How's it going guys? Welcome back to another JHR view and today we have another pair of Soleon headphones. Now these ones are a little bit different. If we turn around the side, these ones right here are actually supposed to be RGB and light up. My previous pair that I reviewed didn't have any of the kind of bells and whistles in there but I really enjoyed the quality and the comfort so I'm really excited to try this out. Let's go ahead and zoom in right here at the bottom and see some of the details about the headset. So right here it says plush memory foam ear pads, clear and loud noise canceling microphone, and then a virtual 7.1 stereo surround. So it pretty much has the same as the last one when it comes to like specs but let's open this up and see how these lights look on here. I'm really excited to kind of test that out so let's go ahead and slide this off. Right here we're greeted with a nice kind of lion. I guess you'd say we're in sunglasses or it could be a Camaro honestly. It looks like it might have goat horns and the other side is black. And let's go ahead and lay this down kind of like a shoe box and slide that up. Hopefully you rotate this over here. You get a really nice view of the headphones. So this is basically how the other ones were packaged. Let's get a really nice zoom in on that. So they have really nice plush kind of soft feel to them. If you notice when I press down it kind of slowly goes back to its original position. That's because it is genuine genuine memory foam. Look at me I'm all tongue tied from trying to sound smart. Anyways let's go ahead and pull these out. Alright so the first thing I noticed while pulling these out of here is this is an exclusive USB only headset which I honestly don't mind at all. I really think that the single USB is a lot better if it had than if it had like you know multiple things sticking out of it. So I'm actually kind of excited and yeah So the design is relatively the same. It still has that nice kind of speaker grill. Let's go ahead and zoom in on that. So the speaker grill is basically the same. Made out of metal. The logo is actually still pretty nice. I like the design of it. If we look over here move that out of the way a little bit. We have the inside mesh area has a really soft you know if you can see I'm pressing down on it. It actually has foam in there and it's really comfortable from the last pair I've tried. I'm gonna try these ones on right now too. So I'm gonna let you know if it feels as good as the last pair. Oh yeah these are really nice. The comfortability alone is just insane.  So I'm gonna go ahead and plug these into the keyboard on my computer real quick and see how that RGB lighting is looking. All right I went ahead and plug them in and it pulsates on the side a really nice RGB color and then the microphone itself right here has a nice little light on it and it also comes with a little pad so if you want to put this on here for you know if you have like any Puzz or S noises and you want it to sound a little bit nicer you can put that on there. Kind of defeats the LED a little bit you can still see it but let's go ahead and zoom in on here real quick and see how nice these lights are. Look at that. I like how the LEDs are like kind of like a little strip and it just goes around 360. But yeah these are really comfortable and the LEDs look great. I'm really excited to own these. I'm gonna put a little bit of no copyright music on and test out the audio quality before ending the videos. Let's go ahead and hear that. All right let's try these on now that we got some music playing. Yeah that sounds really good. There we go. Let's go ahead and turn that music off now. So as you can hear the tempo and bass quality and these are just as exceptional as the last pair that I reviewed and honestly I'm really happy that this is just the RGB. You also have the option to turn off the mic right here I guess and obviously you know the standard volume control on the actual headset. But I'm really surprised honestly like for the price of these headphones the quality is what I would say a $100 plus dollar headset would have. But yeah we're gonna be looking at the difference between live human blood and dried human blood. Now these were both taken from me using my diabetic poker. I use this on a daily basis so it's not really a big deal for me. So we're gonna put this under a microscope that is hooked up with a camera directly to my PC so you guys can see this really up close. Let's go ahead and check out the microscopic world. All right so the first slide we're gonna be doing is the live human blood. So let's go ahead and put this on here. I'm gonna go ahead and find the blood itself. There we go. And now we just need to zoom in. We're gonna turn down the lighting a little bit so that we can get a good look. Wow look at that. So you can actually see if we try to focus on a little bit more. You can actually see the individual blood cells.  So this is the farthest away zoom. It goes in about probably 900 times more than this. So we're gonna get a really good look at these in a minute. But this is basically what it looks like at a glance. And oh wow look at that. You can actually see the end of like the blood right there. Like the edge kind of looks like a red ocean. It's kind of interesting. All right let's go ahead and switch it up a little bit. So we're gonna zoom this out and then we're gonna switch to the next zoom. Whoa. All right let's turn down the lighting a little bit. Do you see that movement right there? There's a little bit of movement in there. That's so interesting. All right let's see if we can move this around just a little bit. I'd love to be able to fall there it is. Look at that. See how we can focus in a little bit more. How crazy is that? You know it's crazy because it just came out of my body like a minute ago too. So seeing like all these little things that are currently inside of me right now it's kind of a kind of a trippy experience you know. All right so let's go ahead and zoom out again. And now we're gonna go to the one that zooms in the farthest. All right so it took me a second to get a proper zoom but here we are. We got a little bit of the blood cells on here and we focus in a little bit. You can kind of see their shapes. It's really interesting.  It's really interesting stuff. If it sounds like I'm talking from the side it's because I'm looking at my monitor while doing this because you can actually see on your computer screen what you're seeing through the microscope because it has a built-in camera so it's really cool. I bought this specifically for the channel. So this has been live human blood and honestly it doesn't move around as much as I thought it would. I've looked at this before on a worse much worse like $20 microscope and I didn't really see any movement either. So I'm not too surprised. I think maybe it would be like slow gradual movement or maybe we're just not able to get that super zoom in that we need. Let's go ahead and switch to the dried human blood. All right I got the slide on of the dried human blood or the JHR blood and we're gonna go ahead and zoom in on this using the first zoom. Whoa look at that. You know what it kind of reminds me of? It kind of reminds me of like a lightning bolts or something.  That is super interesting. Let's see if we can move it around a little bit. You know I think that all these tiny little ones right here are the individual actual cells. It's kind of hard to tell because they've already decayed so much. This is a slide from about I'd say a few months ago. Really interesting. Let's go ahead and switch to the second zoom. All right I went ahead and found the focus point let's go ahead and zoom in. Almost there wait and fine tune it. Look at that. That is really interesting. You literally could take that and like I don't know fill in like the color or something you know what I mean? You could do like a it almost looks like a abstract art piece. That's so weird. I like how like all of the cracks in there are like super defined and they're all different shapes. This is all just my blood. All right so let's go ahead and go to the last zoom. Now this one is going to zoom in really far. All right so I found the zoom point let's go ahead and focus in. Whoa look at that. That is insane. That's really crazy. You know I kind of like the look of the dried human blood versus the the live human blood because it like everything's so unique and looking you know what I mean? That is so cool. But yeah this is this is a this is a series that I want to continue on so if you like this video please feel free to subscribe to the channel in the description below. I'm going to go ahead and link where I got the microscope itself and if you want to drop by my patreon I have a bunch of different tiers that you can help support the channel for purchases like this. But yeah this is something that you see every day. They sell it on practically every corner now. This is coffee and you can see me zooming in and out here a little bit and what I'm doing is I'm kind of going over the different parts of the coffee. As you notice there's some actual pitting in the coffee it's off right there. I don't know if you can see that really close up and strangely enough it's actually very reflective. Normally I would say when you see coffee you see it as this kind of dull kind of matte but this close up when you shine the LEDs on it let's shift over your little bit and we focus in you get these kind of crystal-like kind of rigid shapes which is really interesting considering the fact that when you see a coffee granule it looks absolutely nothing like this but when we start to zoom in very finely like this we can see these ridges and kind of like crystal structures that just go in all different directions. Let's move over here a little bit now if we go and we can kind of see the side of this one right here. See I'm using a compound microscope so you can't really fully see the entire granule because it kind of needs to be on a flat surface but this works really good for when you can get these chunks that are relatively on the same plane of focus. Yeah like right here as you see right here we have another really nice piece and this one is a pretty intense pitting towards the bottom if you notice. It almost looks a little bit like honeycomb. We have all these different variations of color too we have some yellows and some browns and some mixtures of it all and it almost looks like an alien rock. Funny enough thing is I have LEDs pulsing from the top rather than from the bottom so the complete bottom kind of looks like a black abyss so it's kind of like you're looking at maybe like an asteroid floating in space so that's really cool. We also have some little ridges sticking out in the corner right there as well and then a little bit of a chunk attached right there almost by kind of looks like almost like just a thread but it's really interesting to see all the different color variations because when you see it from far away it looks basically like a solid brown but you get a really nice look the closer that you get but yeah so let's move over here a little bit and try to focus in on this small tiny little piece. Look at that okay this is really cool so if you notice right here kind of looks like it's just floating and like I mentioned just a minute ago the background normally has an LED that shines up from the top so you can see cells but on this side right here we have it shining from the top so you're getting this really nice view of this one and this is actually a piece that is a little bit broken up it's a smaller piece of the granule but when it broke up it really shattered almost into like a kind of like a glass it almost looks like those rock candies that you get as a kid it's very very interesting and all the little tiny pieces surrounding it too it almost looks like an asteroid breaking up as it kind of heads towards earth but another really interesting thing about the coffee as well is that you know back in the sixth century a goat herder actually I believe I forget what country it was in I actually researched this his goat started eating some of the coffee beans and it ended up he tried the coffee beans as well because those goat liked it so much that that's kind of our coffee in history apparently was found not sure how true that is but interesting fact nevertheless and today we have something by umidiji this is a android smartwatch and I'm really interested to open this up and use it I believe it is touch screen and it works with both iPhone and Samsung and probably anything else that has bluetooth but let's go ahead and take a closer look at this box that's really premium if we zoom in right here as all of these kind of you actually feel it these little kind of grooves on the front and if we look at the side right here we zoom in a little bit it says you watch to it says Melanie's black it's by a umidiji and have their website right there if you want to check it out we turn it around we're greeted with a sticker and then it says smartwatch umidiji with iPhone or Samsung or probably anything that has the app on the app store and then at the bottom it's just the things to open it up all right now that we cut those open let's just go ahead and slide this out there we go and we are greeted with a card let's go ahead and see what it says it says thanks for choosing umidiji please leave us a review or feedback if you like it we do appreciate it please tell us first if you have problems or advice about it and then we will improve or solve the problem