matter how bad or painful things happen , you must move on , and live for those that you care for . " added the angel , her hand on my shoulder felt as light as a feather . Her presence felt like my old , loving grandmother . " Thank you … Uh , by the way , what is your name ? " I asked , but straight away I regretted saying that . At least she didn 't react as I thought she would . " Scarlet , my name is Scarlet . I got my name from my red hair . " replied the patient angel , her voice as kind as ever . " Okay Scarlet , I hope we will get along quite quickly . " I said , I was grinning and believed that I said that from the bottom of my heart . I think your story was really really interesting and I like all the interesting words you used . It was really great to read a story that showed that even when things turn sour , there is always a bright side to it . I have never read any of your stories , and now that I have , I understand why your stories are so long ! Your story had a great storyline , good description and great sentence structure and I especially liked the ending ! I liked how you described how the character was struggling to find his sister . But there are some parts that didn 't understand like when it said ' I had to look after house my sister and my cousin we were at my grandpa house but we didn 't know was my sick uncle was sleeping ' , instead of I was had to look after the house , my sinter and my cousin . We were at my grandpas house but we didn 't know if my sick uncle was sleeping . But still good job . Lucia November 7 , 2013 at 12 : 35 pm • Reply Brother ? I remember it as clear as crystal . The day my brother almost went missing . His name is James , and at the time he was only four years old . We had gone to ballarat for the weekend , for a visit at Sovereign Hill . My parents , James and I had been enjoying a cheerful day , when my mum decided on the way home that she needed to stop at the supermarket . As she hopped out of the car , she told us all to stay there , but James pestered mum , saying that he wanted to go with her . So I ended up going along too , because anywhere that my brother went , my mum wanted me to go too , just so I could look after him . Mum headed for the Coles entrance and grabbed a small , black basket , while , James and I went to the massive lolly shop . The store was filled with rows and rows of lollies and chocolate , and there were stacks of boxes in every corner . " Sweets ! Lotsa ' sweets , Amy ! I want soommmme " James screeched . " Sorry , but I don 't have any money on me ! " I replied apologetically . I wandered off to the tall , sturdy stand full of One Direction merchandise , and fiddled with the cheap looking purses . After minutes of trying to fix a zip I had accidentally broken , I turned around to face a blank wall . And then I realised … James wasn 't there ! As I frantically stormed from store to store , my eyes stung with tears . Then a wave of fear rushed through me . What if I couldn 't find him ? My life would be so miserable ! When all of the very few stores had been searched , I panicked . That was it . The day of my funeral . I knew that mum was going to kill me ! My heart was pounding in my chest , faster and faster , every step I took . When I had approached mum , I sighed so hard , that I thought all the air had come out of me . Shocked and relieved , there was James , at mum 's side , with a huge grin plastered across his face . And within his sweaty , left hand , was a bag of sugary lollies ! Written by Lucia It was a normal sunny hot Saturday morning . I went to go get my black and white adorable cat Rozie , some yummy biscuits and some icy cold water because it was so hot . While I placed the bowl down I didn 't even hear her meow I thought to myself that 's very odd . But I couldn 't believe that she didnt even come up and eat her yummy biscuits that she absolutely loved to eat . Then I looked back but she wasn 't in her green warm beanbag . So I decided to go look for her , I looked where the pot plants were , inside , around the back even looked where the chairs were but she was nowhere to be found . I thought I should go look at the front I 'd doubt that she 'd be their but it is worth a look . Guess who I found rolling around in the shade meowing at the front door is . Rozie " I said running up to her and giving her the biggest hug remembering not to squeeze her because she 's only a cat . Then I thought to myself maybe she just wanted to come here because it 's nice and quiet , or maybe because it 's nice and shady . Then I thought I can 't believe that she didn 't even smell her most favourite biscuits . I went to go get the brush and brushed her smooth silky fur . After that I played with her more , then befor I left to go back inside I gave her one more big hug . A few minutes later I saw her eating her biscuits and drinking her icy cold water . By Alana O I wake up like a sloth and rotate to crack my back and look at the bright orange digits on my clock . There was still enough time to lie in for a few hours , but today was Wednesday and I needed to say happy birthday to those few people who had theirs yesterday . I made my decision and stumbled out of bed . My mum was too lazy to get up even after I finished packing for school . I stepped into the car and awaited my seven - minute journey to school . Looking through to left window was plain boring everyday as there was nothing to look at besides other people going to school on foot or on wheels . The car came to a halt to park in front of the school , I waited for a bit , then stepped out and made my way to the church steps , where I see Ethan