Chapter 7 What Paul Bourget thinks of us What Paul Bourget thinks of us. He reports the American joke correctly. In Boston they ask, How much does he know? In New York, how much is he worth? In Philadelphia, who were his parents? And when an alien observer turns his telescope upon us, advertisantly in our own special interest, a natural apprehension moves us to ask, What is the diameter of his reflector? I take a great interest in Monsieur Bourget's chapters, for I know by the newspapers that there are several Americans who are expecting to get a whole education out of them, several who foresaw and also foretold that our long night was over, and a light almost divine about to break upon the land. His utterances concerning us are bound to be weighty and well timed. He gives us an object lesson which should be thoughtfully and profitably studied. These well considered and important verdicts were of a nature to restore public confidence, which had been disquieted by questionings, as to whether so young a teacher would be qualified to take so large a class as seventy million, distributed over so extensive a schoolhouse as America, and pull it through without assistance. I was even disquieted myself, although I am of a cold, calm temperament and not easily disturbed. I feared for my country, and I was not wholly tranquilized by the verdicts rendered as above. It seemed to me that there was still room for doubt. In fact, in looking the ground over, I became more disturbed than I was before. Many worrying questions came up in my mind. Two were prominent. Where had the teacher gotten his equipment? What was his method? He had gotten his equipment in France. Then as to his method, I saw by his own intimations that he was an observer, and he had a system that used by naturalists and other scientists. The naturalist collects many bugs and reptiles and butterflies and studies their ways a long time patiently. By this means he is presently able to group these creatures into families and subdivisions of families by nice shadings of differences observable in their characters. Then he labels all those shaded bugs and things with nicely descriptive group names, and is now happy, for his great work is completed, and as a result he intimately knows every bug and shade of a bug there, inside and out. It may be true, but a person who was not a naturalist would feel safer about it if he had the opinion of the bug. I think it is a pleasant system, but subject to error. The observer of peoples has to be a classifier, a grouper, a deducer, a generaliser, a psychoanalyzer, and first and last, a thinker. He has to be all of these, and when he is at home observing his own folk, he is often able to prove competency. But history has shown that when he is abroad observing unfamiliar peoples, the chances are heavily against him. He is then a naturalist, observing a bug, with no more than a naturalist chance of being able to tell the bug anything new about itself, and no more than a naturalist chance of being able to teach it any new ways which it will prefer to its own. To return to that first question, Monsieur Bourget, as teacher, would simply be France teaching America. It seemed to me that the outlook was dark, almost Egyptian in fact. What would the new teacher representing France teach us? Railroading? No. France knows nothing valuable about railroading. Steam shipping? No. France has no superiority over us in that matter. Steam boating? No. French steam boating is still of Fulton's date, 1809. Postal service? No. France is a back number there. Telegraphy? No. We taught her that ourselves. Journalism? No. Magazineing? No. That is our own specialty. Government? No. Liberty, equality, fraternity, nobility, democracy, adultery—the system is too variegated for our climate. Religion? No. Not variegated enough for our climate. Morals? No. We cannot rob the poor to enrich ourselves. Novel writing? No. Monsieur Bourget and the others know only one plan, and when that is expurgated there is nothing left of the book. I wish I could think what he is going to teach us. Can it be deportment? But he experimented in that at Newport, and failed to give satisfaction, except to a few. Those few are pleased. They are enjoying their joy as well as they can. They confess their happiness to the interviewer. They feel pretty striped, but they remember with reverent recognition that they had sugar between the cuts. True sugar with sand in it, but sugar. And true, they had some trouble to tell which was sugar and which was sand, because the sugar itself looked just like the sand, and also had a gravelly taste. Still they knew that the sugar was there, and would have been very good sugar indeed if it had been screened. Yes, they are pleased. Not noisily so, but pleased. Strict or streaked, as one may say, with little recurrent shivers of joy. Subdued joy, so to speak, not the overdone kind. And they commune together these, and manage each other with comforting sailings, in a sweet spirit of resignation and thankfulness, mixing these elements in the same proportions as the sugar and the sand, as a memorial, and saying, the one to the other and to the interviewer, it was severe. Yes, it was bitterly severe. But oh, how true it was, and it will do us so much good. If it isn't deportment, it is left. It was at this point that I seemed to get on the right track at last. Monsieur Bourget would teach us to know ourselves. That was it. He would reveal us to ourselves. That would be an education. He would explain us to ourselves. Then we should understand ourselves, and after that be able to go on more intelligently. It seemed a doubtful scheme. He could explain us to himself. That would be easy. That would be the same as the naturalist explaining the bug to himself. But to explain the bug to the bug, that is quite a different matter. The bug may not know himself perfectly, but he knows himself better than the naturalist can know him at any rate. A foreigner can photograph the exteriors of a nation, but I think that that is as far as he can get. I think that no foreigner can report its interior, its soul, its life, its speech, its thought. I think that a knowledge of these things is acquirable in only one way, not two or four or six. Absorption Years and years of unconscious absorption. Years and years of intercourse with the life concerned. Of living it indeed. Sharing personally in its shames and prides, its joys and griefs, its loves and hates, its prosperities and reverses, its shows and shabbinesses, its deep patriotisms, its whirlwinds of political passion, its adorations of flag and heroic dead, and the glory of the national name. Observation of what real value is it? One learns peoples through the heart, not the eyes or the intellect. There is only one expert who is qualified to examine the souls and the life of a people and make a valuable report, the native novelist. This expert is so rare that the most populous country can never have fifteen conspicuously and confessedly competent ones in stock at one time. This native specialist is not qualified to begin work until he has been absorbing during twenty-five years. How much of his competency is derived from conscious observation? The amount is so slight that it counts for next to nothing in the equipment. Almost the whole capital of the novelist is the slow accumulation of unconscious observation. Absorption. The native expert's intentional observation of manners, speech, character and ways of life can have value, for the native knows what they mean without having to cipher out the meaning. But I should be astonished to see a foreigner get at the right meanings, catch the elusive shades of these subtle things. Even the native novelist becomes a foreigner, with a foreigner's limitations, when he steps from the state whose life is familiar to him into a state whose life he has not lived. Bret Hart got his California and his Californians by unconscious absorption and put both of them into his tales alive. But when he came from the Pacific to the Atlantic and tried to do Newport life from study, conscious observation, his failure was absolutely monumental. Newport is a disastrous place for the unacclimated observer, evidently. To return to novel building. Does the native novelist try to generalize the nation? No, he lays plainly before you the ways and speech and life of a few people grouped in a certain place, his own place, and that is one book. In time he and his brethren will report to you the life and the people of the whole nation, the life of a group in a New England village, in a New York village, in a Texan village, in an Oregon village, in villages in fifty states and territories, then the farm life in fifty states and territories, a hundred patches of life and groups of people in a dozen widely separated cities, and the Indians will be attended to, and the cowboys, and the gold and silver miners, and the Negroes, and the idiots and congressmen, and the Irish, the Germans, the Italians, the Swedes, the French, the Chinamen, the Greasers, and the Catholics, the Methodists, the Presbyterians, the Congregationalists, the Baptists, the Spiritualists, the Mormons, the Shakers, the Quakers, the Jews, the Campbellites, the Infidels, the Christian Scientists, the Mind Curists, the Faith Curists, the Train Robbers, the White Caps, the Moon Shiners, and when a thousand able novels have been written there you have the soul of the people, the life of the people, the speech of the people, and not anywhere else can these be had, and the shadings of character, manners, feelings, ambitions will be infinite. The nature of a people is always of a similar shade in its vices and its virtues, in its frivolities and in its labor. It is this physiognomy which it is necessary to discover, and every document is good, from the hall of a casino to the church, from the foibles of a fashionable woman, to the suggestions of a revolutionary leader. I am therefore quite sure that this American soul, the principal interest and the great object of my voyage, appears behind the records of Newport for those who choose to see it. Monsieur Paul Bourget. The italics are mine. It is a large contract which he has undertaken. Records is a pretty poor word there, but I think the use of it is due to hasty translation. In the original the word is fastes. I think Monsieur Bourget meant to suggest that he expected to find the great American soul secreted behind the ostentations of Newport, and that he was going to get it out and examine it and generalize it and psychologize it and make it reveal to him its hidden vast mystery the nature of the people of the United States of America. We have been accused of being a nation addicted to inventing wild schemes. I trust that we shall be allowed to retire to second place now. There isn't a single human characteristic that can be safely labeled American. There isn't a single human ambition or religious trend or drift of thought or peculiarity of education or code of principles or breed of folly or style of conversation or preference for a particular subject for discussion or form of legs or trunk or head or face or expression or complexion or gate or dress or manners or disposition or any other human detail inside or outside that can rationally be generalized as American. Whenever you have found what seems to be an American peculiarity you have only to cross a frontier or two or go down or up in the social scale and you perceive that it has disappeared. And you can cross the Atlantic and find it again. There may be a Newport religious drift or sporting drift or conversational style or complexion or cut of face. But there are entire empires in America, North, South, East and West where you could not find your duplicates. It is the same as in the United States. It is the same with everything else which one might propose to call American. Mr. Bourget