for you I like their dedication to customer service look at this guys this is the watch right here we have it as a screen protector on it so I'm not worried about those light scratch looking things let's go ahead and pull this out of here probably have to do it upside down let's see oh there we go and there oh did you see that it just lit up a little bit I think there's actually there is there's already power in this look at that that's super cool and then we have the screen protector on here but you know what's a smart idea is to not take that off because it's basically a free screen protector and you know I mean it might be a little bit more scratchy because it's just a little thin layer of plastic as you can see but if you don't have a screen protector immediately I would just leave that on there at least it's not dumb and have like a big logo of like the thing on it some things do like a lot of the bigger brands if you get like a Samsung it has like a thing on the outside to where you can't just keep the temporary screen protector yeah this is the back it looks as though since it's so cold my fingers are kind of leaving a kind of impression the band is very nice it feels kind of like it is it's like a metal mesh let's go ahead and zoom in on that that is really nice you actually can see through it a little bit too it's like a metal mesh kind of all connected together that's very nice feeling in the hands go ahead and set this down for a second and see what else is in the box taking this off right here we see that it comes with a USB charging cable it is what is this let's take this off actually it looks a little bit different than some of the cables I seen so let's go ahead and see what's going on with it oh it's a special proprietary cable specifically for this it has two things to charge and it also magnetizes to the side of the watch let's go ahead and see where it actually charges probably on the back of it alright so I went ahead and I found the charging portion of it actually is just right here so if we grab this and just set it down it attaches with the magnets and you can just charge it just like that another thing I figured out while I was messing with this kind of off-camera is this whole band is magnetic this right here is a magnet so you can adjust it to your wrist size and it just magnetizes right on here that is super sleek very nice I like that a lot it also has their logo on the little band too right there with kind of like a brushed middle very nice and then in the box right here too we also have a rubber band as well if you wanted to switch out the band and use this one as a backup which is very nice to have also comes with the little things that need to go in there or could be for replacement in case they break and then just an instruction manual here at the bottom if we zoom in but without further ado let's go ahead and see these features on the actual watch itself all right so I'm assuming we unlock it like this so it looks as though it has pretty much full battery I see a thing for steps as well let's see if we can turn up the settings with the brightness one two three four so four settings for brightness there we go as a mute switch style power off and on reset says that you can use this as a shutter for taking pictures wirelessly with your camera we have a heart monitor the weather messaging let's go ahead and go to that I got to fix that screen time out says I'm empty with my messages so you'll get your message alerts if somebody texts you can't click from right there probably would be in here so walking running cycling obviously the weather you have to connect it to your phone for it to update or undate looks like there might be a typo right there but that might be fixed in the update so sorry my camera's having a little bit of trouble focusing so I'm trying to keep it at a good distance and then it also has what looks to be a music player which I need to connect to it on date and then it goes back to here as well doesn't look like there's any swiping from side to side we have a timer that's built in so we can just set a timer right there because you want to like make something for dinner or something you need to set a timer you just put it on your hand and then periodically check it switch style yeah you can change it all right here for a different personalized looks like we have three different ones this one looks pretty nice but yeah this is really nice and let's go ahead and try it on and see how easy it is to snap this all together so just expand to the band all the way out my hands are kind of big so we just grab the magnet right here tighten it up and then rotate my arm around and let the magnets it we can adjust it from this side I see my cat where he scratched me so yeah this is what it would look like on the hand very nice and kind of low profile compared to some of the other ones that I have or I have one other one actually well I had to I had the first one I had broke a long time ago and then I got the Samsung Gear watch but that one is actually raised up about this high and that's a flagship one so this one being this low profile is actually really impressive oh did you see that when I moved it there's a gyroscope so let me skate to keep steady and when I turn my whip my wrist it actually turns the screen on so it has that feature to where if see right now if you can see it's off I turn my hand and the display comes on that's actually really nice that's pretty cool that is actually a pretty nice premium feature that they packed in there so sorry that it's a little bit reflective but I hope you guys got a pretty good idea of the watch I like it a lot and I'm really happy that I got to try this out but yeah pretty rich feature watch I'm definitely gonna put this in the link in the description below so you guys can check it out but yeah I'm really impressed with it and I think that it'd be a really nice daily driver for like telling the time or receiving some messages and whatnot and just generally keeping track of my weight and my health but yeah and welcome to a JHR game review I had a lot of people requesting me for game reviews for a little while ever since the beginning of my channel but today we're gonna be trying out a game called Temtem now Temtem's kind of like a Pokemon like game where you collect monsters and you can trade them and you know kind of battle gyms and whatnot but I think this game is really fun I spent about five hours on this and I'd say it's really unique because not only is it like Pokemon but it's the MMO RPG we've always wanted in Pokemon so you can actually see other players in here and the actual scenery in this game is actually really nice as you see there is somebody else running across radio to use the terminal so this is your little terminal right here stores your Temtem's right there you can swap them into your party and then if you want to heal them up you just slide your cards into here and they load up and they're all healed now this is a miniature temporum and they have temporums that are more like you know they have a bunch of these machines in there but those are more like for you know having a shop inside and for like a ton of people who are in there they always have them in like the base town and they're kind of like the off-brand Pokemon Center of the game I guess but if we run around here you can actually see my pickpick which is a Temtem following me and you can choose which one is by your side you know depending on who you have listed first in your actual party right here or your squad now we run into the grass area right here you actually have wild Temtem encounters now this is an untamed pickpick so here are some of the pickpicks that I have I mean not the pickpicks that Temtem's I have right here we can select from all of these different moves which you can learn new moves and also evolve as well so I'm gonna use heavy blow against this and then I'm gonna use DC beam which is a lightning attack which he didn't fare very well so heavy blow should take him out so the pickpick is now damaged and I gained some EXP as you can see from up here there's also breeding in the game but I haven't gotten to that yet but as I said the the scenery and the pretty much everything in this game is very nice very reminiscent of a Pokemon game but without ripping it off 100% I'd say they I'd say that this is like a very good homage to everything that we've ever wanted an online Pokemon style game and I'm really excited to have been able to get it on the early access day one there was a lot of trouble when it first came out there was about a 14,000 queue due to server issues but the devs worked for about 16 hours and got the game hotfixed within the same day and now it's completely playable and there's only a few other bugs that need to be polished out but as you can see from my gameplay right here it's absolutely impressive and I'm just I'm I'm blown away but also worried I'm gonna waste a lot of time on this as you see right there I defeated a Kaku and then I'm almost to a next level on my pickpick so when we try to upgrade my level one more time with my pickpick and then show you how to catch a temtem as well alright so we now ran into a temtem right here so we have another kaku that just appeared so it's a 2v2 battle I don't know if I said that before but you always start off with two temtems and usually if there's a temtem encounter it can be two as well and you to switch and target which one you want that specific attack to go to so we're gonna do a heavy blow on this and then maybe just hmm maybe a wind blade I'm not sure that might knock it out let's see no that was perfect okay so this little poison effect they're gonna do alright so all I have to do now is go to my bag and go to my tem card and then use it and this is kind of the capturing process very cool animation very polished and then you can also name them as well I'm just gonna send them to my tem deck which is kind of like the Pokebox so I leveled up my Tori I think that temtem designs in here if I haven't already said it are better than some of the a lot of the Pokemon designs that I've seen recently come out I think maybe it's primarily to do for the fact that this game is probably from Pokemon fans rather than you know Nintendo themselves and we all know that game companies can sometimes be a little bit biased or not open-minded when it comes to new game designs or new concept art designs of different characters and whatnot so I really think that they had a good handle on you know how to make these guys look so this is a little town right here and you actually have side quests of us I've talked to this person right here I could accept the side quest I'm just gonna skip through that as you see in the corner right there it actually appeared the little side quest right there and if we go through here there's actually a place where you can buy new clothes it's very nice you can also change the style of your hair your clothing and pretty much anything else right here there's probably multiple different clothing stores I just haven't made it to those areas yet and then if we go around here I believe not this one almost to the front this town's a little bit big there we go this is a temporium so basically a temporium is a place with a bunch of terminals to where you can heal up all of your temtem I like that little animation very satisfying I accidentally pressed it twice here we go one now you guys got to get to you on how that works and then of course in the front you can access these guys right here to transfer your guys out or in and you have about 10 boxes so I believe there's about 115 temtems available available to catch not 100% sure but from what I saw in the temtempedia I believe that's how many there are I don't know if they're all readily available on this early access release but it is really cool that there are so many and they can also evolve and they can also be shiny as well so rather than just pointlessly aim around or walk around I'm going to go ahead and just end the video here because I think I got kind of a good you know general basis of like this game and its gameplay and uh just kind of a short little video for you guys I wanted to be able to kind of show kind of the things that I like and you know the different aspects of this game because I think it has a lot of potential I believe its kickstarter raised about what $500,000 and about 30,000 people are on the discord who most look like they brought the game so very good stuff really excited to see how you know things turn out you know just uh yeah so if you guys enjoyed this video don't forget to subscribe it really really helps but more than anything thumbing up that video you know show youtube's algorithm that you know my content is good help me grow my channel and uh help me to you know continue making content like this you know with all your guys' support ah the nintendo entertainment system with just a little bit of a slide a click and a close this started off many people's childhoods ranging from mario the legend is zelda all the way to the Kirby games it is a long journey that it's made all the way to the nintendo switch but I'm going to show you how I turned this with a little bit of power a little bit of know-how into a shrunk down version so stay tuned right here is one of the many business cards I've collected throughout my travels right here for a size comparison is a 1.4 gigahertz quad core computer that runs a multitude of different operating systems that are Linux based it can run a retro operating system called I believe retro arc or