and David . We headed into class . Our first block of maths wasn 't too bad , learning about powers and indices . LOTE wasn 't so bad either ; learning basic greetings were a breeze . The bell rang as we got dismissed and we got our recess , I got tired . I went outside in this wintry force , but there wasn 't much to do so I took a walk about the oval . I looked at my watch and headed back to class but I was interrupted by some preps , friends , then a softball stunned me , then blew me over like a leaf . Blacked out , I fell like a corpse on the asphalt by the PAC . " Mrs . Ash " didn 't have a smile or a frown as I walked down the hall , hopelessly trying to recognize my name in school photos . I walked into a class with these unfamiliar faces as I sat on a table on my own . I checked the time on my watch when I was asked , then the familiar sound of a bell rang , Ten minutes later I go outside in the familiar breeze . I sit down on a metal bench just to wonder who I am . A person who had their hair tied back came up to me , I went " home " and looked at the pictures on the wall . I discovered who I was in a lightning bolt moment . My memories came back to me . It was strange , but who was I to be home at 2 : 30 ? Well , at least I was home earlier than usual . It was a completely normal morning but I had to force myself to not sleep in because my granny had come to visit this morning . So I got out of bed and put my dark blue lacy dress on to impress granny , yes granny was one of those posh old ladies that expected too much from the world . I slowly approached granny and I was greeted with a very posh like kiss on both cheeks , followed by a " mua mua " and then I was also greeted with " you look great Hun now hold my ring whilst I go and use the lavatory " I replied with " sure thing umm ? Lady oh um I mean uhh Ma ' am " if took one quick look at the ring and already noticed that it was an antique 50 million dollar ring , I glanced at the grandfather clock ( that of course granny bought us ) and saw that Mia my cat needed to be fed . I put the ring on my crooked finger and walked over to the fridge and picked up Mia 's diet plan and saw that today she had to eat several frozen sardines ( I would hate to be Mia right now ) . So I opened the freezer and pulled out several frozen sardines , then I approached our ugly glass sliding door that looked like a lion had used it to sharpen its claws on . So anyway I went through the ugly door and started to put the food in Mia 's bowl and I started to notice that my hands were getting all oily and yuck from the sardines , in fact my hands were really slippery but I didn 't even bother washing them , lucky granny was not here to see me with grotty hands ' whispered to Mia saying " I 'm sorry it 's for your own good you fatty . " Then granny came out of the toilet ( she took a long time ! ) and asked me for her ring so I reached out for my hand but it was gone I gasped and said in a shocked voice " oh umm I a kind of lost it ? " she was furious I was so ashamed I ran outside and cried like a big sooky . I then realised that Mia my adorable cute and cuddly cat was chewing something shiny and gold I then pulled it out of her mouth and saw that it was the ring I was so relived but before I told granny I found it I had to clean it . I took it to the tap and washed it off , I then sprayed perfume on it because it stunk like sardine . Then I thought about how Mia had it and then I realised that I probably fell into her food . And finally I screamed out " granny I found your ring " then I ran to her , she just snatched the ring off me and said " young ladies don 't run and scream ! " The iPad One sunny evening , Jacob an average teenager , with a white complexion , black leather jacket with white stripes , black leather pants , black Nike shoes and black shades with ninja stars logos on them , was going to his best friend 's house . Jacob skated from his house and arrived at Edwards 's house in a matter of minutes , he arrived with his black skate board and razor blade backpack including his iPad , Xbox controller and razor blade headset . First they put Jacobs backpack in Edwards 's room . Then they got their skateboards and Jacobs iPad and skated off to KFC . After their quick KFC lunch run they skated eagerly back to Edward 's house to play Xbox . As soon as they got back Jacob couldn 't find his iPad , he was going insane without it . So Edward and Jacob looked for the iPad all over Edwards house then remembered he took it to KFC . As quick as a worker bee he zoomed straight to KFC on his skateboard to pick up his forgotten iPad . He looked on the table where we sat but he saw nothing . Then the lady at the counter saw him and remembered that he forgot his iPad and gave it to him . He thanked her and zoomed straight back to Edwards 's house . One spooky afternoon , I was relaxing on my couch watching T . V , when suddenly I heard the phone ringing . I ran swiftly to the phone and asked who it was , it was my friend , he always pranked me , he wanted to know if I wanted to come over , this was my chance to prank him I thought . I asked my kind and loving parents if I could go , they said " yes " , I told my friend yes . I asked for his address , he told me his address and I wrote it down . I grabbed my bag with a tasty , mouth - water and delicious sandwich in it , and I walked to the address . When I got there I saw a dark , damp and massive forest , I thought to myself his house must be somewhere in here . I walked in the forest and in a blink of an eye I was lost ! I was looking everywhere for a way out , but I felt I was walking in circles I