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Lo scopo del presente articolo è quello di individuare le modalità in base alle quali il regista australiano Ray Lawrence ha adattato sullo schermo So Much Water So Close to Home, uno dei racconti di Raymond Carver più frequentemente antologizzati. Tramite un confronto ravvicinato con la sua matrice testuale, si può osservare, nello specifico, come il film di Lawrence – Jindabyne (2006) – ricrei ed elabori le componenti della storia redatta da Carver, dotandole al contempo di significati sconosciuti all’originale. L’analisi intrapresa tende dunque a focalizzare l’attenzione sui livelli semantici del film, e soprattutto sulla sua possibile lettura in chiave postcoloniale. Pur sembrando una riproduzione piuttosto fedele delle articolazioni di superficie di So Much Water So Close to Home, il film si costituisce infatti come un prodotto autonomo rispetto alla fonte narrativa, della quale altera le implicazioni connotative sia sul piano diegetico che su quello prettamente simbolico. In questo senso Lawrence dimostra di sfruttare appieno le potenzialità del mezzo filmico per affrontare, comunicandone la complessità allo spettatore, tematiche concernenti il rapporto tra la comunità dei bianchi e la popolazione aborigena. Ciò che infine emerge è che la traduzione intersemiotica realizzata dal regista produce livelli semantici nuovi e illuminanti, per mezzo dei quali viene trasmesso al pubblico un messaggio improntato ai temi della tolleranza e del rispetto tra culture.
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               A Case Study for Cinematic Adaptation: Jindabyne by Ray Lawrence


                                                              «Stories […] propagate themselves when they catch
                                                              on; adaptations – as both repetition and variation –
                                                              are their form of replication. Evolving by cultural
                                                              selection, traveling stories adapt to local cultures,
                                                              just as populations of organisms adapt to local
                                                              environments. We retell – and show again and
                                                              interact anew with – stories over and over; in the
                                                              process, they change with each repetition, and yet
                                                              they are recognizably the same. […] In the workings
                                                              of human imagination, adaptation is the norm, not
                                                              the exception».

                                                              Linda Hutcheon (2006), A Theory of Adaptation


Literary and cinematic text

The purpose of the present work is to contribute to the critical appreciation of a significant contem-
porary cinematic adaptation: Jindabyne, a 2006 film by the Australian director Ray Lawrence1.
Jindabyne2, whose ensemble cast features Gabriel Byrne, Laura Linney, Deborra-Lee Furness and
John Howard, is the screen adaptation of So Much Water So Close to Home (from now on SMW),
one of Raymond Carver’s most widely acclaimed and frequently anthologized stories.
        In transposing to the screen Carver’s short story, as we shall see, Lawrence invites the specta-
tor into the complexity of the multiple dimensions and multiple layers of meaning in the relation-
ships of a community of the Australian continent, whose story «bears traces of long suppressed
traumas which inevitably resurface to haunt the present»3. This is not a unique or isolated case of

1
  Ray Lawrence was born in London in 1948, but he moved very early to Australia, where he has been living since
1958. Lawrence has directed only three films in two decades, yet his works have been highly acclaimed by the critics
during that time. In 2001 he achieved popular recognition with Lantana, which was awarded with the prize for Best film
by the Australian Film Institute (AFI). Jindabyne is the third feature film of this non prolific director, whose other
works include Bliss (1985), from the homonymous 1981 novel by Peter Carey, and the above mentioned Lantana,
which was inspired by Andrew Bovell’s play Speaking in Tongues (1996). Lawrence started to think about the adapta-
tion of So Much Water So Close to Home during the shooting of his second film, when the Australian singer-songwriter
Paul Kelly introduced him to Carver’s short stories. It took six years to complete the film, two of them spent negotiating
with the Aborigines the use of the sacred sites that are the setting of some of the film’s most suggestive shots.
2
  Jindabyne (2006), directed by: Ray Lawrence; produced by (in alphabetical order): Philippa Bateman (executive
producer), Gary Charny (executive producer), Catherine Jarman (producer); written by (in alphabetical order): Beatrix
Christian, Raymond Carver; starring (in credits order): Gabriel Byrne (Stewart), Laura Linney (Claire), Deborra-Lee
Furness (Jude), Chris Haywood (Gregory), Tatea Reilly (Susan), Sean Rees-Wemyss (Tom), John Howard (Carl),
Rocco (Stelios Yiakmis), Simon Stone (Billy), Leah Purcell (Carmel), Alice Garner (Elissa); original music by: Paul
Kelly, Dan Luscombe; cinematography by: David Williamson; editing by: Karl Sodersten; distributed by: Roadshow
Films; release dates: 20 July 2006 (Australia), 27 April 2007 (United States); running time: 123 minutes; country:
Australia; language: English.
3
  LAMBERT – SIMPSON (2008).
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adaptation on screen of Carver’s work: indeed SMW is also the basis for one of the storylines in
Robert Altman’s Short Cuts, which was distributed by Fine Line Features and released in 1993 to
strong critical acclaim4. Whereas Altman substitutes a Los Angeles setting for the Pacific Northwest
backdrop of Carver’s stories and chooses as a leading motive the role of death and infidelity in hu-
man relationships, Lawrence operates a far more drastic and effective shift in the literary source,
which is transformed into «a sharp dissection of race and gender in a corner of New South Wales
where whites and Aborigines cohabit in mutual unease»5.
        To start with, we should firstly point out that there are at least five different versions of SMW:
from a structural point of view, however, the most significant hiatus can be found in the passage
from the first – the manuscript version of Beginners (originally produced in 1980, but unpublished
until 2009)6 – and the last draft (Where I’m Calling From. New and Selected Stories, 1988) to the
ambiguous and elliptical version of What We Talk About When We Talk About Love (1981). Even if
the interviews granted by Lawrence seem to refer to the version of What We Talk About as the pri-
mary source of the film, this paper will make reference chiefly to the draft of Beginners7, whose
significant discursiveness provides us with a wider range of analytical details which will reveal use-
ful for marking out the differential value between the film and the short story.
        The story of SMW is narrated in the first person by Claire Kane, whose marriage becomes se-
riously compromised when she realizes the manner in which her husband Stuart reacted to the dis-
covery of the body of a young woman, raped and then brutally murdered, near the Naches River,
where he and his friends had set up camp for a week-end of fishing.
        Despite their horrific discovery, the men agree to postpone reporting the murder to the police
and spend the night by the river as they had initially planned, both because they are exhausted and
because by the time they arrive it is too late to do anything for her: «the girl “[is]n’t going any-
where”» (Carver 2009, 116)8. The next morning, therefore, instead of making the long trek back,
they spend the whole day fishing as if nothing had actually happened, their only concern being to