it is also commonly known as emulation station and basically what that is is an operating system that goes on to an sd card and then loads into the bottom slot right here so I'm going to show you how I go from this tiny card shaped computer to putting it in something that looks just like a nintendo entertainment system therefore shrinking down an older console and making it something more modern let's do this so the first thing we need to do is take this out of its nice pretty little box that it came in and then slide this baby out and put that to the side so this is a really nice case and I picked this one specifically because some of the ones had the colors mismatched if you look at the side it has a bunch of different openings for the things to go into let's say hdmi the audio and the micro usb and back here it even has a place for the sd card and a place for the leds to show up so that's really nice not to mention a ventilation so if we take this apart right here set that down you can see that it comes with a nice little tool kit which is nice because I don't know where my iFixit kit is let's say there's some screws here at the bottom and then a nice little screwdriver that we can use let's go ahead and open this up well I'll take the screwdriver out and then get something to set these on top of let's see what I have around my desk I just use the box right here and we'll just slide these out we have a bunch of little screws right here it looks like some of these have a little lip on them so I'm assuming those are used for something different but let's go ahead and put this here and grab the raspberry pi so it has four screws right here and it looks as though it needs to lay down into this little section so let's see how well it fits that's nice as you can see it falls in there pretty nicely all right so now that we have that in there we need to go ahead and attach this portion right here it came with a heat sink on a more expensive version but I opted out on it hopefully there's enough ventilation so let's go ahead and adjust the flap and then set it down on top of here that's satisfying closes up pretty well adjust the little flap that clips on and then I believe from the bottom yeah you can see the motherboard kind of cool we're actually going to put the screws in right here so that we can attach everything together yeah a tiny bit of flex but it's pretty much all in there now and if you open this little latch right here which actually clips in you get the full usb's right here really cool thing about the raspberry pi is if you want to load retro games onto a usb you can actually load them off from right here you just grab a usb slide it in and then load up your games and also as ethernet as well if you want a fast connection for your safe you want to put it by your tv and install a version I believe of moonlight you can stream your pc games to your pc with low latency which is kind of nice kind of like a steam link but let's go ahead and close that up I already have an operating system loaded I believe on this 64 gigabyte samsung evo so I'm going to go ahead and load this in here and then boot up some games since we've already kind of shrunk down this guy and showed you how simple it was to go from the original to something that can do the same thing let's see what we can do with this and now with a little bit of software tinkering and getting super mario brothers 3 on here we're just going to go ahead and plug in the hdmi and then we're also going to plug in the micro usb that is used to power it on which is only five volts by the way as you can see it's starting to boot up it starts up and says retro pi you can actually customize the loading screen if you wanted to I've seen people do it before I'm not sure how to do it myself though as it says emulation station and now it says no gamepad detected I have a playstation 4 controller plugged in with a micro usb right here and all we have to do is unlatch this and plug it into one of the mini usb's hold down a button and it is now working then we can go over to the super nintendo entertainment system and then click on super mario brothers 3 that'll give a little message about the emulator and just like that you have a console that is actually smaller than the size of the original cartridge it's really amazing how technology has progressed throughout the years and that you can pretty much do whatever you want now with your uh older games you can run them on a credit card sized computer and everything let's see if we can get a little bit of gameplay going on in here as you see I can move around and everything and start the level everything runs super smooth and I can pretty much play it just like I would except this time we're doing it in high definition so that's pretty cool but yeah what do you guys think I think this is probably one of the most advanced things that I've ever done besides the Game Boy one where I kind of redid the shell on an old Game Boy advanced but uh yeah I want to do more videos like this in the future and I really think that technology is on one of my specialties but yeah super mario brothers 3 shrinking down a nintendo entertainment system and today we're going to be looking at this sports mini mp3 player by suobi and it's really interesting because this is supposed to be used when you're swimming or maybe you're like an uh you know jacuzzi or something and it's supposed to be able to maintain its quality so that's actually really cool I've never really thought about using an mp3 player while swimming before but uh let's go ahead and look at the side right here if we zoom in real quick shows that it comes with some headphones in here that look to be waterproof comes with multiple different attachments a usb to charge it a usb extender cable and it shows that it works with pc and mac which is cool says that this is eight gigabytes says it's submergeable waterproof mp3 player and headphones has a clip has a multiple digital audio out formats compatible high quality sound and low power consumption shuffle function built in eight gigabyte memory built in rechargeable battery 15 hours of music playback and mac and pc and if you want to look at the technicals you can go ahead and pause right here i'll go ahead and zoom in real quick for you guys but without further ado let's go ahead and open this up and see how it sounds and works kind of has a plastic encasing and then bend this back and it should just slide right out there we go so here's the mp3 player i think it's stuck in there with some kind of uh probably a twisty tie or something let's go ahead and pop that up that's interesting how it is uh put in here how does that open ah the open symbol with the arrow looks as though there's some kind of little thing right here oh it's the clip that's actually holding it on so if you pull that up or maybe it's the other way i'm not too sure let's just it's made out of paper so we can rip it there we go just pull it off so this is what the mp3 player looks like kind of like a little pod design looks like something you keep your air pods and let's go ahead and zoom in on it real quick so it has a plan pause forwards backwards and then the volume up and down then on the back it has the information and the brand name we have the headphone jack and then the charging port is unknown at the moment i'm wondering where that is so i went ahead and pulled this out of the bag very interesting it charges as well through the headphone jack so you put in the headphone jack and then connect it through usb so you probably transferred data over this as well i haven't seen something like this in a long time since like the ipod shuffle pretty cool stuff go ahead and set this down zoom back in on the box let's go ahead and pull out the rest of the stuff in here right here we have the instruction booklet some accessories with the headphones and the little nubs for different shaped ears a extender so that you can make it longer and then it says your referral is our greatest compliment so there's that and it says warning the usb cable attached to your mp3 player is not water resistant yeah you want to make sure that's totally dry and it's not wet inside before you connect that to your pc or charging dock might get a little bit of a shock or fry it so yeah let's go ahead and load a song on here and see how it works and sounds all right so i went ahead and connected the mp3 player threw on some new copyright music and let's go ahead and set that down and then unpackage these headphones well that's interesting look at this these are shaped super interestingly i guess these ridges help it to uh not let water in your ear when you're swimming that's really cool all right let's go ahead and connect these and see uh how it all sounds all right i'm just gonna plug that in and then let's see i'm assuming you turn it on by holding down the play button got a red light has a uh sample song on here let's go next see if my music showed up yep my music that i put on here is actually working headphones feel a little funny because they're going a lot deeper than they normally would primarily because it's so they don't get water in there they're not bad quality they're pretty decent for just you know complimentary headphones that come with it and yeah go back forward yeah and it's working let's see if we can hear a little bit of uh actually let's see how loud it goes and see if you guys can hear it so yeah it works as intended and it was really easy i just went to youtube to mp3 plugged it in automatically popped up into a new window through the file in there and immediately it showed up and let me play it so works as intended but i'm not going to dunk this in water um it is uh pretty good and i'm pretty sure that it will work good in water i mean it says that it will and from just looking at it its visual dexterity and where its seam lines are seem like it will be um pretty good i wouldn't bring it in water if you don't have the headphone jack plugged in there though because that's just a open wound but yeah today i have kind of a quick video i just wanted to kind of show off these nice wire cutters i got and uh they're just some basic wire cutters but um i really wanted to see how well they did against some of the cords that i was working with i actually am working on kind of a retro project right now and i'll tell you guys more about that once i get closer to finishing it but uh let's go ahead and open these up and see how well they work for what i'm going to be using them for so these are what they look like kind of has a nice kind of plastic key thing on the outside for grip doing a pretty hard squeeze it has a little portion in here too i don't know if that's for stripping but i think it's just for like a regular kind of grip so i have a little bit of wire over here and this is actually doorbell wire and it's really thick this is if you notice when i bend it it it bends and it keeps its shape and it kind of uh it's very tough it has a very thick piece of um copper in the middle by oh that was really easy ooh look at that hardly any press immediately comes off let me zoom in right there and show you that copper thing i'm talking about if you look right here it has a uh pretty decent sized copper piece right there and i'm kind of using these to hook up in a arcade kind of set of buttons on the inside of a project i'm doing but let's see if we wanted to cut two of these at the same time easy i don't think this is a stripper no it's not let's see if i triple these up how well it would cut so this is four wires at once easy and honestly this is going to save my relationship too because i might have been using my fiance's fabric scissors to cut wire and don't do that but yeah these work really good and i'll put them in the description below i know this was a short video but i just wanted to show you guys and i hope you enjoyed and thank you guys so much for your support a huge shout out to my patreon's thank you guys so much for your support you guys are awesome if you enjoyed this video don't forget to comment rate and subscribe and as always i'll see you in the next video today we're going to be looking at these bomb out sw 19 neckband wireless earphones now these are for kind of like a sports like jogging like the other ones i reviewed but what's really nice about these ones is in the packaging if you pull right here it's actually attached by magnets it has a really nice opening to where you can see them immediately which is some pretty nice engineering on the packaging i really like when things open kind of smoothly like that it says right here that has an a and c on and off volume up slash next depending on if you press down or not the mfb and then the volume slash previous one and then also shows that it has a charging port at the bottom if we close this real quick we also see some of the features that are included a ipx waterproof 12 hour working time built-in microphone and middle finishing and then on the back it just gives kind of a view of what they're going to look like but let's go ahead and open these up and see how the quality is especially compared to the other ones i reviewed just a week ago looks like this slides out pretty easily set that to the side and i'm assuming these will just easily pop out let's go ahead and put some pressure there we go so here we go so the first thing that i'm noticing right here is this made out of like a plastic material as the other one that i was previously reviewing i believe had a metal material here i'm not too sure though the band is kind of the same kind of spaghetti noodle kind