was really scared and tired now . So I sat down on a log and then suddenly I heard a growl from the back . I jumped up and saw the vicious - looking tiger slowly approaching at me from the bushes ! I was panicking , my heart was racing , I was thinking what I could do , suddenly I remembered I brought a sandwich I knew what was inside , there was meat in it , I thought if I chuck the sandwich the tiger would leave me alone and eat the sandwich instead . I chucked the sandwich and I ran away . After awhile I thought I lost the tiger , I spoke to soon , and there it was again . This time it looked friendly . I slowly came to the tiger and patted it . I thought to myself he must be friendly , I wondered if it knows the way out . I asked the tiger if he knew the way out , he started walking and I followed him . After a while he found the way out , as I was walking out of the forest I saw my friend , he was laughing wildly . I knew he gave the wrong address , I was really mad at him and I didn 't talk to him ever since . I walked back home and my parents were really worried and scared I was hurt because it was really late . They were really happy to see me safe and sound . I was cold and very sleepy . I just woke up at 6 : 00 am to put the laundry . The day was very windy so I thought putting it out now was a very good idea . I was unfortunately half - naked and quite scared that someone might come across my house . The wind was blowing and blowing as if God has turned on an enormous fan up in heaven . But as for my sleepiness I managed to put up only one pair of socks and one pair of underpants . Then suddenly I heard something that woke me up instantly . BANG , my door made as it shut close , the noise was so loud it could have created an avalanche . I hurried over towards the door and tried turning the door handle and suddenly a shiver ran down my spine , my heartbeat was beating ten times as faster than it should be , I 'm locked outside , I 'm half - naked and I almost had a heart attack . I checked to for my keys everywhere ; in my socks , in my underpants , in my wet underpants , in the grass and every known place in a garden . I 'm panicking I looked for a way in but I closed every entrance because of the cold air escaping into the house . I was doomed . Then I remembered that I have a spare key at my office desk but it was half way across the town , I went to find my car but my car was at the garage . I thought and thought but nothing came , I then heard a dog , correction : a very angry dog . He looked at me and barked suddenly he leaped on me , it was a tough fight but I found a tennis ball and threw it , the dog chased it far , far away . I watch enough if Bear grill videos so I know the whole survival thing . I found leafs , sticks and some mud ( dried obviously ) . I wet the mud until it was gooey and very helpful , I stuck the sticks and mud together and covered it with leaves " Perfect , " I thought to myself as I looked at my make - shift suit . I snuck on to a tram and rode to my office . On the tram everyone stared at me as if I was a homeless hobo . I got off and saw my make - shift suit wrecked . I saw a man who had a pretty descant suit that s when I had an idea . I quietly grabbed the man and shoved him into the toilet and I stripped him of his suit and I put it on . I went to my desk and found my keys and got out of the building and cached another tram and returned home . I opened the door and sat on my sofa and turned on my TV then suddenly remembered one thing : " I forgot about the man ! " The man still lay in the toilet half - naked just like I was . One ordinary day I was looking at clothes in the shop board works then I saw some cool looking tops that I might buy . But there was one top that really stood out so I went over to it . At first I thought it was a girl top but it was actually a boy 's tiger print top . So for some reason I like to feel the pockets and see what it looks like with something in them . So I put my phone in it to see how it looks . Then I saw my friend Cooper so I went over to him to say hi and talk about things that we have recently done . So as we talked I went to show my phone . But then I realised that my phone was not in my pocket my heart suddenly bead rapidly I was really worried if I lost it " what would my mum say " I thought ? I was freaking out ! I was quickly moving around the shop looking for it . Then I saw the top again it was as shiny as a diamond and oddly I could see something rectangular in it I thought about it for a minute , then I realised that it was my phone ! So from that day on learnt to always keep my phone or other important things in my pocket . And to not feel pockets and put things in them to see how it looks and feels . So I ended up showing my phone to my friend another day . That weekend i went to the shops to buy a video game but i noticed that I forgot my wallet ! on the computer desk at home . Later I ended up with no video game . When I got home i went to get my wallet from the computer desk but it was not there ! . The next day I felt really upset because I had lots of money inside my wallet and now I have to get a new wallet and earn money to keep in a new wallet . Later I went to my tub rack where I keep all my books to find a book to make me feel better . After when I finished with the book I opend a different tub to put the book back and before I put my book in I saw my wallet ! ! ! ! I was sooo happy that I found it and lucky i still have all my money . The only thing I have to know is who put it with my books . One normal morning I did my usual morning routine of my boring life . It 's just brushing