4
  The adaptations of Carver’s short stories are numerous. See for example: What’s in Alaska? (2009) by James Arrabito,
Cathedral (2002) by Bruce Schwartz and What We Talk About When We Talk About Love (2000) by Scott Stewart.
5
  TAYLOR (2007).
6
  Two decades after Carver’s death, the stories of the present manuscript have been published in their original version
thanks to the support of the author’s widow Tess Gallagher. The editors William Stull and Maureen Carroll, who are re-
sponsible for the choice of the collection’s title (Beginners corresponds, in fact, to the title story of What We Talk about
When We Talk About Love), have added only a short preface and a few endnotes to Carver’s text, restoring it to the form
it had before the editor of Knopf, Gordon Lish, excised and condensed it radically.
7
  In its overall narrative and thematic features this version is substantially identical to the previous longer versions that
Carver produced between 1976 and 1988. As Günter Leypoldt points out: «Carver first wrote a longer version that
appeared in the Pushcart Prize anthology of 1976 and was included in his second collection of stories, Furious Seasons
(1977). Subsequently, the material was rewritten into a miniature version, which Carver published in his reductionist
collection What We Talk About (1981); eventually, he republished the longer version with minor changes in Fires
(1984) and Where I’m Calling From (1989). […] Carver’s four longer versions [differ only] in minor aspects that have
to do with copy-editing […]» (LEYPOLDT 2002, 323).
8
  All SMW quotations are taken from CARVER (2009, 114-33).
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secure the girl’s body to the riverbank by her wrist, so as to prevent it from drifting downstream and
getting lost in the rapids.
        From the outset, Stuart’s disarming indifference pushes his marriage to the brink and, as fur-
ther details gradually emerge, Claire’s peace of mind is increasingly undermined by his persistent
callousness. The distance between them becomes unbridgeable, in particular because of Claire’s
growing sense of alienation from her husband, who persists in his selfishness and only makes mat-
ters worse by attempting to ease the strain through awkward sexual advances.
        One of the most significant elements of the plot is Claire’s progressive, almost epiphanic
identification of herself with the dead girl, whose terrible story stirs up the memory of a series of
events that compounds the sense of menace triggered by the Naches River murder. Indeed, another
river had also been the scene of a similarly heinous crime, committed a long time ago by other men,
the Maddox brothers, «[who] killed a girl named Arlene Hubly […] cut off her head and threw her
into the Cle Elum River» (Carver 2009, 120).
        Prompted possibly by the desire to restore stability to her broken family and thus return to an
appearance of normality, Claire decides to attend the young woman’s funeral and makes the hun-
dred-and-twenty-mile drive to the community where the service will take place.
        In the draft written for Beginners, Claire’s return home is followed by the exacerbation of the
difficulties in her relationship with Stuart, to such an extent that their marriage is inevitably pushed
to the brink. In the “official” version of the story, which appears in What We Talk About, Claire,
although incapable of banishing the ghost of the dead girl and everything it has come to represent
for her, passively surrenders to her husband – the only feeling she is left with is that of being swept
away by the lingering sound of the floating water, described by Arthur Saltzman as «a welcome
oblivion, a shrinking from insight»9.
        In the light of the significant differences present at the surface level of textual structures be-
tween the literary and the cinematic texts, I shall first give a short synopsis of Lawrence’s film,
mentioning only in passing those details which show a closer consanguinity with the source text.
        In contrast to what happens in Carver, the plot of Jindabyne goes hand in hand with its fabula,
enriching it at the same time with a series of narrative segments which in the short story are either
omitted or presented analeptically.
        Generally speaking, at first glance Jindabyne seems to be a sort of replica of the fabula of
SMW, even though it disregards those elements of “suspense” that play a prominent role and exhibit
multifarious characterizations in Carver’s original plot, where the identity of the supposed murderer



9
    SALTZMAN (1988, 90).
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is alluded to only at the end10. To this fundamental change may be added the insertion of new char-
acters, of a subplot running parallel to the main story and the choice of a different ending.
        The film, which is entirely set in the Australian town of Jindabyne and its surrounding area11,
opens with a sequence that leads the spectator to anticipate the imminent assault on an Aboriginal
girl by an anonymous middle-aged man (later identified as the local electrician Gregory). The con-
sequence of what turns out to be an inauspicious encounter is shown shortly after, when the camera
closes in on the unknown man in the act of throwing the girl’s naked body into the river Jindabyne.
        As happens in the source story, the discovery of the body takes place during the annual fish-
ing expedition that Stewart – an ex-car racing champion and the manager of a petrol station – has
organized with his old friends Carl, Rocco and Billy12. What follows is known or, at least, predicta-
ble.
        The initial shock soon vanishes, replaced as it is by the grotesquely selfish remark about the
uselessness of going back home immediately, and the men agree to spend the night by the river,
comforted by the fact that it is too late in the day for them to hike back to the road and alert the au-
thorities about the body13.
        As in Carver’s story, the men spend the night huddled around the fire and the next morning,
instead of making the long trek back, they go fishing. While their partners are away, Stewart’s wife
Claire, Carl’s wife Jude and Rocco’s girlfriend Carmel gather together. During their conversation,
Claire remarks that she doesn’t think her husband Stewart would want more children and Jude ex-
plains to Carmel that after the birth of her son Tom Claire suffered a mental breakdown that com-
pelled her to leave her family for eighteen months.
        After reporting the body to the police, the men return from their trip on Sunday night. When
Stewart comes back home, he briefly exchanges a few words with his wife and then initiates inti-
macy without mentioning the discovery of the dead body. The next morning, the police turn up at
their house and ask Stewart to answer some more questions; all the friends are summoned to the po-
lice station, where the police officer voices his profound disgust at their decision («We don’t step
over bodies to enjoy our leisure activities. Pack of bloody idiots. I’m ashamed of you. The whole
town’s ashamed of you», he says). But rather than their white fellow citizens – whose general opin-
10
   After the funeral, one of the girl’s acquaintances comes up to Claire and tells her: «Well, they got him. […] They ar-
rested him this morning. I heard it on the radio before I came. A guy right here in town. […] He’s admitted having rela-
tions with her that night, but he says he didn’t kill her» (CARVER 2009, 131).
11
   Jindabyne is a town in south-east Australia (New South Wales) that overlooks Lake Jindabyne. Originally situated on
a land that is now part of Lake Jindabyne, the town was transferred to its present location in the 1964 due to the danger
of eventual dammings. Jindabyne has been also the setting of the recent Somersault (2004) by Cate Shortland.
12
   In SMW the names of the men are: Stewart (Stuart in the original version), Gordon Johnson, Mel Dorn and Vern Wil-
liams.
13
   In Jindabyne it is Stewart that finds the girl’s dead body and secures it to the riverbank, while in Carver’s story is Mel
Dorn the first to catch sight of «the girl floating face down in the river, nude, lodged near the shore against some
branches» (CARVER 2009, 115).
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ion is pithily expressed by the local newspaper headline, «Men fish over dead body» – it is the Abo-
riginal community that condemns the men’s actions by vandalizing their businesses in the belief
that neglect of the dead girl stemmed from racism.
        While Jude defends her husband Carl, Elissa, Billy’s girlfriend, and Claire are the only mem-
bers of the group who express remorse and condemnation for what happened. But it is especially
Claire who, stunned by Stewart’s behavior, tries to fathom the reasons for his selfishness («That’s
the point», she says to him, «She was dead. But don’t you see? She needed help»).
        Rather than concentrating on the quest for the girl’s murderer, Jindabyne revolves around the
details of the troubled dynamics which regulate the relationships between men and women, and
even more so, between whites and Aborigines, which will also be the topic of the last part of my
critical analysis.
        The specific role played in structuring the plot by the interactions between the whites, de-
scending from the first English settlers, and the Aborigines, whose communities are indigenous to
most of the Australian continent – with which, as we shall see, they feel an atavistic bond – emerges
clearly in the second part of the film, where public opinion builds up against the white men because
of the negligence (probably due to racial prejudice) which they have shown towards the dead girl14.
        Claire is the only one who realizes something fundamental is not being addressed. This is
why, in her determination to put things right, she sets herself up not only against her own family
and friends, but also against those of the girl («I need to know that my husband’s a good man», she
confesses to the victim’s relatives): against their will, she collects money for the girl’s funeral, and
introduces herself to her family in order to give them the donations she has received, which, she
hopes, will help to ensure as decorous a service as possible.
        In the final scene, Claire goes to the memorial service to pay her respects, and later on she is
joined by her husband and the people involved in the events. During the funeral, Stewart apologizes
to the girl’s father on behalf of the men, in an atmosphere of apparent catharsis and reconciliation
that both written versions of SMW conspicuously lack.