of silicone rubber as the other one very soft feeling to the touch so i assume that it will be just as comfortable and slip resistant off your neck the headphones have the same kind of grill on the inside to stop debris kind of hard to get a good view on that there's a little comfort thing for the inside of your ear so it's not to rough around the harder plastic and when you're wearing them from what it says on the front if they're hanging on your neck they'll actually touch together with these magnets right here so that they won't fall off even if they do slip off because it'll be kind of connected right here and it takes a little bit to actually pull them apart but yeah let's go ahead and connect these to my phone and then compare the quality and see how they are all right i went ahead and connected it it already said sw 19 and that's really cool because it also said it has 80 battery so it tells you how much battery is left in these which is very convenient so that uh you don't uh you know bring them with you and not know how much is in there you don't have to wait for a red light to come on or anything like that so that's good let's go ahead and go to youtube now and put on some no copyright all right i went ahead and connected some no copyright music so i'm going to go ahead and put these in my ear now and see how it sounds wraps around the neck pretty nice and let's go ahead and pop it in not too bad bass is pretty good a little temporary but uh pretty good balance it is not bad at all i'd say they're about a 8.5 out of 10 on the sound quality scale of my personal preference but that's just my personal preference let's put it next to here and see if you can hear any uh music coming through sounds pretty good connected pretty easy and yeah and don't forget that after you're done with your music you can just pop off this little slot right here and charge them back up again but yeah this has been the bomb owl sw 219 headset and uh i think i'll be using these as well maybe not as much as some of the other ones that i reviewed but they're definitely a good backup pair in case one of the other ones go out or you could keep them all charged at the same time so that uh if one dies you can switch to the other one but yeah and today we're looking at this kind of a little bit comical turn me on selfie ring light now i got this from the dollar store for 299 funny it's uh the dollar store but uh this is a amazing value apparently so this is a ring light that goes on the front of your cell phone that's supposed to give you that really kind of soft better skin kind of look for your selfies and if we take a closer look we can kind of get a little bit more uh look at what it's supposed to look like on the front of the phone so it has a bunch of little leds and then it's supposed to just slide right on there i'm not sure if it's going to work great for the size of my phone but we'll go ahead and see if we turn it around it says take selfies anywhere it says dark night clubs parties camping etc it says it has three adjustable three brightness levels for perfect bright pictures or videos in dark environments and it also has a rechargeable battery inside so you can charge it with usb that is included that's actually really nice and uh yeah so this is kind of what it's supposed to be looking like you're supposed to get pictures of that quality i'm assuming which i have a little bit of doubt but uh yeah so without further ado let's go ahead and unbox this and take some selfies with it and see how it looks so this is what the inside packaging looks like go ahead and slide that out comes on a little plastic tray right here so immediately you can see that it comes with a charging usb which is really handy and then here is the ring light as well it's going to be a little bit bright because of my lighting but if i adjust it downwards you can kind of see the details on it it has like a white kind of diffuser right here let's go ahead and zoom in on that so it has this white diffuser right here and then on the top is where the charging port is so you technically could charge it at the same time as using it if you needed to use it for a longer period of time or you picked it up when it was dead right here it has a little bit of a you can see that kind of a gel padding that way it won't hurt your phone and then the same gel padding on this side too so it's just kind of like a clip and then a hole right here i believe for your camera hopefully that works for me because my phone's a little bit uh different has a little bit of a different spot for the camera now let's see if there's any charge in here so there's already charge in here and it seems to be pretty bright it's actually not too bad so let's go ahead and turn this off and then i'm going to go ahead and take a selfie for you guys so a lot of you don't actually know what i look like so i've posted it in my community section before but let's go ahead and cut to that and see how the selfie turned out all right so i went ahead and i took a selfie so for those of you who don't know what i look like this is me josh and here's a video of me using it so there's that and yeah i think that the ring light works pretty well um especially in dark rooms i tried it a little bit in lighter rooms but honestly you'd have to have it on max brightness and i guess it would also depend on your skin tone too because i feel like this flares up the reds a little bit more um and maybe it just it looks better in darker rooms because it focuses on you and the camera kind of blackens out everything behind you so if you're in more of a darker room i think that this really emphasizes like the brights of your eyes and like and kind of makes your skin more fair so i think that that's uh primarily what this should be used for would be uh situations like that but yeah i think it's pretty nice and uh yeah that was my face so now this is a series that i mentioned a while ago and a lot of people wanted me to do so today we're going to be looking at a ruler and these are pretty much used very widely in schools at the house and everything but they're always used to measure things that are small to big so let's take a really close look at this we're really close up and see the details in the lettering so if we pinch and zoom real quick we can start to focus down on these letters right here if you notice you can actually see the pitting in the lettering right there on the sea there's like a little tiny thing right there i don't know if you can see it obviously my finger moved in there oh no i can't even point to it so it's that small you can see that right there if we drag this up this is actually the edge of the ruler kind of can see that see how far we can go in now might not be the clearest in the world but you can also see the edge of that oh man you can see there's like a hair right there that's crazy i can even see that like with my eyes even notice it there if we move down a little bit look there's a little cut in that probably from the grain looks like right here this is a number one everything looks so shiny close up does not look like that at all when it's uh farther away but you can see the reflectivity in everything and you can really see let's try to focus in and look at that that's so cool let's go to zoom out a little bit there we go so we saw the number two really up close and oh that looks scary if we had to zoom in on that let's see if we can zoom in on that yeah there we go cool you know what it kind of reminds me of it kind of reminds me of like an ocean drop off like you're focused in on this like underneath it's like just an abyss so we can go down to the inches i really like the edge of this that's so cool oh you know what if we zoom down a little bit push that forward look at that that is the middle piece that's inserted into the wood that makes it to where when you move your pencil along on your pen it stays steady look at that the reflection of the light against my fingertip is enough to highlight it that is so cool look at that oh look there's like a tiny little piece right there moving that with my my skin i can't feel that at all there is no feeling of me moving this because it's so small for an idea of how small this is let's go ahead and zoom out look at that that is insane let's go ahead and focus back in here so here's an inch i believe and then there's a centimeter over here almost to the end of it i think actually it goes up to 28 i want to straighten that out a little bit we're almost there i know it goes up to 30 there we are at the very end you can see all of the uh flakiness of the wood on the edges it's kind of rounded off right there like it bumped into something it says inch whoa what's that looks like something sticky got on here like food who knows how long that's been on there which is strange because i didn't even see that at all like let's zoom out i didn't even notice that like what kind of it looks like gross like sticky candy or something i'll zoom in on it look at that kind of weird stuff is that that's pretty gross and then we also have the groove that's in the center that moves along the entirety let's go ahead and flip it over so this is the more cleaner portion of the mover it's flat there's nothing on this side except the little tiny holes you get a really good view of that middle piece on this side look at that quite a bit of imperfections on this i think there's even a little pit right there we zoom in yeah look at that and it like goes downward and then up i wonder if this got damaged or that's just how it is and i never noticed this goes down and it goes back up into another thing as well that's so weird it's crazy like even with how small this is you can still see the reflection in it when i think of mirrors i usually think of them being big enough to capture like the human kind of uh you know face or reflection but when it's something this small i don't usually think oh there's still a reflection there but it still is reflecting the other side or the same side of the wood of the ruler that's crazy if we look right here we can see that there is still some flaking from when this was drilled out or pushed out to make the little hole right here i'm not sure what these holes are used for what do you guys think they're used for i think maybe they're used to hold this maybe in a binder or something but yeah very interesting product and uh usually not when you're just looking at it from you know a normal perspective but when you can zoom in on it and see all these little intricacies it makes it a lot more interesting let me know what you guys think about this video i want to do a lot more in the future and uh yeah a huge shout out to my patreon's thank you guys so much for your support you guys are awesome if you enjoyed this video don't forget to comment rate and subscribe and as always i'll see you in the next video


At Ohio State, Young pursued a major in criminology after being inspired by his father, who's a police officer, and several of his uncles and cousins who all work in law enforcement.   Oh, we're ready. Are we ready for another video series, my friends? Well, I am. I hope you guys are too, because this video series, I'm assuming will be everyone's cup of tea, because we're not gonna focus on one player, we're not gonna focus on one draft, we're not gonna focus on one combine. We're gonna focus on the first round of the 2020 draft, and I welcome you to it. Okay, I think we're ready. I actually think we're ready to crack into the latest video series. And guys, I wanna welcome you to that. Welcome! Welcome back to another video, welcome back to another rugby player reacts. It's not to the draft, it's not to the combine. It's not to Armin, it's not to Reuben, it's not to the BFL. It's not to Dave, it's not to backyard boxing. It is two of my favourite picks from the first round of the 2020 NFL draft. If you guys watched the first round with me, I hope you enjoyed. I certainly did. There was definitely a fair few players that came up that I knew. As soon as I'm ready, I'm gonna get the screen recorder going, turn on the camera, and do some research. Get these names and their story in my head before the upcoming season so then I can enjoy their play and also bring these videos to my channel because I'm hoping that the majority of my audience, if you're into American football, you will most likely be interested in these videos. So I'm really hoping that. And if you are, then I wanna welcome you. The first video, the first player, so we're gonna look at, we're not gonna go with the first pick because that was Joe Burrow and I've already done reaction videos on him and his college football. The second pick was Chase Young. And that will be the first video of the day. So today's video, we're focusing on Chase Young, the Ohio State offensive end or offensive tackle. I actually can't remember, so we're gonna get into that. The site I'm gonna use for this video series is Pro Football Reference. Now in the past, I've used Wikipedia. People have recommended using Pro Football Reference. We've also got ESPN.com, the NCAA College Football Player Rosters. So if there's any information there that I wanna see, I will. But with that being said, with the second pick of the 2020 NFL Draft, actually who selected them? We go down here, Chase Young, Ohio State, the Redskins. So with that being said, I'm gonna click on his name. Apparently they have all the latest news to do with the player and it's extremely helpful. It's right there. We've got his Combine measurements, although they're not all there. I wanna know what kind of information we can get from this. So if we go to Ohio State in the Big 10, and if we look at the roster, and we go down, down, down, down, down, down. Or is he not on the roster anymore? Huh, okay. So he's not in the roster anymore, but he was last year. God, these guys are huge. 64, 65, 66, 66, 350. No, not 305, sorry, 300, 310, 310, 305, 360, 285. DeWan Jones, 68, 360 pounds. Let's have a look at you. Wow, how old are you, mate?  