thinks he has found the American Coquette. If he had really found her he would also have found, I am sure, that she was not new, that she exists in other lands in the same forms and with the same frivolous heart and the same ways and impulses. I think this because I have seen our Coquette. I have seen her in life. Better still I have seen her in our novels and seen her twin in foreign novels. I wish Mr. Bourget had seen ours. He thought he saw her and so he applied his system to her. She was a species so he gathered a number of samples of what seemed to be her and put them under his glass and divided them into groups which he calls types and labeled them in his usual scientific way with formulas, brief sharp descriptive flashes that make a person blink sometimes, they are so sudden and vivid. As a rule they are pretty far fetched but that is not an important matter. They surprise, they compel admiration and I notice by some of the comments which his efforts have called forth that they deceive the unwary. Here are a few of the Coquette variants which he has grouped and labeled. The collector, the equilibrary, the professional beauty, the bluffer, the girl boy. If he had stopped with describing these characters we should have been obliged to believe that they exist, that they exist and that he has seen them and spoken with them but he did not stop there. He went further and furnished to us light throwing samples of their behavior and also light throwing samples of their speeches. He entered those things in his notebook without suspicion. He takes them out and delivers them to the world with a candor and simplicity which show that he believed them genuine. They throw all together too much light. They reveal to the native the origin of his find. I suppose he knows how he came to make that novel and captivating discovery by this time. If he does not any American can tell him, any American to whom he will show his anecdotes, it was put up on him as we say. It was a jest to be plain. It was a series of frauds. To my mind it was a poor sort of jest, witless and contemptible. The players of it have their reward such as it is. They have exhibited the fact that whatever they may be they are not ladies. Monsieur Bourget did not discover a type of coquette. He merely discovered a type of practical joker. One may say the type of practical joker for these people are exactly alike all over the world. Their equipment is always the same. A vulgar mind, a poor art of wit, a cruel disposition as a rule, and always the spirit of treachery. In his chapter four, Monsieur Bourget has two or three columns, gravely devoted to the collating and examining and psychologizing of these sorry little frauds. One is not moved to laugh. There is nothing funny in the situation. It is only pathetic. The stranger gave those people his confidence and they dishonorably treated him in return. But one must be allowed to suspect that Monsieur Bourget was a little to blame himself.  He has to exercise some degree of sagacity in selecting his prey if he would save himself from getting into trouble. In my time I have seldom seen such daring things marketed at any price as these conscious-less folk have worked off at par on this confiding observer. It compels the conviction that there was something about him that bred in those speculators a quite unusual sense of safety and encourage them to strain their powers in his behalf. They seem to have satisfied themselves that all he wanted was significant facts, and that he was not accustomed to examine the source once they proceeded. It is plain that there was a sort of conspiracy against him almost from the start of his life. It is plain that there was a conspiracy against him almost from the start. A conspiracy to freight him up with all the strange extravagances those people's decayed brains could invent. The lengths to which they went are next to incredible. They told him things which surely would have excited anyone else's suspicion, but they did not excite his. Consider this. There is not in all the United States an entirely nude statue. If an angel should come down and say such a thing about heaven, a reasonably cautious observer would take that angel's number and inquire a little further before he added it to his catch. What does the present observer do? Adds it. Adds it at once. Adds it and labels it with this innocent comment. This small fact is strangely significant. It does seem to me that this kind of observing is defective. Here is another curiosity which some liberal person made him a present of. I should think it ought to have disturbed the deep slumber of his suspicion a little, but it didn't. It was a note from a fog-horn for strenuousness, it seems to me, but the doomed voyager did not catch it. If he had but caught it, it would have saved him from several disasters. If the American knows that you are traveling to take notes, he is interested in it, and at the same time rejoices in it as in a tribute. Again this is defective observation. It is human to like to be praised. One can even notice it in the French. But it is not human to like to be ridiculed, even when it comes in the form of a tribute. I think a little psychologizing ought to have come in there. Something like this. A dog does not like to be ridiculed. A red-skinned does not like to be ridiculed. A negro does not like to be ridiculed. A Chinaman does not like to be ridiculed. Let us deduce from these significant facts this formula. The American's grade being higher than these, and the chain of argument stretching unbroken all the way up to him, there is room for suspicion that the person who said the American likes to be ridiculed, and regards it as a tribute, is not a capable observer. I feel persuaded that in the matter of psychologizing a professional is too apt to yield to the fascination of the loftier regions of that great art to the neglect of its lowlier walks. Every now and then, at half-hour intervals, Mr. Bourget collects a hat full of airy inaccuracies, and dissolves them in a pan full of absorted abstractions, and runs the charge into a mould, and turns you out a compact principle which will explain an American girl or an American woman, or why new people yearn for old things, or any other impossible riddle which a person wants answered. It seems to be conceded that there are a few human peculiarities that can be generalized and located here and there in the world, and named by the name of the nation where they are found. I wonder what they are. Perhaps one of them is temperament. One speaks of French vivacity, and German gravity, and English stubbornness. There is no American temperament. The nearest that one can come at it is to say there are two, the composed northern and the impetuous southern, and both are found in other countries. Morals? Purity of women may fairly be called universal interests, but that is the case in some other countries. We have no monopoly of it. It cannot be named American. I think that there is but a single specialty with us, only one thing that can be called by the wide name American. That is the national devotion to ice water. All Germans drink beer, but the British nation drinks beer too. So neither of those peoples is the beer drinking nation. I suppose we do stand alone in having a drink that nobody likes but ourselves. When we have been a month in Europe we lose our craving for it, and we finally tell the hotel folk that they needn't provide it any more. Yet we hardly touch our native shore again winter or summer before we are eager for it. The reasons for this state of things have not been psychologized yet. I drop the hint and say no more. It is my belief that there are some national traits and things scattered about the world that are mere superstitions, frauds that have lived so long that they have the solid look of facts. One of them is the dogma that the French are the only chaste people in the world. Ever since I arrived in France this last time I have been accumulating doubts about that, and before I leave this sunny land again I will gather in a few random statistics and psychologize the plausibilities out of it. If people are to come over to America and find fault with our girls and our women and psychologize every little thing they do and try to teach them how to behave and how to cultivate themselves up to where one cannot tell them from the French model, I intend to find out whether those missionaries are qualified or not. A nation ought always to examine into this detail before engaging the teacher for good. This last one has let fall a remark which renewed those doubts of mine when I read it. In our high Parisian existence for instance we find applied to arts and luxury and to debauchery all the powers and all the weaknesses of the French soul. You see it amounts to a trade with the French soul, a profession, a science, the serious business of life so to speak in our high Parisian existence. I do not quite like the look of it. I question if it can be taught with profit in our country, except of course to those pathetic neglected minds that are waiting there so yearningly for the education which Monsieur Bourget is going to furnish them from the serene summits of our high Parisian life. I spoke a moment ago of the existence of some superstitions that have been parading the world as facts this long time. For instance, consider the dollar. The world seems to think that the love of money is American and that the mad desire to get suddenly rich is American. I believe that both of these things are merely and broadly human, not American monopolies at all. The love of money is natural to all nations, for money is a good and strong friend. I think that this love has existed everywhere ever since the Bible called it the root of all evil. I think that the reason why we Americans seem to be so addicted to trying to get rich suddenly is merely because the opportunity to make promising efforts in that direction has offered itself to us with a frequency out of all proportion to the European experience. For eighty years this opportunity has been offering itself in one new town or region after another straight westward, step by step all the way from the Atlantic Coast to the Pacific. When a mechanic could buy ten town lots on tolerably long credit for ten months' savings out of his wages and reasonably expect to sell them in a couple of years for ten times what he gave for them, it was human for him to try the venture and he did it no matter what his nationality was. He would have done it in Europe or China if he had had the same chance. In the flush times in the silver regions a cook or any other humble worker stood a very good chance to get rich out of a trifle of money risked in a stock deal and that person promptly took that risk no matter what his or her nationality might be. I was there and I saw it. But these opportunities have not been plenty in our southern states. So there you have a prodigious region where the rush for sudden wealth is almost an unknown thing and has been from the beginning. Europe has offered few opportunities for poor Tom, Dick and Harry, but when she has offered one there has been no noticeable difference between European eagerness and American. England saw this in the wild days of the railroad king. France saw it in 1720, time of law and the Mississippi bubble. I am sure I have never seen in the gold and silver mines any madness, fury, frenzy to get suddenly rich which was even remotely comparable to that which raged in France in the bubble day. If I had a cyclopedia here I could turn to that memorable case and satisfy nearly anybody that the hunger for the sudden dollar is no more American than it is French. And if I could furnish an American opportunity to staid Germany I think I could wake her up like a house of fire. But I must return to the generalizations, psychologizing