my teeth washing my face and brushing my hair but something unusual happened today little bits of my brown soft lushes hair was falling out of my head . So I just tied it in a loose pony tail . We 'll it didn 't really concern me so I wasn 't all fussy about it . So the day went really quickly today so that was a big relief . So I just had a shower and just went to bed . When I woke up this morning and did my normal morning routine . And when I went to brush my hair there was no hair to brush or no hair to tie up . I ran to my mum down stairs . I told her what happened at first she didn 't really understand what I was talking about but then she was thinking really hard to find out what we can do about this problem . She went to go and look in the cupboards in the hallway and she found this afro wig . I told her " I can not wear this to school mum " she just looked at me and said " it 's better than going without any hair at all " . So I just did . Luckily school finished early today because there was a big dust storm . When I got home I got home did some homework and went to bed early . That night a genie came and granted me a wish for my hair to come back . And I know that because years ago a dark looking guy robbed our house so know we put in cameras so we can see if he comes again , and when I looked at the camera footage i could see the genie coming down the fire place Because when I woke up this morning I had hair but it wasn 't my natural hair it was the wig that my mum gave me yesterday . So I wasn 't too happy about it . i told all my friends that a genie came and granted me a wish to stick the wig that I wore yesterday so I have hair now " We all know that genies rant real so you just stuck that wig on your head hahahahahahah " my friends said . Then after hearing that I just walked away and started to cry . By : Elli Blias 4va " That was a good jog , but I better head back home . " She looked at her watch . It was 8 : 30pm and Jeana was still out jogging . Jeana was always trying to lose weight , even though she looked great . About 10 minutes later , she arrived at her big , beige tinted house . She went inside and opened the fridge . She chose a drink that she made early that day . While she was making it , she didn 't realise that the ingredients she used , created a very special potion . She took a sip , and it was disgusting . She put it back . " Eurgh . . " Jeana muttered . She walked away to brush her hair , before she went to bed . As she brushed the last strand , Jeana saw that a lot of hair came out . She ignored it and put her flower printed brush down to go secure all the doors . ( She usually did this before going to bed ) . Jeana pulled the covers off and slid underneath . She thought about her hair before drifting off into a deep sleep . It was 7 : 30am and Jeana was going to wake up soon . She just woke up at that time every morning , without the assistance of an alarm . Yeah , it was weird . She woke up and stretched and suddenly stroked her bald , patchy head . She shrieked and raced to the bathroom . She slowly stepped in front of the mirror to reveal her hideous self . " AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH ! " She panicked and screamed and ran around the house ! An hour had passed and Jeana was still panicking . Jeana stopped . She realised that it was the disgusting drink . She impatiently walked to the refrigerator and saw it . It had changed and was now orange ! She forcefully gulped it down in hope that something will happen . And something did happen . Her hair started to grow and grow ! She soon had a thick head of hair . Jeana let out a sigh of relief . But she wasn 't so sure yet . It looked like it had grown but she wanted to make sure . She went to her room and grabbed her brush and cleaned it . She smoothly brushed her hair and to her surprise , nothing came out . From now on Jeana decided it was best for her to not make her own drinks and stick to drinking water . But only during her fitness hours , as she thought it was better . After that disaster , Jeana always made sure her hair was healthy . But one morning , she . . woke . . up . . and . . HAHA ! Tricked you ! Anyway , Jeana told all her friends about her strange story , and boy , did she get some great reactions ! From Sandra One peaceful day the whole earth was calm . Until a strange man came to the small village and unleashed powers which terrorised and destroy the village . One villager escaped into the red forest . He was holding an ancient scroll he found in a box underground , the scroll was dusty and dirty . Andrew opened the scroll and saw it had a mini map and a short paragraph : who ever obtains the sword will have powers never known and can kill the shadow lord but first some obstacles the bottomless ravin , the pit of darkness , the lava bridge , the forest of lost souls and a acid pit . Andrew closed the scroll and headed for the bottomless ravine . After two hours Andrew arrived at the bottomless pit . Then he saw a rusty old wood bridge . Andrew crossed the bridge slowly and and made it to the other side . Then had a long rest and ate . After his sleep he settled of again . Then made his way to the pit of darkness . Andrew arrived to the bottomless pit and saw a bridge , Andrew crossed the bridge slowly and almost lost his balance and fell but he made it to the other side . Then five hours later he arrived at the lava pit . Andrew was getting hot and sweating from the boiling lava . Then he found two bridges one was high above the lava and the other one was lower and closer to the lava . Andrew chose the high bridge and made it a crossed to the other