14
  Later on we will discover that the girl’s name is Susan, as in Carver. The script alters only her surname, which chang-
es from Miller into O’Connor.
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Idiosyncrasies of the cinematic enunciation

In any adaptation, the transposition of words into that expressive syncretism which is one of
cinema’s distinguishing features – a syncretism Lawrence declares he is availing himself of in order
to delve into the existential dilemma which constitutes the film’s thematic focus – allows for the
shift from the verbal codes of literary texts to the codes of moving visual representations
(audiovisual codes), which can contribute in many cases to the amplification of the source’s textual
complexities.
        The effects of the adaptation process – as Brian McFarlane reminds us – appear on the level
of the complex apparatus which regulates the presentation and reception of the story, in other words
on the level of enunciation15. In these terms film enunciation contains elements belonging both to
the cinematic or filmic field proper (camera movements and cutting) and to the profilmic field
(everything that exists and is done in front of the camera).
        If one applies Gérard Genette’s theory on the wide-ranging relations existing between two
texts to the analysis of those aspects which are peculiar to the cinema’s semiotic system16, it is
possible to point out in the first instance how the film transforms the narrative mode in accordance
with the categories of time (the cinematic text/hypertext removes the anachronisms in the short
story/hypotext, modifies the story’s narrative speed by filling in ellipses or cutting out narrative
segments, and inserts descriptions), mode (the adaptation alters the source’s link between direct and
indirect discourse), and voice (the change in the story’s focalization also changes the kind of
enunciation).
        In the question of voice, in particular, Lawrence’s adaptation removes the autodiegetic
narrator of SMW so that the point of view is split mainly between Claire e Stewart, whose decisions
and actions represent one the main thematic cores of the story. Such a choice is nevertheless
ascribable to the problems the cinematic medium encounters when it has to transpose a single
enunciative subject. As Gianfranco Bettetini has convincingly argued, in the process of
transposition into a different semiotic system:

        Audiovisual language […] does not normally allow for the explicitation of an empirical subject,
        even if this subject is reduced to the mere narrative enunciation, and only with difficulty does it
        produce an evident subjective origin in the story and, consequently, an equally evident instance
        of a possible narratee-receiver. […] Generally speaking, audiovisual translation must do without


15
   I subscribe to McFarlane’s restrictions concerning the use of the term «enunciation»: «Film enunciation, in relation to
the transposition of novels to the screen, is a matter of adaptation proper, not of transfer. […] it will be considered in re-
lation to how far the films […] exhibit the interaction of cinema-specific and extra-cinematic codes, and to what extent
they provide – or seek to provide – equivalences for the enunciatory procedures of the novels on which they are based»
(MCFARLANE 1996, 20).
16
   For further details see GENETTE (1997).
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         the potential personalizing instances of the written text and “transcribes” the narrative subject,
                                            17
         the plot, in an “objective” version .

         Therefore, in Jindabyne all those discourse markers of a character’s thoughts and behavior
which can be extrapolated in SMW from the verbal interactions as well as from the narrator’s words
are inferred generally from dialogues or, more frequently, from the details of the mise-en-scène,
which function as the visual equivalent of the descriptive prose of the original.
         Moreover, if we consider the theoretical distinction between showing and telling, which is
often referred to when describing the various modalities of film shooting (the former focusing on a
more or less explicit authorial mediation, the latter directly concerning the performance of actions),
we may also assume that Lawrence’s film resorts primarily to “telling”. In spite of this, the film
certainly displays a variety of enunciative elements, through which the twin components of
enunciator and enunciate are presentified.
         In Jindabyne these enunciative marks are primarily activated through subjective shots. Here
the camera is positioned at an angle, or there is something in the content of the shot which suggests
that it is seen from the viewpoint of a single character (usually portrayed as someone in an
abnormal frame of mind), such as in the scene of the discovery of Susan’s body, where Stewart’s
eye and that of the camera overlap as he lingers, with almost scopophilic pleasure, over the details
of her naked body. There are also frequent cases of semisubjective shot: an excellent example is the
opening sequence itself, in which Gregory (the girl’s murderer, as the spectator will later discover)
follows with his eyes the car driven by the girl whom shortly afterwards he will assault.
         There are also many instances of pure narration, where the director provides more precise
information about the setting, which in Carver – as already pointed out – coincides revealingly with
the oppressive space of the protagonist’s home.
         A case in point is the pan shots, which encourage a suspensive and mythic vision of the
Australian outback and which Lawrence, maybe reminiscent of the way Peter Weir has evoked the
sense of mysteriousness and fascination surrounding Hanging Rock in the homonymous film
(Picnic at Hanging Rock, 1975), uses to highlight the mysteries hidden behind the landscape’s
desolate beauty: even the trip to the river the four friends undertake is presented by the camera’s
expert eye as a slow and hypnotic immersion into the Australian wilderness, which overwhelms
both the protagonists and the audience with its grand vastness and its warm colors, masterfully
conveyed by David Williamson’s photography.
         Given that it is impossible to lay any claim to completeness or normativity in the examination
of an adaptation and the degree of its closeness to the source text, it is likewise impossible to

17
     BETTETINI (1984, 81). Translation mine.
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evaluate precisely the presence of stylistic equivalences, which are the most difficult to identify,
because of the way they trespass «on the field of expressive subjectivization and even on the literary
or audiovisual idiolect»18.
        Although the source text belongs to the American literary background, Jindabyne must be
viewed on the one hand in the wake of films such as Jedda (Charles Chauvel, 1955), Walkabout
(Nicolas Roeg, 1971), the above mentioned Picnic at Hanging Rock and The Last Wave (Peter
Weir, 1977), with which it has close symbolic and thematic associations, ranging from the
topological data to a taste for visual rather than verbal metaphors, and – on the level of content – to
its haunting reflection on the crimes of the postcolonial past19. On the other hand, however,
Jindabyne also connects, thanks to its recurring subjects and leitmotifs, to Lawrence’s previous
films, such as Bliss, which concentrated on the suffocating reality of modern society and on mid-life
crisis (the same crisis Stewart experiences in Jindabyne), and the much acclaimed Lantana, which
investigated introspectively the subject of solitude and the fallibility of interpersonal relationships
destroyed through lack of communication or faithfulness.
        We should not, in any case, dismiss the idea that Lawrence chose to render the expressive and
content structure of the short story by employing specific cinematic codes, among which stand out
his use of photography and cinematic punctuation. First of all, it is the film’s choice of lighting
techniques that lends itself particularly well to analysis. Jindabyne adopts two main approaches to
photography, both of which exhibit a consistent respect for the natural sources of light that
characterize both the outdoor and the indoor locations: the external lighting is aimed at enhancing
an overall realistic effect (the so-called “natural” effect), while the internal lighting – probably by
means of a very soft strip lighting – bestows on the entire setting an aseptic and dull appearance.
        The alternation of these kinds of lighting, together with specific idiosyncrasies in the use of
camera movements, underscore the film’s subject matter: the outdoor light maintains intact,
“untainted” as it were by technical devices, the evocative landscape, which towers above men,
dwarfing them with its magnificence and imperturbability. The cold light adopted for indoor
settings, at the same time, conveys the idea of the coldness of all human relations marked by
incommunicability, which, on the level of performance, shines through the long and exasperating
pauses scattered throughout the dialogues between the various characters or their brief, almost
explosive, exchanges. This, it would seem, is one of the most telling devices the film resorts to in
order to evoke the cryptic and indirect style which Carver had used to capture on page the last heirs