deductions. When Monsieur Bourget is exploiting these arts it is then that he is peculiarly and particularly himself. His ways are wholly original when he encounters a trait or a custom which is new to him. Another person would merely examine the find, verify it, estimate its value and let it go. But that is not sufficient for Monsieur Bourget. He always wants to know why that thing exists. He wants to know how it came to happen. And he will not let go of it until he has found out. And in every instance he will find that reason where no one but himself would have thought of looking for it. He does not seem to care for a reason that is not picturesquely located. One might almost say picturesquely and impossibly located. He found out that in America men do not try to hunt down young married women. At once, as usual, he wanted to know why. Anyone could have told him. He could have divined it by the lights thrown by the novels of the country. But no, he preferred to find out for himself. He has a trustfulness as regards men and facts which is fine and unusual. He is not particular about the source of a fact. He is not particular about the character and standing of the fact itself. But when it comes to pounding out the reason for the existence of the fact, he will trust no one but himself. In the present instance here was his fact. American young married women are not pursued by the corruptor. And here was the question. What is it that protects her? It seems quite unlikely that that problem could have offered difficulties to any but a trained philosopher. Nearly any person would have said to Monsieur Bourget, oh, that is very simple. It is very seldom in America that a marriage is made on a commercial basis. Our marriages, from the beginning, have been made for love. And where love is, there is no room for the corruptor. Now it is interesting to see the formidable way in which Monsieur Bourget went at that poor, humble little thing. He moved upon it in column, three columns, and with artillery. Two reasons of a very different kind explain that fact. And now that I have got so far, I am almost afraid to say what his two reasons are, lest I be charged with inventing them. But I will not retreat now. I will condense them and print them, giving my word that I am honest and not trying to deceive anyone. One. Young married women are protected from the approaches of the seducer in New England and vicinity by the diluted remains of a prudence created by a Puritan law of two hundred years ago, which for a while punished adultery with death. Two. And young married women of the other forty or fifty states are protected by laws which afford extraordinary facilities for divorce. If I have not lost my mind, I have accurately conveyed those two Vesuvian eruptions of philosophy. But the reader can consult chapter four of Utremer and decide for himself. Let us examine this paralyzing deduction or explanation by the light of a few sane facts. One. This universality of protection has existed in our country from the beginning, before the death penalty existed in New England and during all the generations that have dragged by since it was annulled. Two. Extraordinary facilities for divorce are of such recent creation that any middle-aged American can remember a time when such things had not yet been thought of. Let us suppose that the first easy divorce law went into effect forty years ago and got noised around and fairly started in business thirty-five years ago when we had say twenty-five million of white population. Let us suppose that among five million of them the young married women were protected by the surviving shutter of that ancient Puritan scare. What is Monsieur Bourget going to do about those who lived among the twenty million? They were clean in their morals, they were pure, yet there was no easy divorce law to protect them. A while ago I said that Monsieur Bourget's method of truth-seeking, hunting for it in out-of-the-way places, was new. But that was an error. I remember that when the Verrière discovered the Milky Way he and the other astronomers began to theorize about it in substantially the same fashion which Monsieur Bourget employs in his reasonings about American social facts and their origin. The Verrière advanced the hypothesis that the Milky Way was caused by gaseous protoplasmic emanations from the field of Waterloo which ascending to an altitude determinable by their own specific gravity became luminous through the development and exposure by the natural processes of animal decay of the phosphorus contained in them. This theory was warmly complimented by Ptolemy who, however, after much thought and research, decided that he could not accept it as final. His own theory was that the Milky Way was an emigration of lightning bugs, and he supported and reinforced this theorem by the well-known fact that the locusts do like that in Egypt. Giordano Bruno also was outspoken in his praises of Verrière's important contribution to astronomical science and was at first inclined to regard it as conclusive. But later, conceiving it to be erroneous, he pronounced against it and advanced the hypothesis that the Milky Way was a detachment or core of stars which became arrested and held in Suspenso Suspenselon by refraction of gravitation while on the march to join their several constellations, a proposition for which he was afterwards burned at the stake in Jacksonville, Illinois. These were all brilliant and picturesque theories and each was received with enthusiasm by the scientific world. But when a New England farmer who was not a thinker, but only a plain sort of person who tried to account for large facts in simple ways came out with the opinion that the Milky Way was just common, ordinary stars, and was put where it was because God wanted to have it so. The admirable idea fell perfectly flat. As a literary artist, Monsieur Bourget is as fresh and striking as he is as a scientific one. He says, above all I do not believe much in anecdotes. Why? In history they are all false. A sufficiently broad statement. In literature all libelous. Also a sufficiently sweeping statement coming from a critic who notes that we are a people who are peculiarly extravagant in our language. And when it is a matter of social life, almost all biased. It seems to amount to stultification almost. He has built two or three breeds of American coquettes out of anecdotes, mainly biased ones, I suppose, and as they occur in literature furnished by his pen they must be all libelous. Or did he mean not in literature or anecdotes about literature or literary people? I am not able to answer that. Perhaps the original would be clearer. But I have only the translation of this installment by me. I think the remark had an intention. Also that this intention was booked for the trip. But that either in the hurry of the remark's departure it got left, or in the confusion of changing cars at the translator's frontier it got sidetracked. But on the other hand I believe in statistics. And those on divorces appear to me to be most conclusive. And he sets himself the task of explaining, in a couple of columns, the process by which easy divorce conceived, invented, originated, developed and perfected an empire embracing condition of sexual purity in the States. In forty years. No, he doesn't state the interval. With all his passion for statistics he forgot to ask how long it took to produce this gigantic miracle. I have followed his pleasant but devious trail through those columns, but I was not able to get hold of his argument and find out what it was. I was not even able to find out where it left off. It seemed to gradually dissolve and flow off into other matters. I followed it with interest, for I was anxious to learn how easy divorce eradicated adultery in America. But I was disappointed. I have no idea yet how it did it. I only know it didn't. But that is not valuable. I knew it before. Well, humor is the great thing, the saving thing after all. The minute it crops up all our hardnesses yield, all our irritations and resentments flit away, and a sunny spirit takes their place. And so when Monsieur Bourget said that bright thing about our grandfathers, I broke all up. I remember exploding its American counter-mine once under that grand hero Napoleon. He was only First Consul then, and I was Consul General. For the United States, of course. But we were very intimate, notwithstanding the difference in rank, for I waived that. One day something offered the opening, and he said, Well, General, I suppose life can never get entirely dull to an American, because whenever he can't strike up any other way to put in his time, he can always get away with a few years trying to find out who his grandfather was. I fairly shouted, for I had never heard it sound better. And then I was back at him as quick as a flash. Write your Excellency! But I reckon a Frenchman's got his little standby for a dull time, too. Because when all other interests fail, he can turn in and see if he can't find out who his father was.  He reached up and hit me one on the shoulder, and says, Land, but it's good. It's immensely good. George, I never heard it said so good in my life before. Say it again! So I said it again, and he said his again, and I said mine again, and then he did, and then I did, and then he did, and we kept on doing it, and doing it, and I never had such a good time. And he said the same. In my opinion there isn't anything that is as killing as one of those dear old ripe pensioners, if you know how to snatch it out in a kind of a fresh sort of original way. But I wish M. Bourget had read more of our novels before he came. It is the only way to thoroughly understand a people. When I found I was coming to Paris, I read La Terre. End of Chapter 7 What Paul Bourget Thinks of Us The preceding squib was assailed in the North American Review, in an article entitled, Mark Twain and Paul Bourget, by Max Orrell.  The following little note is rejoinder to that article. It is possible that the position assumed here that M. Bourget dictated the Orrell article himself is untenable. You have every right, my dear M. Bourget, to retort upon me by dictation, if you prefer that method to writing at me with your pen, but if I may say it without hurt, and certainly I mean no offense, I believe you would have acquitted yourself better with the pen. With the pen you are at home. It is your natural weapon. You use it with grace, eloquence, charm, persuasiveness, when men are to be convinced and with formidable effect when they have earned a castigation. But I am sure I see signs in the above article that you are either unaccustomed to dictating or are out of practice. If you will reread it, you will notice yourself that it lacks definiteness, that it lacks purpose, that it lacks coherence, that it lacks a subject to talk about, that it is loose and wobbly, that it wanders around, that it loses itself early and does not find itself any more. There are some other defects, as you will notice, but I think I have named the main ones. I feel sure that they are all due to your lack of practice in dictating. In as much as you had not signed it, I had the impression at first that you had not dictated it, but only for a moment. Certain quite simple and definite facts reminded me that the article had to come from you for the reason that it could not come from any one else without a specific invitation from you or from me. I mean, it could not, except as an intrusion, a transgression of the law which forbids strangers to mix into a private dispute between friends unasked. Those simple and definite facts were these. I had published an article in this magazine with you for my subject, just you yourself. I stuck strictly to that one subject and did not interlard any other. No one, of course, could call me to account but you alone or your authorized