Are we gonna get a birthday? I gotta look this guy up. I'm sorry, Chase Young's coming soon. 68, 359. He was a true freshman, and he still found a significant role on the Buckeyes team, appearing in 10 games and totaling 90 offensive snaps. A four-star prospect by ESPN. I need a birth date. Bro, why can't I get this guy's birthday? Oh my God, this is just gonna annoy me. Alright, mate. Well, 68, 360. As a freshman? That's absolutely incredible. So we're not gonna be able to use the ESPN site because the players have clearly moved on, they're not included in the roster. What we'll use, moving forward, is pro football reference and Wikipedia. Put Chase Young in there. We've got Chase Young up here. We've got Chase Young here. With that being said, I'm gonna take my first sip of coffee. I don't die. And I'll see you back here shortly to check out the big man, Chase Young, the scariest player in college football. Guys, we're back. I quickly decided the running order of these videos. I am going to search their story on Wikipedia. I'm gonna search their stats on pro football reference and any new news stories. And following that, we're gonna finish it off with a highlight video of each of the players. With that being said, let's begin. Hope you guys don't mind me putting a hood up. I quite like it. It's a nice fit. Actually, you'll probably prefer that one better, but we'll bring that out later. Okay, Wikipedia, Chase Young. Chase Young was born on April 14th, 1999. He's 21 years old. He's an American football defensive end for the Washington Redskins.  Well, all right then. He played college football at Ohio State University playing for the Buckeyes from 17 to 19. In his final season there, he broke the school's single season sack record with 16.5, which won him several honors, such as the Bronco-Nagurski Trophy, the Chuck Bednarik Award, and Ted Hendricks Award.  Three awards. Bronco-Nagurski Trophy, awarded annually since 1993 to the Collegiate American Football Defensive Player of the Year. So he got the defensive player of the year. Chuck Bednarik is presented annually to the defensive player in college football as judged by the Maxwell Football Club to be the best in the United States. The award is named for Chuck Bednarik, a former college and professional American football player, and we've got the Ted Hendricks Award that's given annually to college football's top defensive end. The award is named after Ted Hendricks, who is a member of both the College Football Hall of Fame and Pro Football Hall of Fame, and is presented by his own 501C3 Foundation, the Ted Hendricks Foundation. So he's got two defensive player of the year awards for college football, plus the best defensive end in college football. He was also named, it doesn't stop there, he was also named a unanimous All-American, as well as a finalist for the Heisman Trophy, which I saw, a feat considered rare for a defensive player, which... Yeah, I can't wait to see this guy play in the NFL. Well, actually, I haven't even seen him play in college football yet, to be fair. He was selected by the Redskins with the second pick of the 2020 NFL Draft. He stands at 6'5", or 1.96", which is the exact same height. Believe it or not, guys, I'm going to show you something interesting. Chase Young, listed at 6'5", 1.96". His weight is listed at 264 pounds, or 120 kgs. And if we just quickly go back to Wikipedia, and I search the late great Jonah Lomu, my favourite rugby player of all time, and we look at his statistics. This is going to be freakishly similar. 1.96", 6'5", 119 kgs, or 262 pounds. The thing about Jonah Lomu is that, at the same stats as Chase Young, he ran a 10.5 second 100-metre dash, which means he'd probably be running under a 4'4", for a 40-yard dash, at that size. Can you imagine Chase Young moving like that? Well, watch a bit of Jonah Lomu, and you'll see it in action. He's a legend. He's my favourite ever rugby player, and seeing those stats, it's the first thing that popped into my head. So I hope you enjoyed that. Jeez, an early start of crying then. I'm going to take this off now.  Chase Young was born in Upper Marlborough, Maryland, on April 14th, 1999. And on that day, on that day, I was eight years old. He began playing American football as a child, later attending St. Columbia, Columbus School, in Oxon Hill, Maryland. Following that, he attended St. Vincent Pilotti High School in Laurel, Maryland in 2013. Where he started at quarterback, an outside linebacker, as a freshman, before switching to defensive end later that year. He started at high school as a quarterback. I wonder how big he was at that point. As a sophomore the following year, he and the team won the Maryland Inter-Skeleistic Athletic Association C Conference Championship. He was also a member of the school's choir, playing the piano, saxophone, and violin. Mate, this just gets better and better. I don't think Jonah Lomu was playing the piano. In 2015, he transferred to D'Amaffa Catholic High School in Hyatsville, Maryland, where he had 19 sacks and 27 tackles for loss as a junior, helping the team win the Washington Catholic Athletic Conference Championship. In July 2016, he was invited to the opening, a college football recruiting camp sponsored by Nike, where he was named positional MVP. Okay, well, yeah, things were in the works back in 2016, clearly. As a senior in 2016, he had 19 sacks, 118 tackles, five force fumbles, and two defensive touchdowns that helped the team go undefeated and win another WCAC championship. By then, he was recognized as one of the best high school football players in the nation, where he was included in the 2016 USA Today All-USA High School Football Team and named All-Metropolitan Defensive Football Player of the Year by Washington Post. He was also invited to the International Bowl and All-American Bowl, playing on the East Team for the ladder. And you know what? The All-American Bowl held in San Antonio, Texas each year. Definitely rings a bell because a fellow friend of mine, Ruben, Ruben Linton, played in the 2009 All-American Bowl game in San Antonio, Texas, as quarterback, sorry, cornerback, and he got defensive player of the game. And he never went on to play Div1 College football, but I'm trying to do everything I can to help him get his name out there. And possibly, all going well, fulfill his dream once and for all at the age of 28 or 29. And that is becoming a pro football player. He deserves it. He's good enough. He's got the work ethic. He's humble. He'd be great for a locker room. And that's all I'm going to say on that. So we moved to college. Chase Young already, you know, killing it at high school level, but you never know how they're going to perform when they transition to college. And they certainly never know how they're going to perform when they transition from college to NFL. So Young Received Scholarship offers from over 40 colleges before committing to a higher-state university in July 2016, choosing them over other schools such as Alabama and Maryland due to the Buckeyes defensive line coach, Larry Johnson, who personally recruited him in whom Young considered a guru, as well as the school's overall approach that he felt was more family-orientated. Well, you're speaking to a huge Ohio State fan in me. So I'll definitely back you on that one. As a freshman in 2017, Young recorded 3.5 sacks, 18 tackles, and a force fumble as a reserve player. So he mustn't have played many games. In fact, looking here looks as if Harry played nine games. So he was a reserve. He wasn't starting. And that must have been really hard for the coach to do that. Chase Young took over as a starter for a sophomore season, lining up alongside Nick Bosa until his season-ending injury early on. Young recorded 10.5 sacks on the year despite spraining both ankles midway through, including three against Northwestern at the 2018 Big 10 Football Championship game. Well, that's a good game to do it in. He was named to that season's second team, all Big 10 team, for his performance. Young was named, and that's 2018, in a sophomore year. Young was named one of the team captains as a junior in 2019. So the defensive captain, defensive line captain. That year, he tied a higher-state school record for single-game sacks and tackles for loss in a win against Wisconsin. In November 2019, Young was suspended for two games by the NCAA for getting an unauthorised loan from a family friend who allegedly helped his girlfriend attend the 2019 Rose Bowl, which he later repaid in full. Well, that doesn't seem very fair. Young recorded three sacks against Penn State in his final game after returning. He ended the season with 16.5 sacks, 46 tackles, 21 tackles for loss, 7 force fumbles, 3 battered passes, and a blocked field goal! His 16.5 sacks broke the single-season school record previously held by Vernon Golston, who had 14 in 2007. And where did Vernon Golston end up? Well, he played in the NFL for four years. He went 6th pick in the 2008 draft to the Jets, then went to the Bears, then went to the Rams. Interesting. Young was named... Okay. Young won 7... Okay. Okay. Oh, my God. Oh, my Lord. This guy is a prodigy.  This guy was a man among boys. We just covered three awards that he got before. It turns out he actually got one, two, three, four, five, six, six awards. And they are the Nagurski Trophy, the Chuck Bednarik Award, the Ted Hendricks Award, the Chicago Tribune Silver Football Award, which is the college football player determined to be the best player from the Big Ten Conference, the Nagurski Woods and Defensive Player of the Year Award, which is the individual honors at the end of each football season, the most valuable player of the conference, and the Smith Brown Defensive Lyman of the Year, which I assume is the most valuable football player of the conference once again. So, holy shit, man. I'm going to see some of these highlights.    So that's going to be good to see. So we've got all those awards. In addition, he was named Walter Camp Defensive Player of the Week for his performances against Wisconsin and Penn State, unanimously named the 2019 All Big Ten in All American teams, and was voted Ohio State's Male Athlete of the Year. I haven't seen that before. He was also named a finalist for the Walter Camp Award, Maxwell Award and Heisman Trophy, becoming only their ninth defensive player since 1982 to be nominated for the ladder, where he finished fourth in voting behind Quarterbacks Joe Burrow, Jalen Hertz, and Justin Fields. He finished his career at Ohio State with 30.5 total sacks, which ranked second all time there behind Mike Rebels, 36, and who is Mike Rebel? An American football coach and former linebacker who is currently the head coach of the Tennessee Titans was drafted in the third round, pick number 91 in the 1997 draft. He played at the Steelers from 97 to 2000, the Patriots from 0-1 to 0-8, and the Chiefs from 0-9 to 10. And as a coach, he's coached at Ohio State, Houston Texans, and the Tennessee Titans.  So total statistics as we just read 34 games, 68 solo tackles, 30 assisted tackles for a total of 98 tackles, and 40 and a half of those are for loss. So almost 50% of the time, Chase Young, when coming up on a one-on-one tackle, is going to actually push the guy back. So when you are obviously touted as being one of the top prospects, obviously going to go on the first round, probably in the first five picks, it seems you don't really have to attend the NFL Combine to prove anything, which makes sense. Young decided to forgo his senior year at Ohio State by declaring for the 2020 draft, where he was considered by many to be the best overall prospect. He attended the NFL Combine, but did not participate in any workouts or drills, stating that he did not want to waste time being a Combine athlete. Young was one of 58 players invited to the draft, which was held virtually due to social distancing regulations, arising from blah, blah, blah, where he was selected by the Rossington Redskins with the second overall pick. He played basketball at Bowie State University, sorry, this is Young's father, Greg, played basketball at Bowie State University before working as police deputy with Arlington County Sheriff's Office, while his mother Carla works for the Office of Investigations for the Department of Transportation. Young has a sister, Wesley, who played college football at North Carolina. At Ohio State, Young pursued a major in criminology after being inspired by his father, who's a police officer, and several of his uncles and cousins who all work in law enforcement.   Young has nicknamed the Predator for his on-field dominance, as well as his dreadlocks, resembling the Predators from the Predator franchise. Young also played other sports, such as basketball and sprint running. In basketball, we played alongside Markel Futz, who was later selected first overall in the 2017 NBA draft. Okay, that's a story and a half. And with that being said, let's get into the reaction. Are you ready? Because I am. But we're gonna do that in the next video. Chase Young, good luck for this season. I'll be following you, mate. And you've got a fan in me. So peace out.