18
  Ibid. 89f. Translation mine.
19
  For a more extensive and fully referenced discussion on films which focalize on the alienation and the racial discrim-
ination of Aboriginal people, see GRUNERT (2008).
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of the American dream – men and women inexorably resigned to their imprisonment within an inert
and emotionally stagnant existence20.
        It seems also valuable to note how the mise-en-scène, which does not strictly concern the
reconstructed setting itself, but rather the purpose underlying the preparation of such a setting, is
deeply imbued with the concept of credibility, since in Jindabyne the stage setting is structured
according to naturalistic parameters, in line with the situation represented and close to the viewer’s
own experience.
        Lawrence, accordingly, dissociates himself from the sensationalism of the Hollywood film
establishment, to the extent that he brands it as hysterical, preferring «the European sensibilities
involved in filmmaking»21, which stimulate the audience rather than imposing its one-sided vision
of facts and situations.
        The director, in other words, “peeps” into his characters’ lives much in the manner of
Raymond Carver himself, that is without being empathetically drawn into their dramas, but
nevertheless successfully communicating the intimate nature of certain atmospheres and the sense
of a progressive emotional lethargy undermining human relations. The spectator’s gaze is
“directed” towards the characters and the story only by means of the camera movements, which are
generally realized through broad pan or zoom. The camera is held almost always at eye level (thus
avoiding the effects created by low and high angles), the use of dolly shots is moderate, and the
director uses neither the steadycam, nor the hand-held camera, so that the cinematic eye can be said
to both observe and distance itself from what it sees22.
        Lawrence, who possesses a highly individualized style, resorts to natural light for his shots,
but also shoots each scene only once (one take shoot), in order to make the characters’ acting as
natural and direct as possible: as a result, his dialogue and situations are extremely realistic, and a
higher degree of freedom is reached in performance and improvisation.
        The transition from one shot to another adheres to the same poetic principles, with fadings
(such as the shift from the sequence of Susan’s encounter with her murderer to the sequence where
he dumps her body by the river) characterized by the skillful augmentation of the feeling of
suspense experienced by the observer and the separation of what has been already shown from what
has yet to come: this is the technique used by the film to express relations of consequentiality


20
   On many an occasion the film reflects the most common feelings of Carver’s characters («fear, indifference, aliena-
tion, solitude»), whose characteristic silence «is not a byword for mediation, but rather the signal of a potentially explo-
sive inner unease» BIAGIOTTI (1999, 76). Translation mine.
21
   FAIRWEATHER (2007, 49).
22
   Moreover, camera movements prove to be useful for instituting appropriate links among profilmic elements (girl’s
body/water, girl’s body/Claire, nature/electricity, etc.), which are qualifiable – from the point of view of reception – as
metaphorical connections among the subjects of a particular image. On this last point, see in particular GAUDREAULT
(2000, 133).
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between the various sequences23, which are generally obtained through a moderate and essential use
of cross cutting.
        From the point of view of cinematic syntax, we should also note that the absence of
flashbacks or flash-forwards and the resulting linearity of cutting exemplify the director’s limited
recourse to intellectual découpage24: as a consequence, the most frequent shots are those which
American cinema is traditionally fond of, that is close-ups, full shots, medium shots, long or
extreme long shots, which Lawrence employs for short but reiterated description of landscapes.
        The film’s syntactic linearity and the use of natural light therefore work together to charge the
story’s surface meaning with additional meanings, but the process of cinematic narrativization also
involves – with a conspicuous increase of in the number of enunciative configurations – music (the
soundtrack proper) and sound effects (the noises made by people and objects within the scene).
These, besides operating as structural links throughout the episodes and evoking the characters’
inner feelings, serve to emphasize the story’s sense of mystery, as in the case of the ambient sound
of floating water.
        Significantly, the soundtrack for Jindabyne’s most poignant sequences was composed by
Australian songwriter Paul Kelly, who at the end of the ‘80s wrote a song entitled Everything
Turning to White (1989), inspired by the same story Lawrence chose to make into a film. In a film
with such a rich symbolic substratum, it is ultimately the music element that best complements the
pursuit of pervasiveness and spirituality on which the narration is predicated. As Linda Hutcheon
explains:

        When theorists talk of adaptation from print to performance media, the emphasis is usually on
        the visual, on the move from imagination to actual ocular perception. But the aural is just as
        important as the visual to this move. […] there are separate soundtracks that permit elements
        like voice-overs, music, and noise to intermingle. For the adapter, music in film “functions as an
        emulsifier that allows you to dissolve a certain emotion and take it in a certain direction” […].
        At best, it is “a collector and a channeler of previously created emotion”. […] Soundtracks in
        movies therefore enhance and direct audience response to characters and action [or] can be used
        to connect inner and outer states in a less explicit way than do camera associations25.




23
   Linda Hutcheon argues that «literature’s “meanwhile”, “elsewhere”, and “later”, find their equivalent in the filmic
dissolve, as one image fades in as another fades out and time merges with space in a more immediate way than is possi-
ble with words. With the time-lapse dissolve, not only time and space but also cause and effect are synthesized»
(HUTCHEON 2006, 63f.).
24
   This claim does not deny the presence of intellectual découpage in Lawrence’s adaptation. As in any other film, in
fact, montage effects are unavoidable: for example, cutting from clear flowing water, to a body dumped in it, sets up
intellectual oppositions of nature vs. culture, life (feminine/passive) and death (maculine/aggressive), purity and
pollution, good and evil, and by extension Australian and Aboriginal, which indeed become oppositions dealt with later
in the paper.
25
   HUTCHEON (2006, 41).
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«Men fishing over an Aboriginal dead body»: a postcolonial reading of Jindabyne

The analysis of the relationship Lawrence’s film maintains with SMW, as we have suggested so far,
involves «a dimension of intermediality» that extends far beyond the mere study of the influence
exercised on the film by its literary matrix, since «it no longer corresponds to the more superficial
level of technical devices, but to the very categories and structures that constitute the
communicational and discursive framework within which [this influence] should be situated»26. In
fact when translating a novel or, as in this case, a short story into a film,

        not only do we produce a translation, more or less complete, into the second text of the meaning
        and values immanent in the first text, but we construct, even perhaps involuntarily, a new
        communicative strategy, subordinated to completely different circumstances of fruition
        (whether from a physical, physiological, perceptive, psychic, social or anthropological
        perspective)27.

        These circumstances entail the choice of specific expressive strategies, whose palatability –
reference to topical issues, insertion of social themes such as violence against women,
interrelationships between the sexes, ethnic and racial biases – tends to be set in relief vis-à-vis its
first discursive manifestation.
        Despite appearing to be a faithful reproduction of SMW’s surface structure, it is on account of
its director’s sociological and ideological objectives that Jindabyne stands out as an autonomous
product with respect to its source text, whose connotative implications it noticeably enhances.
According to Hutcheon:

        Not only what is (re)accentuated but more importantly how a story can be (re)interpreted can
        alter radically. An adaptation, like the work it adapts, is always framed in a context – a time and
        a place, a society and a culture. […] Fashions, not to mention value systems, are context-
        dependent. Many adapters deal with this reality of reception by updating the time of the story in
        an attempt to find contemporary resonance for their audiences28.