representative. I asked some questions, asked them of myself, I answered them myself. My article was thirteen pages long and all devoted to you, devoted to you and divided up in this way. One page of guesses as to what subjects you would instruct us in as teacher, one page of doubts as to the effectiveness of your method of examining us and our ways, two or three pages of criticism of your method and of certain results which it furnished you, two or three pages of attempts to show the justness of these same criticisms, half a dozen pages made up of slight fault findings with certain minor details of your literary workmanship, of extracts from your outremer and comments upon them. Then I closed with an anecdote. I repeat for certain reasons that I closed with an anecdote. When I was asked by this magazine if I wished to answer a reply to that article of mine, I said yes and waited in Paris for the proof sheets of the reply to come. I already knew by the Cablegram that the reply would not be signed by you, but upon reflection I knew it would be dictated by you because no volunteer would feel himself at liberty to assume your championship in a private dispute unasked in view of the fact that you are quite well able to take care of your matters of that sort yourself and are not in need of anyone's help. No, a volunteer could not make such a venture. It would be too immodest, also too gratuitously generous and a shade too self-sufficient. No, he could not venture it. It would look too much like anxiety to get in at a feast where no plate had been provided for him. In fact, he could not get in at all except by the back way and with a false key, that is to say a pretext invented for the occasion by putting into my mouth words which I did not use and by resting sayings of mine from their plain and true meaning. Would he resort to methods like those to get in? No, there are no people of that kind. So then I knew for a certainty that you dictated the reply yourself.  Yet it would have been little trouble to you and a great kindness to me if you had written your reply all out with your own capable hand. Because then it would have replied, and that is really what a reply is for. Broadly speaking its function is to refute as you will easily concede. That leaves something for the other person to take hold of. He has a chance to reply to the reply. He has a chance to refute the refutation. This would have happened if you had written it out instead of dictating. Dictating is nearly sure to un-concentrate the dictator's mind when he is out of practice. Confuse him and betray him into using one set of literary rules when he ought to use a quite different set. Often it betrays him into employing the rules for conversation between a shouter and a deaf person, as in the present case, when he ought to employ the rules for conducting discussion with a fault finder. The great foundation rule and basic principle of discussion with a fault finder is relevancy and concentration upon the subject, or as the great foundation rule and basic principle governing conversation between a shouter and a deaf person is irrelevancy and persistent desertion of the topic in hand. If I may be allowed to illustrate by quoting example four, section seven, after chapter nine of revised rules for conducting conversation between a shouter and a deaf person, it will assist us in getting a clear idea of the difference between the two sets of rules. Shouter. Did you say his name is Weatherby? Deaf person. Change? Yes, I think it will, though, if it should clear off... Shouter. It's his name I want, his name! Deaf person. Maybe so, maybe so, but it will only be a shower, I think. Shouter. No, no, no! You have quite misunderstood me, if... Deaf person. Ah, good morning, I am sorry you must go, but call again and let me continue to be of assistance to you in every way I can. You see, it is a perfect codec of the article you have dictated. It is really curious and interesting when you come to compare it with yours in detail with my former article to which it is a reply in your hand.  I do not see how a person can act so. It is good of you to repeat with change of language in the bulk of your rejoinder so much of my own article and adopt my sentiments and make them over and put new buttons on and I like the compliment and am frank to say so, but agreeing with a person cripples controversy and ought not to be allowed. It is weather and of almost the worst sort. It pleases me greatly to hear you discourse with such approval and expansiveness upon my text. A foreigner can photograph the exteriors of a nation, but I think that is as far as he can get. I think that no foreigner can report its interior. And you say a man of average intelligence who has passed six months among a people cannot express opinions that are worth jotting down, but he can form impressions that are worth repeating. For my part, I think that foreigner's impressions are more interesting than native opinions. After all, such impressions merely mean how the country struck the foreigner, which is a quite clear way of saying that a foreigner's report is only valuable when it restricts itself to impressions. It pleases me to have you follow my lead in that glowing way, but it leaves me nothing to combat. You should give me something to deny and refute. I would do as much for you. It pleases me to have you playfully warn the public against taking one of your books seriously. When I published Jonathan and his Continent, I wrote in a preface addressed to Jonathan, if ever you should insist in seeing in this little volume a serious study of your country and your countrymen, I warn you that your worldwide fame for humor will be exploded. Because I used to do that cunning thing myself in earlier days. I did it in a prefatory note to a book of mine called Tom Sawyer. Notice, persons attempting to find a motive in this narrative will be prosecuted. Persons attempting to find a moral in it will be banished. Persons attempting to find a plot in it will be shot by order of the author, Per G. G. Chief of Ordnance. The Colonel is the same in both preferences, you see. The public must not take us too seriously. If we remove that Colonel, we remove the life principle. And the preface is a corpse. Yes, it pleases me to have you use that idea, for it is a high compliment. But it leaves me nothing to combat. And that is damage to me. Am I seeming to say that your reply is not a reply at all, Monsieur Bourget? If so, I must modify that. It is too sweeping. For you have furnished a general answer to my inquiry as to what France, through you, can teach us. What could France teach America? exclaims Mark Twain. France can teach America all the higher pursuits of life, and there is more artistic feeling and refinement in a street of French working men than in many avenues inhabited by American millionaires. She can teach her, and not perhaps how to work, but how to rest, how to live, how to be happy. She can teach her that the aim of life is not money making, but that money making is only a means to obtain an end. She can teach her that wives are not expensive toys, but useful partners, friends, and confidants, who should always keep men under their wholesome influence by their diplomacy, their tact, their common sense, without bumpiousness. These qualities added to the highest standard of morality, not angular and morose but cheerful morality, are conceded to French women by whoever knows something of French life outside of the Paris boulevards, and Mark Twain's ill-natured sneer cannot even so much as stain them. I might tell Mark Twain that in France a man who was seen tipsy in his club would immediately see his name cancelled from membership. A man who had settled his fortune on his wife to avoid meeting his creditors would be refused admission into any decent society. Many a French man has blown his brains out rather than declare himself a bankrupt. Now, would Mark Twain remark to this?  When a creditor stands in his way he closes his doors and reopens them the following day. When he has been a bankrupt three times he can retire from business. It is a good answer. It relates to manners, customs, and morals. Three things concerning which we can never have exhaustive and determinate statistics, and so the verdicts delivered upon them must always lack conclusiveness and be subject to revision. But you have stated the truth possibly as nearly as anyone could do it in the circumstances. But why did you choose a detail of my question which could be answered only with vague hearsay evidence and go right by one which could have been answered with deadly facts. Facts in everybody's reach. Facts which none can dispute. I asked what France could teach us about government. I laid myself pretty wide open there, and I thought I was handsomely generous too when I did it. France can teach us how to levy village and city taxes which distribute the burden with a nearer approach to perfect fairness than is the case in any other land. And she can teach us the wisest and surest system of collecting them that exists. She can teach us how to elect a president in a sane way, and also how to do it without throwing the country into earthquakes and convulsions that cripple and embarrass business, stir up party hatred in the hearts of men, and make peaceful people wish the term extended to 30 years. France can teach us, but enough of that part of the question. And what else can France teach us? She can teach us all the fine arts and does. She throws open her hospitable art academies and says to us, come, and we come, troops and troops of our young and gifted. And she sets over us the ablest masters in the world and bearing the greatest names. And she teaches us all that we are capable of learning and persuades us and encourages us with prizes and honors, much as if we were somehow children of her own. And when this noble education is finished and we are ready to carry it home and spread its gracious ministries abroad over our nation, and we come with homage and gratitude and ask France for the bill, there is nothing to pay. And in return for this imperial generosity, what does America do? She charges a duty on French works of art. I wish I had your end of this dispute. I should have something worth talking about. If you would only furnish me something to argue, something to refute, but you persistently won't. You leave good chances unutilized and spend your strength in proving and establishing unimportant things. For instance, you have proven and established these eight facts here following a good score as to number, but not worthwhile. Mark Twain is, one, insulting. Two, sarcastically speaking, this refined humorist. Three, prefers the manure pile to violence. Four, has uttered an ill-natured sneer. Five, is nasty. Six, needs a lesson in politeness and good manners. Seven, has published a nasty article. Eight, has made remarks unworthy of a gentleman. It is more funny than his, Mark Twain's, anecdote, and would have been less insulting. A quoted remark of mine is a gross insult to a nation friendly to America. He has read La Terre, this refined humorist. When Mark Twain visits a garden, he goes in the far away corner where the soil is prepared. Mark Twain's ill-natured sneer cannot so much as stain them. The French women. When he, Mark Twain, takes his revenge, he is unkind, unfair, bitter, nasty. But not even your nasty article on my country, Mark, etc. Mark might certainly have derived from it. Embourgé's book. A lesson in politeness and good manners. A quoted remark of mine is unworthy of a gentleman. These are all true, but really they are not valuable. No one cares much for such fines. In our American magazines we recognize this and suppress them. We avoid naming them. American writers never allow themselves to name them. It would look as if they were in a temper, and we hold that exhibitions of temper in public are not good form, except in the very young and inexperienced. And even if we had the disposition to name them in order to fill up a gap when we were short of ideas and arguments, our magazines would not allow us to do it, and we think that such words sully their pages. This present magazine is particularly strenuous about it. Its note to me announcing the forwarding of your proof sheets to France closed thus for your protection. It is needless to ask you to avoid anything that he might consider as personal. It was well enough as a measure of precaution, but it really was not needed. You can trust me implicitly, Monsieur Bourget. I shall never call you any names in print which I should be ashamed to call you with your unoffending and dearest ones present. Indeed, we are reserved and particular in America to a degree which you would consider exaggerated. For instance, we should not write notes like that one of yours to a lady for a small fault or a large one. When Monsieur Bourget indulges in a little chafing at the expense of the Americans, who can always get away with a few years trying to find out who their grandfathers were, he merely makes an allusion to an American foible. But, forsooth, what a kind man!  