side . Andrew saw a mini cave that had water . He felt the water and it was cold so he relaxed in the water . After ten hours he went to the forest of lost souls . When he started to walk through the forest he heard laughter and saw white floating around . The three souls came and said what are you doing hear but then Andrew ignored them and continued . Andrew found the end of the forest and saw a acid pit but he crossed without care . Andrew found a cave and saw a large box with amor and the ancient sword . Andrew used teleport to get back to the village and put the amor on and held the sword . Andrew fought the shadow lord and killed him once and for all . then Andrew sensed the shadow lord to another dimension and Andrew said a speech : I will be the new king . Every one agreed and Andrew sat in the throne and watch over the village . It was my first day at a new school . I was walking to school feeling soo scared and I said to myself " I hope I don 't embarrass myself " . Kids were staring at me as if I was the last piece of food on earth . Now I was walking faster , more kids were coming and I felt as if I was gradually shrinking . I had finally past the school gates but that 's when disaster struck . As I was walking to the school doors when I slipped on a banana peel and my face landed in a trash can . The next thing I knew was that everyone was laughing at me and calling me names . I felt so embarrassed I ran home crying . I embarrassed myself on the first day at a new school . What bad luck ! I was taking some gum of my face when all of a sudden an old lady came up to me . She said that she could help me but I said " there is no way you can fix this problem " . Then without another word she was growing gradually bigger and the shape of her face was changing . I couldn 't believe what I saw . She was a dragon ! She told me that she could grant me one wish so I said " I wish I could start the day again " . Suddenly I woke up in my bed . I heard my mum saying " get up it 's my first day at your new school " . But that couldn 't be true I slipped on a banana peel and got got my face stuck in a trash can yesterday at my new school . Then I realised the old lady made the day start again . Then I saw the old lady outside getting her mail . As she saw me she winked at me and I smiled back . One normal morning I did my usual morning routine of my boring life . It 's just brushing my teeth washing my face and brushing my hair but something unusual happened today little bits of my brown soft lushes hair was falling out of my head . So I just tied it in a loose pony tail . We 'll it didn 't really concern me so I wasn 't all fussy about it . So the day went really quickly today so that was a big relief . So I just had a shower and just went to bed . When I woke up this morning and did my normal morning routine . And when I went to brush my hair there was no hair to brush or no hair to tie up . I ran to my mum down stairs . I told her what happened at first she didn 't really understand what I was talking about but then she was thinking really hard to find out what we can do about this problem . She went to go and look in the cupboards in the hallway and she found this afro wig . I told her " I can not wear this to school mum " she just looked at me and said " it 's better than going without any hair at all " . So I just did . Luckily school finished early today because there was a big dust storm . When I got home I got home did some homework and went to bed early . That night a genie came and granted me a wish for my hair to come back . And I know that because years ago a dark looking guy robbed our house so know we put in cameras so we can see if he comes again , and when I looked at the camera footage i could see the genie coming down the fire place Because when I woke up this morning I had hair but it wasn 't my natural hair it was the wig that my mum gave me yesterday . So I wasn 't too happy about it . i told all my friends that a genie came and granted me a wish to stick the wig that I wore yesterday so I have hair now " We all know that genies rant real so you just stuck that wig on your head hahahahahahah " my friends said . Then after hearing that I just walked away and started to cry . By : Elli Blias 4va I went to the shopping centre to buy my cousin a gift . It was his birthday on Friday and today was Wednesday . Well , I went into a couple of shops but I couldn 't find any thing he would like . Eventually , I found a pair of really nice jeans that I thought he would like . So I went to the shop owner and said " could I buy these pair of jeans , please " . " That 'll be fifty eight dollars thanks " replied the lady . I searched my right pocket for my wallet . " Where is my wallet " ? I remembered that it was in my right pocket when I got out of the car . I looked everywhere frantically for it , but , I couldn 't find it . I was so concentrated on finding my wallet that I went to the food court . See here … I 'm a nervous eater and I am very nervous ! I went to Subway to eat , I made my order and sat down . They called me up and I payed for it and sat down again . I ate it in a hurry . Then I asked myself " how did I buy it " ! ? So I retraced my steps and " AHA " , I had left it in my left pocket . " How did my wallet get in my left pocket " ? I asked myself . Then I realised I could have put it in my left pocket when I was trying on clothes . Then I went back to the shop where I found the pair of jeans . When I bought it I ran out of the shopping centre in a hurry . " That 's enough shopping for one day " I exclaimed . I walked straight to the car . " Where are my car keys " ?