        Although cinematic adaptations from one culture to another are not a new phenomenon, they
have seen a considerable increase over the last few years with the production of heteroclite
transpositions which, like Jindabyne, have opted for a significant change in the setting (time and
place) of their principal source.
        What takes place in these cases is, according to Hutcheon’s well-known definition, a
transcultural adaptation, which, by changing the context of the original story, at the same time
changes its underlying values, attaining a far more complex worldview – a case in point is
represented by Mira Nair’s 2004 adaptation of Thackeray’s Vanity Fair, or by Patricia Rozema’s
26
   NÖTH (1997, 363f.).
27
   BETTETINI (1984, 73). Translation mine.
28
   HUTCHEON (2006, 142).
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1999 version of Jane Austen’s Mansfield Park, where she depicts the intricacies of gender and
race29 –, through which the spectator is metaphorically provided with «a safe arena in which to
explore difficult ideas that still have relevance: “contemporary anxieties and fantasies of national
identity, sexuality, class, and power”»30.
        The director of Jindabyne turns away from the short story source as regards its inventive
premises, in that he elaborates its key issues through a set of predominant characteristics patently
unrelated to the production context but strongly influenced by a personal desire to provide matter
for reflection for audiences much too often Eurocentrically biased against Aboriginal culture: «I had
the pleasure of giving an Aboriginal writers’ and artists’ workshop», claims Lawrence, «and all
their stories were about going home and family, cultural things. I put these ideas into the film; I
hope there is a sense of mystery surrounding the Aboriginal culture, which inspires the audience to
find out more. These cultures are still so strong, despite what has been done to them. I want people
to be more interested in different cultures, not afraid of them»31.
        In addition to the introspective analysis of a series of troubled interpersonal relationships,
deeply affected by the topographical element32, Jindabyne deals with issues related to what might
be termed the postcolonial theme, a mark of Lawrence’s ethical and social commitment. In this
respect it is worth noting that the film may be regarded as a modern allegory of the colonization
which was the cause of the Aborigines’ removal from the lands they had been living in since time
immemorial – the fact that the male characters in the story are incapable of acknowledging the
abomination of Susan’s murder reflects Australia’s current inability to reconcile the past with the
present.
        More specifically, a crucial aspect of understanding Lawrence’s idiosyncratic (re)elaboration
of his source material is the way in which, by dramatizing the events related to the girl’s finding, he
foregrounds the dilemma which shapes the interactions among individuals from different cultural,
social and ethnic communities.
        So the director is primarily interested in transforming SMW into a film whose main concern is
to reprise and enact the effects «of a paradigm shift in Australian historical Aboriginal
consciousness»33. The Mabo decision (3 June 1992), which overturned the doctrine that the
Australian continent was terra nullius when the first Europeans settlers arrived, has played a central
role in this shift, since it has forced Australians «to rethink “race relations” and the colonial past as

29
   Ibid. 152.
30
   CARTMELL – WHELEHAN (2007, 87f.). For further investigation on transcultural transposition see FOSTER (1999);
DENNISON – HWEE (2006); HEFFELFINGER – WRIGHT (2011).
31
   FAIRWEATHER (2007, 49). Emphasis added.
32
   According to Lawrence «Australia is an odd country; in the small towns like Jindabyne people are surrounded by the
landscape and are clinging to each other in order to survive. […] The sense of isolation really affects people» (ibid. 48).
33
   COLLINS – DAVIS (2004, 3).
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integral […] to a morally illegitimate national identity»34. As Felicity Collins and Therese Davis
opportunely point out:

        Racist assumptions about Aboriginal culture provided the basis for the continued non-
        recognition of Indigenous ownership of the land. […] Despite a history of Indigenous resistance
        to dispossession, supported at different times in the nation’s past by a number of non-
        Indigenous Australians, the story of the nation’s origin, in the occupation of land belonging to
        no one, remained intact until the High Court’s Mabo decision in 1992. This landmark legal
        decision to recognize the pre-existing property rights of Indigenous Australians created shock-
        waves across the nation as non-Indigenous Australians were forced to confront the fiction of
        terra nullius. […] Events over the past decade have shown, however, that neither the Mabo
        decision nor its subsequent enactment has settled issues of land rights between Indigenous and
        non-Indigenous Australians. On the contrary, non-Indigenous Australians find themselves on
        unsettled ground as we come to terms with the fact that [Australian] democratic society has a
                    35
        serious flaw .

        The question of the Aboriginal land rights, then, has prevailed over the public scene as one of
the most important legal matters of the last few years, together with the problems concerning the
long process of reconciliation between white and Aboriginal people: it should be remembered that it
was only recently that the Australian Prime Minister apologized formally for the so-called Stolen
Generation36, the children of Australian Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander descent who, between
the end of the eighteenth and the second half of the nineteenth century, were removed from their
families by the Australian State government and church missions. In the “aftershock” of
colonialism, it is dramatically and palpably evident that the issue of unacknowledged loss and
discrimination has strongly defined Aboriginal experience: until a decade ago, Collins and Davis
explain, «Australians remain[ed] divided on a range of post-Mabo issues, including […] the legal
and financial implications of recognition of Indigenous Australians’ prior ownership and
sovereignty; the idea of collective blame and the need for an official apology for past injustices;
proposals for what the Howard government calls ‹practical reconciliation› […]»37.
        These discourses can shine light upon Lawrence’s adaptation and the specific way it
configures the conflictual relations within local communities in a small town of New South Wales
(a metonym for the nation as a whole)38. Drawing on Anthony Lambert and Catherine Simpson’s
conclusions about the engagement of the film with Australia’s past, we can argue that «as a starting


34
           Ibid.         4.       For          further       information         on         this       topic,    see
http://www.abs.gov.au/Ausstats/abs@.nsf/Previousproducts/1301.0Feature%20Article21995 (The Mabo Case and the
Native Title Act, Australian Bureau of Statistics).
35
   Ibid.
36
   On 13 February 2008 the Prime Minister Kevin Rudd has offered a public apology to all the Australian Aboriginal
people and to the Stolen Generations. The full text of Rudd’s parliamentary statement is retrievable at:
http://australia.gov.au/about-australia/our-country/our-people/apology-to-australias-indigenous-peoples (Apology to
Australia’s Indigenous People).
37
   COLLINS – DAVIS (2004, 4f.).
38
   Cf. LAMBERT – SIMPSON (2008).
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point, a film such as Jindabyne invites us to work through the productive possibilities of
postcolonial haunting; to move from backtracking (going over old ground) to imaginative backfill
(where holes and gaps in the ground are refilled in unconventional and creative returns to the
past)»39.
        In Jindabyne, it is a series of “infringements” against the rules and beliefs of the Aborigines
that can be regarded as particularly emblematic in relation to the representational scope of the film,
where it has the function of surreptitiously anticipating the fraught relations between the white and
black community which is only later made explicit by girl’s murder and the failure to report it: «The
shift from dead white girl in Carver’s story to young Aboriginal woman», Lambert and Simpson
comment, «speaks of a political focus on the “significance” of the alpine region at a given moment
in time. The corpse functions “as the trigger for crisis and panic in an Australia after native title, the
stolen generation and the war-on-terror” […]. The process of reconnecting with country and history
must confront its ghosts if the community is to move forward. […] In the post-colonial,
multicultural but still divided geographies and cultures of Jindabyne, “genocidal displacement”
comes face to face with the “irreconciled relation” to land “that refuses to remain half-seen […] a
measure of non-indigenous failure to move from being on the land to being in country” […]»40.
        The first transgression comes at the very beginning of the film, when Stewart and his friends
choose to go fishing in a place sacred to the native people, who consider all waterholes and
waterways as focal points for various kinds of political and spiritual activity, and believe that
whoever crosses a water border without permission from a tribe member commits an act of
sacrilege which constitutes a threat to the integrity of the balance of the local population41. So in a
sense the men are actually re-enacting the crime previously committed by Gregory, which, though
consisting primarily in the universally abominable assault on the girl, is forcefully compounded by
the abandonment of her body (a body which, according to Lambert and Simpson, «bears the
semiotic weight of colonial atrocity and non-indigenous environmental development»)42 by the
river running through a sacred site, thereby destabilizing the equilibrium of the place and the tribe
guarding it.