How the Americans of culture and refinement will admire him for thus speaking in their name! Snobbery! I could give Mark Twain an example of the American specimen. It is a pickwind story. I never published it because I feared my readers might think that I was giving them a typical illustration of American character instead of a rare exception. I was once booked by my manager to give a causerie in the drawing-room of a New York millionaire. I accepted with reluctance. I do not like private engagements. At five o'clock on the day the causerie was to be given, the lady sent to my manager to say that she would expect me to arrive at nine o'clock and to speak for about an hour. Then she wrote a post-script. Many women are unfortunate there. Their minds are full of afterthoughts, and the most important part of their letters is generally to be found after their signature. This lady's p.s. ran thus. I suppose he will not expect to be entertained after the lecture. I fairly shouted, as Mark Twain would say, and then indulging myself in a bit of snobbishness, I was back at her as quick as a flash. Dear Madam, as a literary man of some reputation I have many times had the pleasure of being entertained by the members of the old aristocracy of France. I have also many times had the pleasure of being entertained by the members of the old aristocracy of England. If it may interest you, I can even tell you that I have several times had the honour of being entertained by royalty. But my ambition has never been so wild as to expect that one day I might be entertained by the aristocracy of New York. No, I do not expect to be entertained by you, nor do I want you to expect me to entertain you and your friends tonight, for I decline to keep the engagement. Now I could fill a book on America with reminiscences of this sort, adding a few chapters on bosses and bootlers, on New York chronique scandalous, on the tenement houses of the large cities, on the gambling hells of Denver, and the dens of San Francisco and what not. But not even your nasty article on my country, Mark, will make me do it. We should not think in kind. No matter how much we might have associated with kings and nobilities, we should not think it right to crush her with it and make her ashamed of her lowlier walk in life, for we have a saying, who humiliates my mother, includes his own. Do I seriously imagine you to be the author of that strange letter, Monsieur Bourget? Indeed I do not. I believe it to have been surreptitiously inserted by your eminences when your back was turned. I think he did it with a good motive, expecting it to add force and pickancy to your article, but it does not reflect your nature, and I know it will grieve you when you see it. I also think he interlarded many other things, which you will disapprove of when you see them. I am certain that all the harsh names discharged at me come from him, not you. No doubt you could have proved me entitled to them with as little trouble as it has cost him to do it, but it would have been your disposition to hunt game of higher quality. Why, I even doubt if it is you who furnished me all that excellent information about Balzac and those others. Now the style of Monsieur Bourget and many other French writers is apparently a closed letter to Mark Twain, but let us leave that alone. Has he read Erkman Chatrion, Victor Hugo, Lamar Thien, Edmund Bout, Chapouli, Renault? Has he read Gustave Drogues, Monsieur Madame et bébé, and those books which leave for a long time a perfume about you? Has he read the novels of Alexandre Dumas, Eugene Sué, George Sand and Balzac? Has he read Victor Hugo's Les Miserables and Notre-Dame-de-Paris? Has he read or heard the plays of Sandeux, Augière, Dumas, and Sardin, the works of those titans of modern literature whose names will be household words all over the world for hundreds of years to come? He has read La Terre, this kind-hearted refined humorist. When Mark Twain visits the garden, does he smell the violets, the roses, the jasmine, or the honeysuckle? No, he goes in the faraway corner where the soil is prepared. Hear what he says. I wish Monsieur Paul Bourget had read more of our novels before he came. It is the only way to thoroughly understand a people. When I found I was coming to Paris, I read La Terre. All this in simple justice to you, and to me, for to gravely accept those interlardings as yours would be to wrong your head and heart, and at the same time convict myself of being equipped with a vacancy where my penetration ought to be lodged. And now, finally, I must uncover the secret pain the we saw from which the reply grew, the anecdote which closed my recent article, and consider how it is that this pimple has spread to these cancerous dimensions. If any but you had dictated the reply, Monsieur Bourget, I would know that that anecdote was twisted around and its intention magnified some hundreds of times in order that it might be used as a pretext to creep in the back way. But I accuse you of nothing, nothing but error. When you say that I retort by calling France a nation of bastards, it is an error, and not a small one, but a large one. I made no such remark nor anything resembling it. Moreover, the magazine would not have allowed me to use so gross a word as that. You told an anecdote—a funny one, I admit that. It hit a foible of our American aristocracy, and it stung me, I admit that. It stung me sharply. It was like this. You found some ancient portraits of French kings in the gallery of one of our aristocracy, and you said, He has the grand monarch, but where is the portrait of his grandfather? That is the American aristocrat's grandfather. Now that hits only a few of us, I grant, just the upper crust only, but it hits exceedingly hard. I wondered if there was any way of getting back at you. In one of your chapters I found this chance. In our high Parisian existence, for instance, we find applied to arts and luxury and to debauchery all the powers and all the weaknesses of the French soul. You see, your higher Parisian class, not everybody, not the nation, but only the top crust of the nation, applies to debauchery all the powers of its soul. I argued to myself that that energy must produce results, so I built an anecdote out of your remark. In it I make Napoleon Bonaparte say to me, but see for yourself the anecdote, ingeniously clipped and curtailed, in paragraph 11 of your reply, So I repeat, Mark Twain does not like Monsieur Paul Bourget's book, so long as he makes light fun of the great French writer, he is at home, he is pleasant, he is the American humorist we know. When he takes his revenge, and where is the reason for taking a revenge, he is unkind, unfair, bitter, nasty. For example, see his answer to a Frenchman who jokingly remarks to him, I suppose life can never get entirely dull to an American, because whenever he can't strike up any other way to put in his time, he can always get away with a few years trying to find out who his grandfather was. Here the answer. I reckon a Frenchman's got his little stand by for a dull time, too, because when all other interests fail, he can turn in and see if he can't find out who his father was. The first remark is a good-humored bit of chafing on American snobbery. I may be utterly destitute of humor, but I call the second remark a gratuitous charge of immorality hurled at the French women. A remark unworthy of a man who has the ear of the public, unworthy of a gentleman, a gross insult to a nation friendly to America, a nation that helped Mark Twain's ancestors in their struggle for liberty, a nation where today it is enough to say that you are American to see every door open wide to you. If Mark Twain was hard up in search of a French chestnut, I might have told him the following little anecdote. It is more funny than his, and would have been less insulting.  Ah, hold your tongue, says one. You ain't got no father.  I've got more fathers than you. Now then, your anecdote about the grandfathers hurt me. Why? Because it had point. It wouldn't have hurt me if it hadn't had point. You wouldn't have wasted space on it if it hadn't had point. My anecdote has hurt you. Why? Because it had point, I suppose. It wouldn't have hurt you if it hadn't had point. I judged from your remark about the diligence and industry of the high Parisian upper crust that it would have some point, but really I had no idea what a gold mine I had struck. I never suspected that the point was going to stick into the entire nation. But of course you know your nation better than I do, and if you think it punctures them all, I have to yield to your judgment. But you are to blame, your own self. Your remark misled me. I suppose the industry was confined to that little, unnumerous upper layer. Well, now that the unfortunate thing has been done, let us do what we can to undo it. There must be a way, Monsieur Bourget, and I am willing to do anything that will help, for I am as sorry as you can be yourself. I will tell you what I think will be the very thing. We will swap anecdotes. I will take your anecdote, and you take mine. I will say to the dukes and counts and princes of the ancient nobility of France, Ha ha! you must have a pretty hard time trying to find out who your grandfathers were. They will merely smile indifferently and not feel hurt because they can trace their lineage back through centuries. And you will hurl mine at every individual in the American nation saying, and you must have a pretty hard time trying to find out who your fathers were. They will merely smile indifferently and not feel hurt because they haven't any difficulty in finding their fathers. Do you get the idea? The whole harm in the anecdotes is in the point, you see. And when we swap them around that way, they haven't any. That settles it perfectly and beautifully, and I am glad I thought of it. I am very glad indeed, Monsieur Bourget, for it was just that little wee thing that caused the whole difficulty and made you dictate the reply, and your menuances call me all those hard names which the magazines dislike so. And I did it all in fun, too, trying to cap your funny anecdote with another one on the give-and-take principle, you know, which is American. I didn't know that with the French it was all give and no take, and you didn't tell me. Now that I have made everything comfortable again and fixed both anecdotes so they can never have any point any more, I know you will forgive me. End of Chapter 8 A Little Note to Monsieur Paul Bourget, read by John Greenman. Section 11 of How to Tell a Story and Other Essays by Mark Twain. I seem sixty and married, but these