The signal oil program, the Whistler. That whistle is your signal for the signal oil program, the Whistler. I am the Whistler, and I know many things for I walk by night. I know many strange tales hidden in the hearts of men and women who have stepped into the shadows. Yes, I know the nameless terrors of which they dare not speak. Yes, friends, it's time for the signal oil program, the Whistler. Rated tops in popularity for a longer period of time than any other West Coast program in radio history. And signal gasoline is tops too, tops in quality. It takes extra quality, you know, to give you extra mileage. And signal is the famous go farther gasoline. So look for the signal circle sign in yellow and black that identifies independently operated signal stations from Canada to Mexico. And now to Whistler's strange story. All damage covered. As usual, the swank orchid room was crowded. And the reason for the popularity of this small nightclub in downtown Los Angeles was obvious. At the moment, the tall, slender girl with the honey-colored hair stood before the microphone and the dance floor, swaying with the rhythm of her song. Just who can solve this mystery? Why should it make a fool of me? Maxine had sung those words over and over, night after night. But suddenly, she seemed to be singing them for the first time. Suddenly, she was the woman the words were written for. The thought of killing him had occurred to her before. But never in the middle of a song had she known this cold-blooded, dispassionate desire to kill a man she'd married. Later, in her dressing room, Maxine had changed into her street clothes when she heard a knock on the door. And she didn't have to guess who it was. This wasn't just her boss. This was Jim McCoy, a guy as real as his name. Hiya, songbird. Hello, Jim. Real great tonight. Real great.  Maybe I did. Well, keep it up. I can always add a few more chairs for the customers. Well, I gotta get back to the lounge. What's your hurry? Hurry. And we usually say goodnight about this time. That's what I mean. Do we have to? Look, baby, we've been through all this before. Observation. The tone of your voice goes well with the cold of your shoulder. Maxine, things were different when you were a cute trick on the loose. You may be Miss Maxine to the customers, but to me you're Mrs. Charlie Kindle. I know. But after all, what's in a name? Look, baby, maybe they don't show, but I still have a couple of old scruples lying around. Don't kid yourself. They show something awful. Charlie needs you now more than ever. No fun not being able to walk, cooped up day in and day out.  Yeah, I guess you're right, Jim. Forget it. Yeah, I think we're better. Good night, songbird. And so, Maxine, a half hour later you're driving over the freeway, going home to Charlie, your husband. You can't help but admire Jim for turning you down, can you? Because of the way things stand, because you're married to Charlie. You drive on through the night thinking about it. And by the time you reach the outskirts of Ellenville, you've decided that there must be a showdown with Charlie. As you start to plan the things you'll say... Sorry, lady, a roadblock. Oh, but I live in Carpenceet. I've got to get home. There's been a landslide. Won't be able to get through for a couple of hours yet. Oh, I see. Train coming through in about ten minutes from Malay. Now, if you're ready, you can go back to the main road, take a ten-mile detour. No, thanks. I'll take the train. You turn your car around, and minutes later park it on a quiet side street near the depot and hurry to catch the train.  As you step into the living room, you see Charlie, stretched out on the couch, an empty bottle on the floor, the cane propped up against the end table, cigarette smoke curling up around the hand that dangles over the edge of the couch. It's a familiar sight to you, isn't it, Maxine? Charlie's been an invalid for two years now. He was injured again when he fell while getting off the suburban train a month ago. Still hasn't minted. You hurry to Charlie's side. From his hand, you take the cigarette that's ready to fall to the floor. Charlie. Come on, come on, sweetheart. Come to the party. Charlie. Charlie, wake up. Oh, Maxine. Hey, old baby. Yeah, baby's home. Oh, Mr. Dropped Off. What time is it? Oh, a few minutes to four. Four? What took you so long, Maxine? There was a roadblock at Ellenville. Oh, that's too bad. I had to leave the car there and take the train. Sure, sure. I had to wait ten minutes for the train. It took fifteen minutes to get to Carpenceet, twenty minutes to get a cab to take me here, and I... Okay, okay, honey. I believe you. I believe you. Well, why shouldn't you? It's the truth. Sure it is, baby. Sure. You don't believe a word of it. You never do. Do you want to know something? I don't care, Charlie. I don't care what you believe anymore. Don't you think I know that, Maxine? Honey, don't rub it in there. I know you go out and date when you're finished at the club. They even know about the guy you work for, McCoy. I was not on a date tonight with Jim or anybody else. Sure, baby. Anything you say. I'll never ask any more questions. This is as long as you come home to me.  Maybe I'll never come home again. Don't say that, Maxine. Why shouldn't I? I mean it. I've told you before. You'll never get rid of me. We're married and you can't change that. Don't tempt me, Charlie. You struggle to control the rage that's sweeping over you. Turn away from Charlie and hurry into the bedroom. You stand there in the darkness by the open window while the frost of night bites the anger in your cheeks. The train, Maxine. Yes. Why couldn't it have been late tonight? Ten minutes late. Ten minutes. The cigarette would have slipped out of Charlie's hand. The straw rug would have caught on fire. It would have solved all your problems. Suddenly an idea flickers through your mind. It could happen again. Charlie could fall asleep with a cigarette in his hand. There'd be a fire. But you'd be somewhere else when that happened, Maxine. An alibi. All you need is an alibi. And in an instant it becomes crystal clear to you how you can get one. Maxie. Maxie. Huh? Oh, what is it, Charlie? All by yourself in the dark, baby. It's on your mind. I was just thinking about the train. With the prologue of all damage covered, the Signal Oil Company brings you another strange story by The Whistler. You've heard me talk about the more thorough, more conscientious service that cars get at signal stations because signal dealers are in business for themselves and have a personal interest in pleasing you. Well, typical of this are the extras you enjoy when you have your car lubricated at a signal service station. Instead of taking the chance of remembering the many vital points on each make of car, signal dealers follow a factory-recommended lubrication chart, which plainly shows every lubrication point on your car. Also, signal dealers use nine specialized signal oils and greases, so each part will have the exact type of protection it needs. But do they stop there? No, sir. Just to make doubly sure not a single part has been overlooked, they check each point again, which is why it's called signal double-check lubrication. Now, that's the kind of lube service you want if your car is to give you the long, trouble-free service that was built into it. And that's the kind of lubrication you get from friendly, independent signal dealers. And now, back to The Whistler. You've reached a decision, haven't you, Maxine? You're going to rid yourself of your husband, Charlie, once and for all. And you know exactly how you're going to do it. You can see it all now, the way it's going to happen, the official version of the accident. Charlie asleep on the couch, the empty bottle of liquor on the floor, a lighted cigarette dropping from his hand to the straw rug, and then the fire. And you went around to prevent it. It's late afternoon at the following day when you awaken. And as you recall your plan, your heart throbs with a sick, dizzy excitement. After a reassuring cup of coffee, you call the train depot. Check the schedule of the evening train to Los Angeles. Then you take your time dressing. Fight to remain calm. Shortly before 5.30. Hey, Max, are your cabs here? Coming. Well, what's in the suitcase, honey? Oh, it's just a dress I'll need at the club. Bye, hon. Bye. Maxine. Yeah? Try to make it home early tonight, will you? It's kind of lonesome around here. Don't worry, Charlie. I'll... I'll be back before you know it. A quarter of an hour later you reach the depot, buy your ticket and start for the train. You're about to put your plan into operation, aren't you, Maxine? And you smile to yourself as you think of the first move. Charlie's accident on this very line put the idea into your head. As you reach the train, you start up the step. One step and then another. And as you near the platform, you deliberately place your foot between the two steps and throw yourself forward. Miss. Miss. Are you hurt? I... I don't know. Oh, wait, wait. Let me help you. There. There. You'd better sit down on the trains, baby. Thank you. I'll be all right. That's terribly clumsy of me. Well, accidents do happen. They seem to run in the family. A month ago my husband had a similar fault. Oh! You're angry? Yes. It'll be all right now, I'm sure. Well, is there anything I can do, Miss? No, no, thank you. Well, I... I'm sorry. I'll have to have your name, Miss, my report, you know. It's just routine. Oh, of course. Uh, Mrs. Charles Kendall. Uh, Mrs. Charles Kendall. Address, please. 752, Mabelton Drive. You smile, lean forward, continue to rub your ankle as you watch the conductor fill in the report. Everything's there, isn't it, Maxine? Your name, the date, time of accident. Yes. Everything working according to plan. You've established your presence on the train to Los Angeles. As soon as the conductor is out of sight, you pick up your suitcase, hurry into the lady's room.  All traces of your original makeup have been removed. And in your new makeup, you've suddenly become a different woman, a plain, older-looking, unattractive woman. Bell and bells. Next stop, Bell and bells. As the train stops, you get off without delay and hurry away from the depot. You find your car where you'd parked it the night before. On the quiet side street, and minutes later you're racing a good 70 miles an hour along the road back to Carpencita. Luckily, your train is a slow train because you must make up a good 35 minutes before it arrives in Los Angeles. It's dark now, and no one sees you as you arrive in Carpencita. You quietly park in an alley and then walk quickly to the rear entrance at your home and slip inside. And then you're standing in the living room, looking down on Charlie, sprawled out on the couch. The sleeping powder you slipped into his drink before you left has taken effect. Hasn't it, Maxine? Charlie? He doesn't stir. Quickly you light a cigarette. Drop it on the straw rug. In a few seconds it begins to smolder. In strange fascination you watch the flames begin to creep along the floor and then you turn and run from the house. It's over, isn't it, Maxine? The worst part of all. As you hurry back to the car, you know there's only one more thing that you have to do. You must overtake the train at one of the many stops it makes and somehow get back on board unnoticed. To be in the clear, perfectly safe. That conductor must see you get off at Union Station. Those are tense moments, aren't they, Maxine? Moments that seem like a lifetime. You take this short straight highway into Los Angeles, hitting better than 70 miles an hour most of the way. Finally you catch your train at one of its last stops and get back on just in time. Disappear quickly into the lounge room where you can change back into your original outfit. Union Station! Union... Oh, Mrs. Kendall. Ankle better, Mrs. Kendall. Yes, thank you, conductor. Oh, that's fine. Union Station! Your plan has worked perfectly, hasn't it, Maxine? You keep telling yourself that over and over again.  