39
   LAMBERT – SIMPSON (2008).
40
   Ibid.
41
   Aboriginal spirituality entails a close relationship between humans and the land they belong to. The land, according
to their traditions and beliefs, is a sort of objectification of their inner world and history, since it is from earth that any
community derives its sense of completeness and unity. In Aboriginal people’s geographical view, the entitlement to
places – which is explained by myths and common memories – affects also human identity, and it is not unusual that a
clan and the area it occupies share the same name. The sacrality ascribed to places stems from the belief that some of
the Aborigines’ ancestors metamorphosed into nature (as in rock formations or rivers), where they remain spiritually
alive, making the territory they walked on at the beginning of the world (the Dreaming or Dreamtime) a promised land
– real and mythic at the same time.
42
   LAMBERT – SIMPSON (2008).
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        The second transgression takes place when the discovery of the corpse is not followed by an
immediate report to the authorities. This causes an interruption of the journey the young woman’s
spirit must undertake in order to be eventually reunited with its natural environment. The rivers and
the mountains which constitute the background to the unfortunate fishing expedition are typical
passageways of this spiritual journey43. The men’s failure also prevents the girl’s relatives from
seeking solace in the traditional mourning practices which they use to express their sorrow for those
they have lost.
        Indeed, the spectator clearly perceives that a vague and uncanny presence drifts across the
valley («valley» is precisely what the word Jindabyne means) stretching out before the four friends;
this is hinted at by the director on the acoustic level, with both diegetic sounds (the strange
“buzzing” of the wires coming from the electricity poles sunk into the ground) and extradiegetic
sounds (the rich, evocative, music which helps to set the tone and the theme of the film, and serves
as a commentary on the scene sequences). Finally, it is hinted at on the visual level, in a short scene
where Billy momentarily turns away from the group to admire the extraordinary landscape, and
suddenly has the feeling that something, or rather someone, is spying on him («Dead is not dead»,
are the words spoken by one of the girl’s relatives soon after).
        The way in which the girl is killed is equally significant: as the consequence of a violent
action, death here cuts off human life before the body in which it resided has completed its natural
cycle of growth and decline, and for this reason it is felt to be a far more tragic event by the entire
community. The fatal drama which an early death signifies for the Aborigines would therefore also
help to explain the act carried out during the funeral by one of Susan’s relatives (possibly her
father), who grabs a fistful of that very earth that Stewart – and his colonizing ancestors before him
– have so carelessly desecrated, and throws it in his face. The gesture which the elderly member of
the community uses here to convey his sorrow and repulsion at the whites’ behavior might also
appear to echo a common Aboriginal ritual in which the men held responsible for someone’s death
– which, according to native tradition, never depends on purely natural causes – are publicly
accused and punished44.



43
   According to Aboriginal beliefs, every spirit sets off on a worldly voyage before returning to the sky, after which is
falls down again to the earth in the shape of shooting stars, as «new souls and new people». This is the explanation of-
fered by Dean Freeman and Rod Mason, the two indigenous consultants Lawrence avails of during the shooting of the
film.
44
   Françoise Dussart explains that «the accusation of murder is commonly cried out in these events even in the case of
an old man’s death» (DUSSART 2000, 73). Even the fact that the white men talk about the girl and remember her unhap-
py fate represents, according to Aboriginal rules, another kind of transgression. In fact, «[the] discussion of the de-
ceased, especially in close temporal proximity to actual death, may jeopardize the reintegration of the deceased’s spirit
into the ancestral country whence it came. The “unnatural” and even murderous nature of death weakens all around it»
(ibid.).
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        The predominant topics of the film are marked out by a strong metaphorical investment. Both
Carver and Lawrence, for instance, concentrate the text’s underlying symbolic structure on the
water imagery. In Jindabyne this is predictably translated in a manner which takes advantage of the
means provided by the cinematic apparatus – it employs, for example, the topological, chromatic
and eidetic components of an allusive, but also immediate ostension – while in SMW the water
element, the obsessive reiteration of which is easily demonstrated by an accurate lexical analysis of
the short story, incisively conveys the floating of the protagonist’s self:

        I look at the creek. I float toward the pond, eyes open, face down, staring at the rocks and moss
        on the creek bottom until I am carried into the lake where I am pushed by the breeze (Carver
        2009, 120).

        I can hear the river somewhere down below the trees (ibid. 129).

        I close my eyes and remember [Susan’s] picture in the newspaper and on television. I see her
        leaving the theatre and getting into the green Chevrolet. Then I imagine her journey down the
        river, the nude body hitting rocks, caught at by branches, the body floating and turning, her hair
        streaming in the water (ibid. 130).

        Although associated with death, water is not a chaotic and destructive force, but rather the
means though which unsettling though enlightening truths come to the fore, both in the external
world (where the emerging of Susan’s corpse attests to the compulsive repetition of violence within
the community), and in Claire’s inner world (where repressed memories and feelings progressively
emerge).
        The short story’s adaptation preserves the idea of a surface which distinguishes the visible
from the invisible and the knowable from the unknowable, but it transforms water into a
metaphorical isotopy with social, historical, political and mythic connotations. In Jindabyne the
aquatic element and the constant reference to the existence of a submerged life become a haunting
metaphor of the secrets hidden under the illusory surface of daily life (social isotopy)45 and of a past
which reveals itself through the present (mythic-symbolic isotopy), but is still invisible, like the
Aboriginals are too much of the white (historical-political isotopy).
        The history of the submerged city, as the film’s screenwriter Beatrix Christian explains46,
suggests the imperfect correspondence between external changes (the city’s reconstruction) and
internal changes (customs and racial biases) as well as the impossibility of escaping from History