effects are due to my condition and sufferings, for I am a bachelor and only forty-one. It will be hard for you to believe that I, who am now but a shadow, was a hail hearty man two short years ago, a man of iron, a very athlete. Yet such is the simple truth. But stranger still than this fact is the way in which I lost my health. I lost it through helping to take care of a box of guns on a two-hundred-mile railway journey one winter's night. It is the actual truth, and I will tell you about it. I belong in Cleveland, Ohio. One winter's night, two years ago, I reached home just after dark, in a driving snowstorm, and the first thing I heard when I entered the house was that my dearest boyhood friend and schoolmate John B. Hackett had died the day before, and that his last utterance had been a desire that I would take his remains home to his poor old father and mother in Wisconsin. I was greatly shocked and grieved, but there was no time to waste in emotions. I must start at once. I took the card, marked Deacon Levi Hackett, Bethlehem, Wisconsin, and hurried off through the whistling storm to the railway station. Arrived there I found the long white pine box which had been described to me. I fastened the card to it with some tacks, saw it put safely aboard the express car, and then ran into the eating-room to provide myself with a sandwich and some cigars. When I returned presently, there was my coffin-box back again, apparently, and a young fellow examining around it with a card in his hands, and some tacks and a hammer. I was astonished and puzzled. He began to nail on his card, and I rushed out to the express car in a good deal of a state of mind to ask for an explanation. But no, there was my box all right in the express car. It hadn't been disturbed. The fact is that, without my suspecting it, a prodigious mistake had been made. I was carrying off a box of guns which that young fellow had come to the station to ship to a rifle company in Peoria, Illinois, and he had got my corpse. Just then the conductor sung out all aboard, and I jumped into the express car and got a comfortable seat on a bale of buckets. The express man was there, hard at work, a plain man of fifty with a simple, honest, good-natured face, and a breezy, practical heartiness in his general style. As the train moved off, a stranger skipped into the car and set a package of peculiarly mature and capable Limburger cheese on one end of my coffin-box—I mean my box of guns—that is to say, I know now that it was Limburger cheese, but at that time I never had heard of the article in my life, and, of course, was wholly ignorant of its character. Well, we sped through the wild night. The bitter storm raged on. A cheerless misery stole over me. My heart went down, down, down. The old express man made a brisk remark or two about the tempest and the arctic weather, slammed his sliding doors to and bolted them, closed his window down tight, and then went bustling round, here and there and yonder, setting things to rights, and all the time contentedly humming, sweet by and by, in a low tone and flatting a good deal. Presently I began to detect a most evil and searching odour stealing about on the frozen air. This depressed my spirit still more, because, of course, I attributed it to my poor departed friend. There was something infinitely saddening about his calling himself to my remembrance in this dumb, pathetic way, so it was hard to keep the tears back. Moreover it distressed me on the account of the old express man, who, I was afraid, might notice it. However he went humming tranquilly on and gave no sign, and for this I was grateful. Grateful, yes, but still uneasy. And soon I began to feel more and more uneasy every minute, for every minute that went by, that odour thickened up the more, and got to be more and more gamey and hard to stand. Presently having got things arranged to his satisfaction, the express man got some wood, and made up a tremendous fire in his stove. This distressed me more than I can tell, for I could not but feel that it was a mistake. I was sure that the effect would be deleterious upon my poor departed friend. Thompson, the express man's name was Thompson as I found out in the course of the night, now went poking around the car, stopping up whatever stray cracks he could find, remarking that it didn't make any difference what kind of a night it was outside, he calculated to make us comfortable anyway. I said nothing, but I believed he was not choosing the right way. Meantime he was humming to himself just as before, and meantime too the stove was getting hotter and hotter, and the place closer and closer. I felt myself growing pale and qualmish, but grieved in silence and said nothing. Soon I noticed that the sweet by-and-by was gradually fading out. Next it ceased altogether, and there was an ominous stillness. After a few moments Thompson said, I reckon I ain't no cinnamon I've loaded up a third stove with. He gasped once or twice, then moved toward the gun-box, stood over that Limburger cheese part of a moment, and came back and sat down near me, looking at a good deal impressed. After a contemplative pause he said, indicating the box with a gesture, Friend of yours? Yes, I said with a sigh. It's pretty ripe, ain't he? Nothing further was said for perhaps a couple of minutes, each being busy with his own thoughts. Then Thompson said in a low, odd voice, Sometimes it's uncertain whether they're really gone or not, seem gone, you know, body warm, joints slimmer, and so, although you think they're gone, you don't really know. I've had cases in my car. It's perfectly awful, because you don't know what a minute they'll rise up and look at you. Then, after a pause, and slightly lifting his elbow toward the box, but he ain't in no trance, no sigh, I go bail for him. We sat some time in meditative silence, listening to the wind and the roar of the train. Then Thompson said with a good deal of feeling, Well, well, we've all got to go. There ain't no getting round it. A man as born of woman is of few days and far between, as scripture says. Yes, you're looking at it any way you want to. It's awful song and curse. Ain't nobody can get around it. All's got to go. Just everybody, as you may say. One day you're hardy and strong. Here he scrambled to his feet and broke a pain and stretched his nose out at a moment or two, and sat down again while I struggled up and thrust my nose out at the same time, and this we kept on doing every now and then. And next day he's cut down like the grass, and the places which knowed him then, knows him no more forever, as scripture says. Yes, indeed he. It's awful song and curse, but we've all got to go one time or another. Ain't no getting round it. There was another long pause then. What'd he die of? I said I didn't know. How long has he been dead? It seemed judicious to enlarge the facts to fit the probabilities, so I said two or three days, but it did no good. For Thompson received it with an injured look, which plainly said two or three years, you mean. Then he went right along, placidly ignoring my statement, and gave his views at considerable length upon the unwisdom of putting off burials too long. Then he lounged off toward the box, stood a moment, then came back on a sharp trot and visited the broken pain, observing, put up in a dumb sight better all round if they'd started him along last summer. Thompson sat down and buried his face in his red silk handkerchief, and began to slowly sway and rock his body like one who is doing his best to endure the almost unendurable. By this time the fragrance, if you may call it fragrance, was just about suffocating, as near as you can come at it. Thompson's face was turning gray. I knew mine hadn't any color left in it. By and by Thompson rested his forehead in his left hand, with his elbow on his knee, and sort of waved his red handkerchief toward the box with his other hand and said, I've carried a many one of them, some of them considerable overdue too, but lordy he just lays over them all and does it easy. Captain Lee was heliotrope to him. This recognition of my poor friend gratified me, in spite of the sad circumstances, because it had so much of the sound of a compliment. Pretty soon it was plain that something had got to be done. I suggested cigars. Thompson thought it was a good idea. He said, likely it'll modify him some. We puffed gingerly along for a while and tried hard to imagine that things were improved, but it wasn't any use. Before very long and without any consultation, both cigars were quietly dropped from our nervous fingers at the same moment. Thompson said with a sigh, No Captain, it don't modify him worth a cent. Fact is, it makes him worse, because it appears to stir up his ambition. What do you reckon we better do now? I was not able to suggest anything. Indeed I had been swallowing and swallowing all the time and did not like to trust myself to speak. Thompson felt too wandering in a dussel-tree and low-spirited way about the miserable experiences of this night, and he got to referring to my poor friend by various titles, sometimes military ones, sometimes civil ones, and I noticed that as fast as my poor friend's effectiveness grew, Thompson promoted him accordingly, gave him a bigger title. Finally he said, I got an idea. Suppose we buckled down to it and give the Colonel a bit of a shove towards the other end of the car. About ten-foot, say. He wouldn't have so much influence then, don't you reckon? I said it was a good scheme. So we took in a good fresh breath at the broken pane, calculating to hold it until we got through. Then we went there and bent over that deadly cheese and took a grip on the box. Thompson nodded. Already!  But Thompson slipped and slumped down with his nose on the cheese, and his breath got loose. He gagged and gasped and floundered up and made a break for the door, pawing the air and saying hoarsely, Don't hinder me! Give me the road! I'm a dyin'! Give me the road!' Out on the cold platform I sat down and held his head for a while, and he revived. Presently he said, Do you reckon we started the General anyway? I said no. We hadn't budged him. Well, then that idea is up the flume. We've got to think of something else.  Yes, better leave than right where he is, long as he wants it so.  We should have frozen to death. So we went in again, and shut the door, and began to suffer once more, and take turns at the break in the window. By and by, as we were starting away from a station where we had stopped a moment, Thompson pranced in cheerily and exclaimed, We're all in! We're all in! We're all in! We're all in! We're all in! We're all in! We're all in! Thompson pranced in cheerily and exclaimed, We're all in! We're all in! I reckon we got the Commodore this time. I judge I've got the stuff here that'll take the tuck out of him. It was carbolic acid. He had a carboy of it. He sprinkled it all around everywhere. In fact, he drenched everything with it, rifle-box, cheese and all. Then we sat down, feeling pretty hopeful. But it wasn't for long. You see, the two perfumes began to mix, and then—well, pretty soon—we made a break for the door. And out there, Thompson swabbed his face with his bandana, and said in a kind of disheartened way—'Ain't no use. We can't buck again him. He just utilizes everything we put up to modify him with, and gives it his own flavor, and plays it back on us.' Why, Captain, don't you know it's as much as a hundred times worse in there now than it was when he first got a going.  