Oh, no!  This man in the pinstripe suit. Instantly your mind goes back to that night a few weeks ago when you came home late just as this same man was leaving and you heard him say to Charlie, No, don't worry, Kendall. I'll take care of everything. It's all clear to you now, isn't it, Maxine? Now you know why this man in the pinstripe suit was talking to Charlie a couple of weeks ago. Charlie was hiring him to follow you. Perhaps he was following you tonight. You step back into the train, hurry through the cars and get off further down the platform. It isn't until you climb into a taxi and try to settle back that you realize you're trembling all over, shaking uncontrollably. Somehow you manage to compose yourself, regain your confidence for the time you reach the club and go inside to greet Jim at the bar. Hiya, songbird. Hello, Jim. Say, your feathers look a little ruffled. You're limping. Oh, I fell and scraped my knee while I was getting on the train tonight. Train? How come you took the train? Oh, I was too tired to drive all the way home last night, so I left the car in town. Well, you better take it easy. Sure you want to go tonight? Oh, don't worry, I'll make it. Okay. How's Charlie? Charlie?  Oh, no, Jim. I haven't forgotten. As a matter of fact, I'm very grateful to you. You made me see what my beauty was. Yeah. Glad to hear it, baby. That night you deliver the song mechanically, don't you, Maxine? Because your mind is on something else. It's been four hours since the fire started and you still haven't had any word. But as you approach your dressing room... Maxine! I didn't see you, Jim. As a call for you, baby, you can take it in my office. Call? Mm-hmm. Who is it, you know? Long distance, yeah. Carpensita. Probably Charlie. Your mind is blank for the next few moments until you find yourself alone in Jim's office. Your fingers tightly gripping the telephone receiver as you slowly raise it to your lips. Hello? Mrs. Kendall? Yes, this is Mrs. Kendall. This is Captain Gray, Carpensita Fire Department. Oh? I'm sorry, Mrs. Kendall. I have some bad news about your husband. It won't take long, Maxine. Karen, I just want to ask some questions. I'll be as brief as possible, Mrs. Kendall. Thank you. Your husband was an invalid, was he not? That's right. Smoked quite a bit. Is that correct? Yes, he smoked quite a bit. And he was a heavy drinker as well. Drinking helped relieve his pain. Oh, don't misunderstand me, Mrs. Kendall. I'm not trying to establish that your husband was a chronic alcoholic, just that he did drink at times to a point of... Yes, yes, he did. Oh, then I think the conclusion we drew from the evidence is correct. Your husband fell asleep with a lighted cigarette while in a state of intoxication. Cigarette fell and that was it. I was afraid that would happen someday. I warned him so many times. Easy, Maxine. Mrs. Kendall, if you'll please sign this. What? Yes. Honey, you're trembling. Here, I'll hold it. I... I... What is it, Mrs. Kendall? Nothing. I'm just upset that's all. Oh, I'm sorry, Mrs. Kendall. Thank you for your cooperation. And finally it's over, Maxine. Really over. Without even the necessity for the alibi, which you went to so much trouble establishing. The man from the coroner's office is gone and you're alone with Jim. With no more barriers between you. It's all you can do to keep from blurting out how good you feel inside. How little you need the rest that Jim is trying to insist upon. I still think you should take it easy, honey. Stay in bed for a while. Oh, no, Jim. I'm not going to let myself brood about this. I want to work. It'll help, I know. Okay, songbird, you win. Oh, thanks, Jim. I appreciate everything you've done. And I hope I sound sentimental. You do. I can take it. I'll see you later. That night your song is different. The nervousness is gone, isn't it, Maxine? Suddenly you're gripped with terror and the song dies in your throat.  Through the amber haze, sitting motionless at the bar, you see the man in the pinstripe suit. In that instant, you're certain he was hired by your husband to follow you. You're not going to let yourself go. You're not going to let yourself go. You're going to let yourself go. You're not going to let your husband to follow you. You don't know how long he's been following you, but in that moment of desperation, you suddenly turn, flee from your surprised audience toward the dressing room. It's me. Now look, Maxine, what's this all about? What did that man say to you, Jim? No, it's got you worried, hasn't it? No, no, I'm not worried. It's just a nervous reaction, that's all. Now listen to me, baby, this isn't a relapsus or something else. How about you kicking in with a few more to-tables? I'm un-strong, after all. Answer me one question. What question? What do you know about that fire? Nothing, Jim. How could I know? Answer me. There's nothing to answer, Jim. What's wrong? Why do you keep looking at me that way?  When I told you I thought it was Charlie, you almost keeled over, and I think I know why, baby. You already knew about that fire. No, Jim, no! And if you knew about it, you started it. I swear, I swear, I didn't. Jim, please don't tell that to him. He knows too much already, Jim, and I... I thought so. And I think I was in love with you.  Jim!  He wants to see you. Oh, don't go, Jim. Don't leave me alone. Not now. He's got to help me. He's got to help me figure this out. Jim, you mustn't leave me. Not now! Frantically, you're slipping to your coat. Hurry out the side door after him. But Jim's nowhere in sight, and you leap into a waiting cab. Yeah, what to, lady? Would you mind cruising around a bit? I'm looking for someone. A man. Sure, lady. Hey, see me up, lady? No, no, I don't. But let's not stop. Okay. You're sure the guy you're looking for, I'm looking for you? What? There's a black car that's been following us ever since we started. No. No, that's not the man I want. Driver, turn the corner, do anything, but lose that car! As you speed along the street, it suddenly occurs to you exactly what's happening. Yes, you ran out to find Jim, and now you're trying to escape the man in the pinstripe suit. Fear sweeps over you and crowds Jim from your mind, that you know you've got to get away from this man.  Speak it around one corner, then another, and another, turning, twisting, and then suddenly... Driver! Yeah? That station up ahead, is that the electric train? Yeah! Here, this will take care of the fare. Let me off, quickly! The black car is nowhere in sight as you leave the cab, and hurry to the dimly-lit, deserted station. You're praying wildly for a train when suddenly you're relieved to see the lights approaching in the distance. And then, then as you step out on the platform... Hey, hey there! You see the man in the pinstripe suit hurrying toward you.  Mrs. Candle, Mrs. Candle, wait a minute! You hear his footsteps approaching along the platform.  Then as he steps into view, you land. How can you do that? How can you... The whistler will return in just a moment with a strange ending to tonight's story. Meantime, a word about these chilly nights and mornings we've been having. To be sure your car will start pronto, the instant you touch the starter, you naturally want to be sure you're choosing the gasoline that stops in quality. But how can the average driver measure gasoline quality? By mileage, of course. Which explains why we're so proud of Signal's good mileage, which has made it known throughout the West, from Canada to Mexico, as the go farther gasoline. You see, in order to give you such good mileage, today's signal has to help your motor run more efficiently. And when your motor runs more efficiently, naturally you enjoy quicker starting, as well as faster pickup and smoother power. A kind of performance that makes driving more pleasure in cold weather or any weather. That's why Signal says, to be sure of the tops in gasoline quality, there are just two things to remember. One, it takes extra quality to go farther. And two, Signal is the famous go farther gasoline. And now, back to the whistler. The small group of passengers have gathered on the station platform. Standing around in shock silence, they'd waited until the ambulance arrived and the police. Okay, okay, now here, now let's keep back a little here. I saw the whole thing, officer. I was sitting up front by the window, I could see just the plane. All right, lady, all right, you'll get your turn. I want to know what the motorman has to say first. I'll tell you. If you don't mind.  Well, officer, when we got close to the station platform, I saw this woman and she tries to push this fella onto the tracks. And then the fella steps out of her way and she goes over herself. I couldn't stop in time to keep him hitting us. Now here, now here, where's the fella she was trying to push over? Right here, sir. Oh, will you come up here? What's your name? Henry Cooper. Did you know that woman? No, I never got a chance to meet her. I've just been trying to. Her name's Mrs. Kendall. Well, how come she tried to push you in front of a train? I don't know. You see, I worked for the railroad and claims investigator. Yeah? Well, a month ago, her husband was in an accident. Funny thing, a couple of days ago, she was in a similar accident. I only wanted her to sign a voucher. So I could give her a check to cover all damages. Let that whistle be your signal for the signal oil program, the Whistler, each Sunday night at this same time. Brought to you by the signal oil company, marketers of signal gasoline and motor oil, and fine quality automotive accessories. Signal has asked me to remind you to get the most driving pleasure, drive at sensible speeds, be courteous, and obey traffic regulations. It may save a life, possibly your own. Featured in tonight's story were Doris Singleton, Gerald Moore, and Wilms Herbert. The Whistler was produced by George W. Allen and directed by Sterling Tracy, with story by Robert Stephen Brody, music by Wilbur Hatch, and was transmitted to our troops overseas by the Armed Forces Radio Service. All characters portrayed on the Whistler program are fictional. Any similarity of name or resemblance to persons living or dead is purely coincidental. Remember at this same time next Sunday, another Strange Tale by the Whistler. Marvin Miller speaking. This is CBS The Columbia Broadcasting System.