45
   According to Algirdas Greimas’s well-known definition, an isotopy is the iteration of a unit of language (the seme)
which is part of a signified. On the textual level isotopies, like the semes they are based upon, function to create frame-
works of signification which may be classified as figurative, thematic or axiological. Cf. GREIMAS – COURTÉS (1979,
197ff.).
46
   In the 1960s the city was intentionally flooded, and its ruins remained from then on in the bottom of the lake which
had formed. The history of Jindabyne is recalled in one of the last sequences of the film, where Stewart explains to his
son that the clock which has got entangled in his fishing rod while he was fishing belongs to another world, buried un-
der the lake.
Annali Online di Ferrara - Lettere                                                                                P. Cecconi
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(the old city/the crimes of the colonial past), whose truths – only seemingly concealed beneath mud
and rock – may reappear on the surface, like the old clock which Stewart mistakenly fishes out of
the lake and which represents the remains of a past that the mere passing of time cannot entirely
erase.
         As in SMW, water is also an implicit reminder of Claire’s mental and physical condition.
Firstly, as a mark of how she fluctuates between her desire to admit to herself the limits and the
problems which assail her marriage and the passivity which has become habitual47. Secondly,
because in Jindabyne her character comes to represent the liminal condition of someone who,
though belonging to a community, does not share its opinions and allows herself be guided by the
firm desire to establish a dialogue with the people towards whom she feels she owes a debt and
whose forgiveness she has to ask («[she wants] to stay connected to the people»).
         Thirdly, water functions as a nearly concealed hint at Claire’s pregnancy: water as amniotic
fluid where the foetus floats. This symbol fans out to include both her first difficult and
destabilizing pregnancy, and a second, undesired, pregnancy, which she realizes she has to face up
to in the course of the film. The birth of her first child, we learn, was followed by her abandonment
of her family, in whose eyes she is now desperately trying to “redeem” herself.
         If water performs a structuring function as a symbol of cyclicity and of the ineluctable
repetition of History, the principle of binary opposition observable in the contrast between
electricity and nature underlies a series of fundamental antithetic relations (good vs. evil, whites vs.
Aborigines, past vs. present). These, working hand in hand with the water trope, contribute to the
enlargement of the film’s imaginative spectrum.
         Lawrence makes electricity into an instrument of death and destruction. In fact, we discover
early on in Jindabyne that Gregory, who embodies the prejudices of the whole community48, is an
electrician, and as such is linked to the transformation of nature (a visual marker of this is the
hydroelectric power station that has replaced the ancient town settlement, thereby modifying the
original outlay of a territory held sacred by the Aborigines): it is in him, and in all the heirs of the
imperialistic policy which inspired the colonization of the continent, that we find the symbol of a
cruel “white” nature, and its attempt to dominate the indomitable “black” nature of the Aborigines.
         This metaphorical line is the same that presides over the aforementioned scene in which the
friends arrive at the river. Here Billy – the youngest member of the group, and therefore the most
susceptible to the sublime beauty of the surrounding land and the least “accustomed” to the human

47
   From a visual point of view, the floating of Claire’s inner self concretizes visually – prefiguring inter alia her subse-
quent identification with Susan – in the scene which shows her in bed in the same position Stewart finds the girl’s body.
48
   Even the man’s physical and kinetic features (threatening glance, shabby and coarse appearance, markedly abrupt
gestural expressiveness), contribute to give rise to a series of formants with the eminent meaning “danger” and “nega-
tivity”.
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manipulation perpetrated by the white settlers on Australian uncontaminated territories – stops to
linger with his eyes over the landscape. He is suddenly distracted from this activity and turns to
look at the electric power lines, which are portrayed as an epitome of the conflict between man
(progress/order/rule over the untamable) and nature (chaos/the untamable), between sacred
(Aboriginal culture) and profane (the culture of the white people), and between past and present.
        Finally, in the film’s editing process, Lawrence established a disquieting parallelism between
men and animals, whose images intrude from the very beginning. This specific trope is regularly
employed by the director to reinforce the idea of the Aborigines’ subordination and helplessness.
Instances of this may be detected in the scene in which Claire’s son Tom and his friend, Calandria,
are shown killing the class guinea pig and a helpless bird, which functions as a sort of small-scale
repetition of the crime with which the whites have soiled their hands.
        This crime, exemplified by the coldness and the indolence towards the life of other human
beings, is also the subtext of a close-up of Stewart during a fishing scene, which shows him intent
on observing something revealed by the following shot to be a dying fish thrown onto the riverbank
(nobody cares about its life, just as nobody has cared about Susan’s).
        Also, in Jindabyne’s final scene Gregory, shown once again lying in wait for a new victim,
crushes with impunity a wasp, which both tropologically and narratologically enacts the
connections between the first scene and the last: indeed the animal may be another possible
reference to Susan’s presence, because it recalls the scene of her discovery, where a furtive shot
lingers over a wasps’ nest on a tree near the river (we should also remember that, according to
Aboriginal beliefs, animals may serve as stand-ins for humans or human characteristics).
        These last images, where the symbolic correspondence between Aborigines and the natural
world becomes so pointed, cast a shadow over the positive implications of the funeral’s smoking-
out ceremony49 by hinting that the order which now seems restored to the community is
circumscribed to this small group of people, who consequently are subjected to this bitter
segregation. The epilogue of Jindabyne is highly polysemic and lends itself to a wide set of possible
interpretations:

        1) the natural world (the wasp) continues to claim control over men, who represent artificial
             power (electricity) and the ability to exploit the environment in order to conceal the
             crimes they have committed (Gregory hides his victim’s body among the rocks);




49
  Aborigines believe that smoke has the ability to ward off evil spirits and to dissipate the misunderstandings which
overshadow men’s hearts by metaphorically dispersing them through the air.
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         2) the series of murders and violence is doomed to continue (racial determinism), thereby
             sanctioning the arduousness of the task of eradicating evil when it lurks beneath the
             surface of an ephemeral and delusive reality;
         3) the murderer, because he is still alive, reacts in the presence of the wasp, while the girl,
             who is dead, cannot prevent the insects from swarming over her body (murder vs. victim;
             life vs. death; power vs. helplessness; white man’s force vs. Aboriginal girl’s passivity);
         4) killing a potentially dangerous animal (the wasp) is just like killing another human being
             whom we consider detrimental to our society on account of his/her different culture,
             ethnic group or gender (the victim is a woman, an Aboriginal, and belongs to a
             community whose rites and beliefs are clearly different from those of the whites).

         Such a conclusion does not lead to aprioristically valid answers or interpretations. The veiled
but forceful overview of the problems which undermined and still undermine the relationships
between two communities who are compelled to share the same territory aims to give the spectator
a series of interpretative instruments which may be employed to look beyond the images on the
screen and understand the importance of tolerance and dialogue between cultures as a major
determinant of progress and communal growth.

Conclusions

The recurrent variations and insertions on kernel patterns detectable in Lawrence’s film show how
the shifts from Carver’s text may be taken to signal the working-out of a different and supplemen-
tary story, which is not necessarily the complement of the original one.
         The addition of “alien” elements to Carver’s ur-text is ipso facto ascribable to two specific
textual operations that the very nature of the source text makes possible: amplification and metadie-
getic insertion. Jindabyne realizes amplification by means of a diegetic expansion, that is by means
of a distension of details and descriptions (the attention devoted to details depends more on the very
potentialities of the visual medium, than on a series of verbal items to which the literary text is natu-
rally bound up), the multiplication of episodes and secondary characters, and finally the dramatiza-
tion of an adventure hardly dramatic in itself (in the case in point the drama of incommunicability
within the couple and the family evolves into the drama of the whole community). The metadiegetic
insertions, described as «episodes that are extraneous to the initial theme»50, concur in expanding
the narration and fostering the thematic resonance of elements such as the interaction between