No, sir, I never did, as long as I've been on the road, and I have carried a many a one of him, as I was telling you. We went in again after we were frozen pretty stiff. But, my, we couldn't stay in now, so we just waltzed back and forth, freezing and thawing, and stifling by turns. In about an hour we stopped at another station, and as we left it, Thompson came in with a bag and said, Captain, I'm not going to chance him once more, just this once, and if we don't fetch him this time, the thing for us to do is to just throw up the sponge and withdraw from the canvas. That's the way I put it up. He had brought a lot of chicken feathers and dried apples and leaf tobacco and rags, and old shoes and sulfur and nasa feta da, and one thing or another, and he piled them on a breadth of sheet iron in the middle of the floor and set fire to them. When they got well started I couldn't see myself how even the corpse could stand it. All that went before was just simply poetry to that smell, but, mind you, the original smell stood up out of it just as sublime as ever. Fact is, these other smells just seemed to give it a better hold. And, my, how rich it was. I didn't make these reflections there. There wasn't time. Made them on the platform, and breaking for the platform, Thompson got suffocated and fell, and before I got him dragged out, which I did by the collar, I was mighty near gone myself. When we revived, Thompson said, dejectedly, We gotta stay out here, Captain. We gotta do it. There ain't no other way. The Governor wants to travel alone, and he's fixed so he can outvote us. And presently he added, And don't you know we're poisoned. It's our last trip. You can make up your mind to it. Typhoid fever is what's going to come of this. I feel it coming right now. Yes, sir, we're elected, just as sure as you're born. We were taken from the platform an hour later, frozen and insensible, at the next station. And I went straight off into a virulent fever and never knew anything again for three weeks. I found out, then, that I had spent that awful night with a harmless box of rifles and a lot of innocent cheese. But the news was too late to save me. Imagination had done its work, and my health was permanently shattered. Neither Bermuda nor any other land can ever bring it back to me. This is my last trip. I am on my way home to die. End of Chapter 9 The Invalid Story, read by John Greenman


All right, what's up, everyone? So today is Monday, October 26 at 11 a.m., guys. So for those that don't know, every single Monday, I put out a free video watch list on YouTube. I basically walk you guys through my lines, what I am looking for specifically on these stocks, and you could basically reverse engineer my process from those video watch list. The craziest part to me, man, is that as of the recording of this video, there's only 400 people that watch the video watch list. And you know what that tells me? It tells me that the statistic that 90% of traders fail is accurate. If me, a trader that is posting his trades, his P&Ls every single day, is posting his watch list for free for you guys, and you guys are not taking advantage of it, you know what happens? The people that are watching it, the people that are taking advantage of it, are getting rich while you are staying broke.  So honestly, if you guys just don't want to watch the free watch list anymore, I mean, I'm just going to keep it for members only. So that's number one. That kind of really bothers me every single day, is I put out literally what I'm planning for free, and today I made $18,000 off those plans, and you guys don't have five minutes to watch. So be it. I don't really care. I'll continue to make my money. Anyway, so let's talk about a couple house cleaning things first, is tomorrow, tomorrow, Tuesday at 7 p.m. market time, Tosh and I are hosting a trader clinic webinar. So for those of you that don't know what a trader clinic webinar is, this is an exclusive webinar for lifetime members, whenever me and Tosh see fit. You know, we've been really busy lately. I've been in Miami. We had a meetup. We had so much stuff kind of in the pipeline that we've been working on that we haven't really had the opportunity to do a trader clinic. So tomorrow, instead of Joe's large cap webinar at 7, we're going to have a trader clinic webinar. So if this is your first time attending a trader clinic webinar, it is again for lifetime members only, we basically bring on lifetime members and coach them and mentor them live with a zoom chat. And we try to help you guys, you know, refine your process, you could send in charts, you could send in questions. So if you are a lifetime member, today is the day to compile all of your questions, to compile all of the things you want to ask us. And then if you get lucky enough, we will bring you on to be mentored live with me and Tosh, right? So it's going to be a 7 p.m. market time tomorrow for lifetime members only. Annual members will get the recording a week later. So if you are interested in upgrading or have any other questions about a trader clinic or lifetime, text Tosh at<PHONE_NUMBER>. So what I like to do in these videos, guys, I like to walk you through my process of the day. I like to walk you through what I'm thinking, how I'm thinking, how I traded today and what is really going on. So number one, the first topic of this video that I want to cover is my account size. So people are seeing me make all this money. This year, I'm up a little bit over a million dollars net after fees, commissions and locates. So after I paid locate fees, after I paid regular commissions, after I paid any broker fees, any wire fees, I'm up a million dollars net. And a lot of people ask me, you know, how big is your account? You must be trading with so much money. How do you make all this money? And the reality is guys, I trade with a $35,000 account, right? I trade with a $35,000 account.  The reason why I do this is number one is I like to keep my account size small, because you don't need much money in the small cap game to make money, right? With a $35,000 account and four times leverage, I have over 100k in buying power, which I don't even use every day, right? So keeping my account small also keeps me in case I have a bad trading day or a bad moment or I'm just on tilt, right? If my account is a million dollars, and I have a bad day, I could lose 500k, I could lose 800k, I could lose a million. But if my account is $35,000, chances are even if I lose all of that, God forbid, which is not going to happen, it's still not going to be crippling to me. So I've learned over the years that keeping a smaller account balance for me is kind of better for my mentality. Because if I have a bad day, I don't revenge trade with massive size just because the money is there. If I'm down on a trade, I don't see what it's going to do to kind of make back the money. You know, I've traded with $100,000 account and a million dollar account.   So I make sure that my account is small. So what this point of this is, is my account is at $35,000. And then when I get to 50k, you know what I do? I wire out. So let me show you the great news. I am now at 467 or something like that. So now I get to wire out if I really want to.  I don't revenge trade and I don't screw up. And because I'm able to give myself a paycheck, right, if I'm able to give myself a paycheck at the end of my trading, it makes it more valuable because if I just see numbers on a screen, right, it's like go into the casino and getting chips, you could have a small chip that says $1,000 or $10,000. But if you have a stack of cash in front of you, it's more meaningful, right? So I wire out the money out of my accounts as a way to pay myself for my hard work, and then reset my account back to normal to make sure that I'm not getting overconfident. Because oftentimes if my if I let my accounts grow and grow and grow, I get more confident, more confident, more confident.   That's number one. So my account size is 35,000. So I used a $35,000 account to make a million dollars this year.  And people are saying that DSS is bouncing DSS is bouncing. Guys, it is 11am. It is 30 minutes past zombie time. DSS is not a trade for me, right?  But it all came from me and bow is we learned that after 1030am is when shorts start to lose their edge in the market, right? Me and Bow would short and we would hold for all day faders all day faders and then we would be down upside down and we wouldn't know what the hell happened until we started back testing and tracking. We found that after 1030 is when the short bias traders have no edge. So every single day the entire year I walk away before 1030.  Now long buys traders in MIC do not trade until 1030. So MIC is short buys and long buys. We are not only short, we are not only long, we do both. So between 930 and 1030, we are looking to short in the morning between 1030 and 1032. We are looking to long these zombie moves. So just because you are a long bias trader doesn't mean that you have opportunity, you don't have opportunity at MIC. There are a lot of long bias traders that start trading at 1030. So imagine the bell rings at 930, they do nothing for one hour and they wait until 1030. That's when their bell rings and they start going long. So if you are struggling in this market, ask yourself, are you trading short past 1030? Are you going long? Not during zombie times, right? So that is the thing, guys, also to pay attention to and make note of is go long during zombie times and go short between 930 and 1030. So that lesson right there, that lesson right there is worth that took me and bow probably I would say combined $500,000 in losses to learn. So that one lesson that I just gave away took me and bow six figures to learn. And this is why you need a mentor, guys, because we have made all of the mistakes in the past so that you do not need to bow has been trading for 20 years, I've been trading for almost seven years now, six and a half years, I've been trading, which is crazy, guys, crazy. So every single morning, guys, let me also show you what is in the watch list, right? So I want to show you guys this up. So every single morning, guys, this is our watch list channel, right? So we post our morning watch list, we post what we are looking for this that. So what we're looking for this morning is DSS. This is the hot chick in the morning, waiting for morning pump and then death candle and then basically more commentary at the open, right? So in the morning, guys, in the morning on DSS, if you look at the chart, let me pull it up. If you look at the chart on DSS, in the morning, right in the morning and 930, this was a death candle, and we were looking to short the bounce. We got the bounce and the stock top out right there and came right back down, right? So that was that. MCEP, broken pre-market. We'll love a pop towards VWAP or 280 in morning to short. It hit 280 in the morning and came right back down, okay? Let's go to Grill. Grill. This is a broken chart looking to short a bounce 250, 260, 270. It hit 250, 260, 270 and came back down. LLIT, low flow SSR, ideally a pop towards seven in the morning to short. We didn't get a pop towards seven, but a chat room came and pumped it towards six and we got that instead. And Snapchat, potential first red day setup. Snapchat, potential first red day and a tank. So right there, guys, the 400 people that looked at the watch list made money today. Everyone else, I don't know what to tell you, bro. I don't know how much more simple we can make it. I don't know how much more clear we can make it. I'm literally showing you that pre-market. We are making these plans and they are being executed at the open, guys. So that's that. So we spoke about my account size, we spoke about the zombie rules, and we spoke about the watch list, right? So what I want to also talk about today, guys, is the flow of money in the stock. So I spoke about this last week in last week's YouTube live, but I'm going to kind of talk about it again, again today. It is the flow of stocks, right? So we are kind of in a market, guys, where people only care about the shiny object, right? So people only care about what's the hot stock moving? What's