My name is Silva Kido and today I'm leaving a testimony to see one of the greatest history of making Kenya, the first Kenyan digital couple. Ya ni hawa mezok funga ndoa ki digitali na mezok witness na his Excellency William Samoiruto Mambo Vipe. Kupua. Komadzina Bona Rusya na itwa na ni? Na itwa Nikola Sungunjeri Mwangi. Nikola Sungunjeri Mwangi. Biha Rusi. Haa, Komadzina na itwa Judith Jelagat. Judith Jelagat. Biha, kujo mebi, safari enyu ya kweza ku witness something amazing. I know, Haa Rusi ni kitu mbaia watu na iensis kuzote. Ni ni mbaia wmkutara jia. Ina se bekana wmkutara jia kufanya the biha the first digital couple. Ilkuwaji. Pueh, it was a... Siki tutulikotu na expect. Actually, the office of the registrar alitupi Gelsimo Jana. Um... We were called yesterday. I was called yesterday in the morning because me... Mindi on nilikonumapanya all the registration online. So I was called in Kambua. We are aware that Niniakwiko next Friday, right? We want you to push it to this Friday because it has this thing to now launch the E-Citizen. And we want you to be part of it and the president will also be there. I was like, oh no. E-Citizen nilikonumita raji. I thought it was just me and my sisi na when you want to see me. Me, that's it. But... Well, I told him, let me talk to my partner. We'll get back to you. And I asked her and she was like, where, Apana? Me, I had to see oni katu tatobwa. Kamuliza ni ni ni ni to me bakisha. It's just one week. I think 70% of it is nilikotu na faku fanya tushafanya. So why not? Kaniyama besawa. And I was at work actually. I worked at the airport at the LSG Sky Show. Nili na barusa tu mahi chara kaniyama, you just go. And I came to the office to tell you everything that is happening. Without any ceremony, ni takuatu kwa both presidenta tapita kwa to congratulate and that's it. We never thought that ni takuatu kwa stage belia kila butu in front of the whole world. And... Ni re kaya gwe re. It was. Bia Rusi. Bia Rusi ni kitu ambawe kila mtuna fraia. Lakin ni utumona his excellency William Samarutu. Amuweza kwitnesa Rusi. Ako vile vile meza kupatia za wadi. Me, kwanza kitia kwanza na ashkuru. Muweza na paskeleo. Sikuwa na tarajiakitu. Tu kubaka hii fanyike. I've never expected that ni kitu big if. Kwa we dinyang wi fanyike kubaka hii. But ni God. So, kukuza kwa presidenta. E mi kwan ni surprise puetu. Venye mahi lava pali na meza na... ...i eventi na fakua leo na presidenta ta huduria. At first kwanza sikuwa na mi nilizani kwanza ni prank. But sabi ni mefika leo. Tumona presidenta me kudza. Ri oza wadi tume pewa. Tume fraia sana. Alright, kumalizi ya maybe. Kusabi ya time na una ni me pukata 3 minuts. Na interview ni okofa hidi ya nini. But kusabi ya management nasama tumalizi ya. Mungalesha rice mombi ojumbe mombi asanti. Ninge sema santi kwa rice. For even being part of this nini arusiyetu. It's such a non. I don't think... I think neza countwa to any presidenta me huduria arusiyuna. I don't think kuna muntumonia kwa ilevo lietu. And neza kusema tii presidenta le huduria arusiyaka. So it's such a non and... Ninge penda kusema. Thank you so much for this opportunity. And we hope that kuna kitumzuri takuja uto this. Amen. Atama ni na inapotia. So Mr. President, rakshukuru sana kwa huduria arusiyetu ilevo. Tuna shukuru sana kwa zawadia maumetupatia. Na otwachini kasi si muhaslas. Si zambolakwaida president kuduria function kwa ileetu. But tuna sema ni asanti sana. Na piya tunge penda maybe ukoku diria marusi sana-sana. Labda mwishotu ni muleza ku ile shotu notice ku ita labda familia ama mko bekenu na marafiki ilikua vipi. So venye sasa tuliambewa, wa given speciala tukumi inclusive of us na the bridal team. So it was ilikua hektik sana kwanza kupanga because you're working with the number of six, but later on we will discuss now waka to increase here to 15 and even kwanza ata kumeku kwa because ata badu tunafanya preparations and we're the only ones doing this but at least ni ni bridal team ni niwa nyelikuna tisimamiwa litu sa idea even contacting the family members and we thank God for those who will manage kukuja ata kama sii wote it was such an honor to have you here. I think I can attest kusema tii kila mtu ali jengoi I can see, I saw smiles in their faces so na jotu kila mtu na fil vinyata mi na fil sayi. Neza mami bia labda wakenya lunch kitu kapa nenda reception state house ama alafu honeymoon ni wapu sa. Well, sijajua so far mi badu tuni na directiva so sijajua ma li tuni enda na 4-3 tii mi hangu at least on diwa kona information ni na fia ma li tuni enda from na on. Congratulations once again thank you so much for speaking to us and may God reward you more may God bless your marriage and we're looking forward to see you living a happy life with your family. God bless you. Say hi to buti sa. I will. My dear, e-interview. It's for them.


How to respond and revise to students' writing in a writing course is important decision and this is what we will discuss in this module. Responding on to the first draft is kind of intervention between revising and drafting. And it's not like that the response, teacher's response or feedback is delayed to the second or the final draft. Because if it's delayed to the final one, students might realize that there is nothing to be done, it has been written. So actually students need continuous motivation, continuous feedback along with their writing. So that actually gives quick reaction to their initial drafts. And that will make them think that what they are writing is, they are writing with a purpose, it has some importance. So you might agree with me and you might have seen yourself as writing instructors in your own teaching context that some teachers don't respond or they delay the response to the final stage. And this might cause failure of writing in the students. So what we need to realize as language teachers is the importance of responding. For example, from my own personal teaching experience, a viewpoint, I make it necessary for the students to submit first draft, second draft, third draft and the final draft. And I offer feedback and this feedback is actually counter towards their overall grading or their score in the course. So if, for instance, feedback is delayed, delayed to the extent of final stage, the students might take the exercise lightly or they might not take it with interest or their motivation is lost. Revising, responding and revising go hand in hand. When you respond, students revise and it's sort of, it has to be done on daily basis in the light of the feedback provided by the teacher. So feedback actually offers students insights and they, that make the students notice the gap between the current performance and the desired performance. So apart from grammar covered in the feedback, we also need to point out the global content and it has to go global content is the ideas, the structure, the organization, the middle, the conclusion. So then we can engage students into peer feedback. For example, we can make students feed their work allowed to other students and they can interact, they can collaborate and come up with their own strategies of planning, drafting and revising. There is a comprehensive checklist which I would like to give here and which you can use as language teachers to make students see if they are responding and revising their work properly. One of the important elements is the, what is the greatest trend of their writing and what is the greatest weakness of their writing. Students can themselves find out and draft their writing or assignment. What's the central idea? If the central idea has been explained well, described well, narrated well or examples, sufficient examples have been given and which ideas need more clarity or elaboration, which are, which ideas need more like polishing. And where should examples come, whether the examples should be given in the middle or at what stage, where the organization is lacking, where the structural component is affected or confusing. So revision checklist is important. So overall, the main point which I want to make in this module is that responding to students work is an important element of writing course, which helps students see the gap between the current and desired performance.


The study found that Australian women consume approximately 1mg of phytoestrogens per day, which is similar to other Western populations, but much lower than that among Asian women. Those with a relatively high phytoestrogen diet also tend to have a healthier lifestyle and a more favourable dietary profile compared to others. This article was authored by Petra H. Lahman, Maria Celia Hughes, Torakiri Aibabil and others.