50
     GENETTE (1997, 264).
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whites and the aborigines (postcolonial theme), which constitutes the fundamental deviation from
the short story51.
         As we have seen, it is the structural and content change of the story’s ending, which is
accompanied by the insertion of a first cinematic movement functional to the contextualization of
the events, that affects in a symptomatic way the relation the film has with the short story.
         In SMW the text gravitates principally towards Claire’s quest and her tireless attempt to find
out the causes of her family unit’s disintegration, so that the tragic happenings by the river,
highlighting Stuart’s emotional apathy, inaugurate a process shared by many of Carver’s female
characters, who – just like Claire – «start achieving an amount of control over their lives as violence
seems to move them from one phase to another in the direction they wish to be going»52.
         In Jindabyne, on the contrary, Claire’s mental and physical captivity carries a different weight
when considered in the background of the drama which has upset the whole town and deteriorated
the relations with the Aboriginal community. This is especially clear if we consider the penultimate
sequence of the film, where her character loses the leading role she plays in the short story to take
part in a choral scene of mutual understanding and forgiveness (between her and Stuart, and
between whites and aborigines).
         The story pattern, according to the reading I have put forward, seems to follow an iter so
structured:

         1) harmony: the family unit appears to be close-knit, Claire’s breakdown does not seem to
             have affected her marriage;
         2) breaking point: the outburst of violence within the community and the emerging bias
             against the natives highlight the selfishness and callousness of others;
         3) attempt to smooth out differences and reconstitute the initial harmony: on the one hand,
             Claire strives for communicating with Stewart, on the other for begging Susan’s relatives’
             – and, in extenso, the whole Aboriginal community’s – forgiveness;
         4) removal of the destructive forces which shattered the initial harmony: Claire does not
             leave Stewart, and the community accepts the culprits’ apologies;
         5) restoration of harmony: by the end of the film, with the smoking scene, we are led to
             believe that new possibilities open up for the characters implicated in the story.

         We can assume, then, that the macroscopic difference with respect to the ending of SMW,
where Lawrence sees «a lack of compassion», depends on the chronological gap which separates


51
     Ibid. 307-34.
52
     KLEPPE (2006, 109).
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the source text from its adaptation («[the short story] was written thirty years ago [when] men were
different back then»), which could even give reasons for a higher degree of confidence in the
human capability of, metaphorically speaking, curing the wounds men have inflicted one another
(«I would like to think that men have changed a bit; I wanted to expand the moral dilemma and
balance that with the entertainment aspect»)53.
        Finally, an additional digression is required by the shifting of the story’s setting from the
American Northwest province to the suggestive backdrops of another continent, which Lawrence –
who was born in England but grew up in Australia since he was eight – portrays with great
familiarity and transport. The space the characters move along is charged, both in SMW and
Jindabyne, of a semantic pregnancy which is worth analyzing: as often happens in Carver’s short
stories, Claire and Stuart are described within the claustrophobic domestic environment, which
represents a sort of objective correlative of the family duties and habits bearing notoriously on
women54.
        Claire’s liberation from the familiar stagnation and entropy seems to occur only when she
turns from the confines of domesticity. As matter of fact, it is in all those places characterized by a
sort of “otherness” in comparison with the settings which reflect – according to traditional stereo-
types – her identity as a woman, a wife and a mother, that she becomes fully aware of her break-
down, her sense of estrangement from herself, and her sympathetic bond with Susan.
        To the breaking up of the sclerotic repetitiveness of Claire’s life concurs the murder’s double
image (a symbol itself of male brutality), together with the contact with the female “other” embod-
ied by Arlene/Susan (a figure that stands for female frailty), with whom she shares the condition of
helpless victim: the girl’s ghost, despite her absence, is a positive and liberating presence which sur-
reptitiously «affords new perspective or awareness to help [Claire] along, leading [her] at least
away from the confining strictures of [her] self»55.
        Therefore in the story the violence, callousness and selfishness peculiar to men’s macrocosm
is fatally reflected on the domestic microcosm, and the correspondence between Claire and the two
murdered girls’ condition allows the woman to recognize the limits of a marriage that her passivity
prevented her from calling into question.
        The film, though preserving the symbolism associated with the internal settings, gives the
landscape a deeper significance, imbuing it – as we shall see – with mythic and metaphoric
meanings.



53
   FAIRWEATHER (2007, 48).
54
   On this topic see NÍ ÉIGEARTAIGH (2009).
55
   NESSET (1995, 52).
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        Accounting for the way Jindabyne’s setting draws the attention to the story and its intrinsic
meaning, Kristi Mitsuda explains:

        As so often is the case in Australian cinema, the land quickly takes on a life of its own – most
        strikingly at the instant when Stewart […] discovers the now-dead girl’s body floating in the
        river. Awakening an acute consciousness of the physical environment, Lawrence imparts an
        impressive recognition of the pull the natural world exerts on individuals in a country defined
        by so much space. In doing so, he extends sympathetic understanding to the circle of men at the
        pivotal juncture56.

        The setting’s cinematic output, which plays a prominent role in the narrative and poetic
development of the film, attests at last its degree of emancipation from the source text and
Lawrence’s capacity for expressing and resemantizing some nuances of Carver’s story.
        We can finally argue that SMW is a story with firm staying power, in the same manner as
those living beings who «adapt better than others (through mutation) to an environment»57. The
robustness and longevity of the short story, depending as it does above all on the topicality of its
leading motifs and on the incisiveness of Carver’s style, does not prevent us, however, from
considering Lawrence’s film as an autonomous semiotic unit, which by virtue of its acquired
independence renders any debate about fidelity to the original text quite irrelevant.
        With the passage from one semiotic system (the literary text) to another (the cinematic text),
not only is there a change in the strategies resorted to by the film/hypertext to convey the source’s
content, but this manipulation also involves changing the short story/hypotext, which opens up to
interpretations that can be envisaged as full-scale resemantizations58.
        By suggesting an alternative system of values in those places where it re-writes a text from
the past, Jindabyne does not fruitlessly adhere to its textual precursor (or precursors, if we consider
the network of connections and intertextual references traceable on the diegetic level), but shows,
on the contrary, how originality can be engendered by creative “repetition” and by the autonomous
elaboration of pre-existent material. This material, as happens in all cinematic adaptations from a
literary text, combines the transposition of events/actions, characters and general narrative
characteristics, with

        the recomposition, carried out within the new expressive medium, of elements which eschew the
        components of mere narrativity, drawing instead on source materials of a different kind: for in-
        stance the setting, the photography […], the performance, the sound. These components […] al-


56
   MITSUDA (2006).
57
   HUTCHEON (2006, 167).
58
   As the technical devices adopted by Lawrence may already suggest, «a successful adaptation enters into a conversa-
tion with the original that animates the viewer’s pleasure in both works. The goal of adaptation is not only to rediscover
the prior text but also to find new ways of understanding it and to appropriate those meanings for the adaptors’ own
ends» (GERAGHTY 2007, 43).
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         so depend on other “sources”, which are singularly drawn during the translation process, and
         variously interpreted by the author of the target-text59.

         It seems reasonable to conclude that, even though the film never really interrupts an ongoing
dialogue with its literary legacy and, in particular, with Carver’s story, it eschews the interferences
generated by its intrinsic verbality and firmly configures itself as a new narration and a new
referential system60.


Pamela Cecconi
Università di Pisa
Dipartimento di Filologia, Letteratura e Linguistica
Via Galvani, 1
I – 56126 Pisa
cecconi41@interfree.it




59
     RUTELLI (2004, 81). Translation mine.
60
     AGARAY (2005, 92).
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