going on? What is the one that has the most attention? What is the shiny object? What is the one that's crazy? What's the one that's up five, six, seven, eight, hundred percent, et cetera, et cetera, et cetera, right? So what happens in this market is when there is a hot chick in the morning, when there's a hot stock in the morning, right? All the money flows in there, right? People are buying, people are excited, they want to get it, they want to pump it, they want to do this and that. So what ends up happening is if that hot stock, if that hot stock doesn't end up holding, if the money ends up exiting, what ends up happening is this. The flow of money in these stocks is almost linear. It goes from stock A to stock B to stock C. When it goes from stock A to stock B, stock A takes. When it goes from stock B to stock C, stock B takes. So as the money is flowing out of these stocks, the money that the stock is flowing out of is the stock that I was looking to short, okay? So the point that I'm trying to make, guys, the point that I'm trying to make is you have to be a little bit aware of where money is flowing in this market, right? So in the morning I'm pretty sure it was LLIT was the hot chick and then it moved to DSS. DSS because it moved there, LLIT went down and then from DSS it went to GRIL and then DSS went down. So the stocks are flowing. Money is going out and into the other. As money is exiting one stock, that is the stock that I'm interested in shorting, right? So there are a lot of stocks in play today. There's a lot of stocks happening. There's a lot of stocks that are moving. And for me, I really don't know which stocks I'm going to trade in the morning. Basically, I am looking to identify the broken stocks in the morning. And then as the broken stocks are bouncing towards key levels, either VWAP, the half dollar mark, or the whole dollar mark, I am shorting these bounces on the broken stocks. As I short the bounces on these broken stocks, if there is a new stock over here that is being pumped or that is getting attention or that's getting excited and jamming up and halting up and going crazy. This is this and this. These stocks are getting weaker. As they are getting weaker, I am adding more size, right? So as stocks are taking attention, as hot stocks are moving, these broken stocks are starting to take and that is where I'm getting my edge from. So today I made most of my money on LLIT, right? The reason why I made most of my money on LLIT is because pre-market, pre-market, we identified that there was dilution on the stock. So if you don't know what dilution is, there's some hidden selling or there's some sketchy stuff happening and, you know, we teach you guys how to read the filings and all this stuff. But the point that I'm trying to make, guys, is there was an edge on that stock because there was dilution and because a chatroom was pumping it, right? A chatroom was pumping it. So because of all this happening, that gave me an edge. And as other stocks started moving, as money flowed out of these stocks, that LLIT became more and more heavy, more and more weak and I was able to make more and more money on it, guys. So again, if you are struggling in this market, what are you doing wrong? Are you not using heart stops? Are you chasing trades? Are you going short after 1030? Are you buying alerts? Are you doing forex signals, right? You know what we're doing? We are pre-planning our trades in the morning watch list, which no one is looking at. It's like you're paying for MIC and you're still not looking for the watch list that I don't get. But anyway, people that look at it get rich, whatever. We're looking at the morning watch list. We are pre-planning our trades. We are looking if there's potential dilution on the stock. We are drawing our lines. We are placing our fantasy orders. We are waiting for broken stocks to bounce and we are walking away at 1030. This is what it means to be a professional trader, guys. We are professional traders at MIC, right? You don't make $18,000 a day on accident. You don't make a million dollars a year because you hit the lotto. We are professional traders planning our trades, waiting for our trades and walking away from the desk when it is not optimal for us to be there, right? There's a lot of people in the trading industry that don't want to pay $200 for MIC.  Can you give me a discount on the monthly membership? And at that point, man, I don't even respond to those guys. I really just don't even respond to those guys because the value that me and bow provide is worth so much more than $200 a month. And the only reason why we don't do it more than 200 a month is because we don't want to rip anyone off, right? We could charge $1,000 if we want it. We could charge more if we want it. But the point is that the value that you are getting for $200 a month makes this such a no-brainer that people just don't even get it, right? They just don't even get it, right? If I'm here making $18,000 in a day and I'm teaching you how I made $18,000 a day, that $200 is an investment that you are making in yourself to potentially make $200 a day trading if it does work out for you, right? And that's what I want to say, guys. A lot of people spend $200 going out on the weekend. They lose $200 on a trade.  And people still don't get it, man. People still don't get it. You know what I explained to people is I recently got into fitness and I've been trying to get into fitness for a very long time and I never really saw results and I never really had passion for it. And it was never really for me, right? Until I started to hire a personal trainer, right? So the reason why I hired a personal trainer is because he's been there. He's done that. He's had the experience. He knows what to do and he will motivate me enough to get to my goals, right? So I know that I can't do it myself. I am willing to pay and invest, invest in myself, invest in my body with a personal trainer who is my mentor, who is going to get me to the goals that I want to get to. So why would you not do the same with your trading? If you're struggling, if you're trying to figure this out by yourself, why not come to the Harvard of Trading Education, which is MIC and learn from professional traders on how to really trade for yourself, guys? I mean, I don't really get it. All these guys want email alerts. They want text alerts. They want YouTube pumps.  Yet here we are consistently showing up and making money nonstop every single day, providing access to you. I mean, I don't know what other community that you have direct access to me about. I don't know what other community that you could get on the phone with our moderators and they will mentor you. I don't know any other community that throws free meetups and free events, guys. So the point that I'm trying to make is if you want to join a trading community, if you want to join a trading school, if you want to join whatever, do not judge a community based on the amount of money that me and Bauer are making, right? What we pride ourselves on at MIC is our testimonials. So if you look at our Instagram page, instagram.com slash myinvestingclub, you will see that we have testimonials from members who are making more money than us, right? And that's the point, guys. Our process is repeatable. Everything you see everywhere else only the head guy makes money and everyone else loses money, right? So here we are showcasing our members' talents as well. And remember, guys, remember, as a doctor, if you want to become a doctor, you don't just operate on someone just because you say you want to be a doctor. If you want to be a lawyer, you just don't go to the courthouse and try to defend someone with no experience. You go to medical school for eight years, you go to law school for six years. Trading school is only a year or two years, guys. Literally, you sacrifice a year or two years to make more money than doctors or lawyers combine and no one ever wants to do it. John, a.k.a. wildlife, just quit his job because he made $100,000 in profits. James just bought his dream car because he made so much money trading, guys. So I don't know what else we could say or what else we could do or what else we could show you to convince you to come and at least try us out. But at the end of the day, we know our value and we know what we provide and for $200 a month, $6 a day, you are getting, I would say, $200 a day worth of value at MIC, guys. So that's basically it. So do you guys have any questions for me? I want to kind of keep this short and sweet. And again, guys, if you have any questions about MIC, you could literally get on the phone with Tosh who is one of the co-founders of MIC. He's been there since day one and he will literally talk to you about what we have to offer, what we could help you with. His number is<PHONE_NUMBER>. Additionally, what I've been doing at these videos is I'd like you guys to reply with one lesson that you learned from this video and you could reply as many lessons as you want as long as it is not the same thing. I want you guys to reply with one lesson that you learned from this video. Comment on it. And what I do is I pick someone every single week to either win a free copy of the accelerator or free membership at MIC. So what I'm going to do is I'm going to pick someone today that comments on this video with one lesson of free membership inside MIC for a month. All right, what does Bao say? Okay, Bao says if someone joins annual today by texting Tosh, they could come to the Trader Clinic for lifetime members tomorrow. So it looks like any new annuals that joined today from Tosh, I guess we will give them special access to the Trader Clinic. Why do I prefer shorting rather than going long? So I prefer shorting rather than going long because I feel like there's more of an edge on these stocks going short, right? If there's pump and dumps, if there's all these sketchy things that are happening, that gives me an edge as a short seller. Going long is great. I just haven't found much success going long. Harry is an unbelievable long trader but you need to find what works based on your personality. My personality is that man I'm really good at shorting so why am I going to try to deviate from what's been paying me a million dollars a year? So that might see we teach you long strategies and short strategies so that you could determine what is working based on your personality guys. And DSS continues to go higher and if you listen to what I said at the start of this video it is past 1030. I am not trading zombie times. I don't care how attractive it looks. I don't care how sexy it looks. I am not touching it guys. I am not touching it because that is what the process is saying. If you are trading short at zombie times you are disobeying the process man disobeying the process. Stick to the process and you will be rewarded. I am showing you every single day what is possible by sticking to the process guys. Yet you guys are still not following. You guys are still not listening. So I do not know what else I can do. So I'm going to go back to the room. I'm going to continue to help members guys and we will take it from there. So thank you everyone for attending. A reminder to post your lesson at the end of this video and I will pick someone today to win a free monthly membership. I will see you tomorrow at the trader clinic and text Tosh for more information and because I know that people aren't going to be watching till the very end of this video. If you guys text Tosh the word trader clinic I'll tell them to give you guys a discount on the lifetime membership right. So text Tosh trader clinic for anyone that made it to the very very very end of the video because I know not many people are making it down here. So thank you guys. I'll see you guys back in the room and another great day for M.I.C.