al pb mike novella gonna ain't gonna live with that they're looking at dylan gabriel adley rushman i don't know past that but dylan gabriel is the talk right now that'd be a that'd be a good one for them oh yeah he's a beast that'd be a good pickup nucleus of joey vado canooks down six five at 18 seconds damn oh sounds like they can't score late oh good thing we didn't turn it on yeah so we were just nuclear it's called reagan's i like it i like it coming better from vaughn yeah me too makes it nice and soft nox lose do they really lose six to five please god don't tell me they tried to empty net it no definitely and let me drop another goal 18 seconds yeah i miss wide left damn mani machado to 199 carlos rodin yeah tomorrow one in one basketball and inception baseball i don't even know if they're gonna have conferences here soon shady yeah with how this is going gold schmidt the transfer portal in the pack 12 no longer i know what is it for conferences the big 25 whatever they got going now j rod and the sec is like a billion teams now do the big 40 smu and cow coming over the cc sick man germy panya it's like yeah we're out of here the atlantic the atlantic yeah the atlantic west coast conference yeah stanford too i think it is i think stanford's going to shun shun i saw the curtains yesterday man oh yeah so dark in there yeah it is hella dark in there so ridiculous uh wilson contrarious refractors you waters they're shady it's other shady green spaced us to 99 germy panya ron brocunia et talent javier asad i need to be a close game tovar gold josh young rookie congrats on that one there uh brian that is gonna work you go brian uh 25 of 50 very nice take that all day all day tommy uh henry yeah it was literally 2 p.m and you can't see your hand i know great corvin carroll rookie uh launched an orbit of lanzo and brice harper that will do it for the break everybody thanks again for the fail or not everybody that would do pretty great brian thanks again for your support we'll get them out to you buddy she's going off script and losing it let's go losing it evidently yeah i am going off script god a bot um again i'll just drop you guys a link to personals because again there's literally two waters in q and that's gonna take very long so personals personals there you go if you'd like a personal there you are what are you doing shawn i know go to bed what are you getting into all right go to bed baby oh god this is gonna be funny both name shady and uh what's it called shady so thick shady is a dolphin's fan and shady jade's a bill's fan oh no that's gonna be fun oh i know that the shadies are always at odds just took my boy in golf bill stink uh there's shawn going bill stink they did beat the dolphins though so i mean the dolphins are kind of bots no no he's a gators fan gators fan you even worse now that's so funny dude i love it that the shadies are at odds it's awesome and now now boys play nice everybody now now i just want to see this three-legged real quick let's see how gorgeous this looks hopefully i didn't screw something up and bet the wrong thing oh yeah there it is over the canucks and lebron let's go that freaking de angelo russell sold i bet de angelo russell too and he sold 13 and a half points in school 13 and a half points kind of boddish my boy millie beesley can score 13 and a half dude you got something wrong all right good luck here kyle let's do it oh wait i gotta upload that right hold on hold on hold on again literally just shoot this in one more order in queue and that's it so i'll stick around for a couple of minutes after if nothing else comes in but if not we'll just end the night early it's not a huge deal like i said i get it it's a big release tomorrow so nothing no not offended at all um all right good luck out going on everyone sam here with late in sports cards ripping two boxes of 23 pinny origins football international blaster boxes for kyle b so good luck here kyle see what we got the pedigree and the big bang i didn't realize pedigree was uh exclusive to this this year what's up i don't think i've hit you with those yeah yeah this is the first time i open them this year you have no orders coming send me we're close yeah we're literally this and one more and that's it if no nothing else comes in all right good luck here trey tucker davon a chane and dorian thompson robinson on the og two is certainly not terrible that's uh that's some haters right here i hate the lefties we'll have us rookie roshan johnson startups jamir gives yeah that's that'll happen for sure shady yeah any anything to do with social media is just disgusting yeah nobody's afraid to be a chain to 299 every fan base is bad on twitter hadn't in hooker let's let's be a hundred percent honest with ourselves every single fan base of any sport in any league at any level is awful ravens fans i want to punch myself in the face when i let's see see what ravens fans say have a go on mill hello there is davis willanderson and jordan adison og pretty convinced all the fs u fans on twitter fake fs u fans right jaylen carter is ucf fans trying to complain so they get an o'connell so they can probably say oh fs u fans are saying talking just like us start up sean flipper oh we're not me no one thinks we're national champions right never will we Michael wilson 149 just like ucf sam laforta stats and benet and luke schoonmaker that's what i'm saying that's what i'm saying really on that just makes you feel like makes you look bad as a fan right you're almost like not a true sports fan if you don't hate your fan base on social media like i probably hate the ravens fan base more than i hate any other fan base on social media it's awful dude i can't do it just like he was saying with fs u dude like it's the same thing no one no one's actually that man right you should have seen how many people we're getting so tight that like about not it we can't we shouldn't have spent more we need to pay blah blah blah yeah we pay this guy every single time somebody doesn't have a good okay we're done gotta move on from him trade him cut him anthony richerson and maybe true rishi rice i think you're right shady nice one there because they're maybe the easiest to hate on yeah josh downs michael meyer startups quitting johnson i think the same thing that we got like dallas cowboy plant fans like oh we're going to win champ this year yeah right i don't think real cowboy fans are like immediately yeah i mean obviously are but tana mckina 49 i know exactly what you mean though there's some fake guys making it work john right that's what it feels like anyway dtr is a flowers rookie and jaylon hyatt og let's go brandon picking up a couple of personals hell yeah there yeah it's exactly our year has to be yeah jets fans are cj stroud jaren hall brice young and startups of michael meyer i do i was going to say i don't i just feel bad for jets fans more than anything like one of my best friends the biggest jets fan you'll ever meet and he's just like he's like he just hates it man yeah we're still accepting personals brine if you want to throw something in kashan buti to 299 thierry wilson and michael wilson that'll do it for your break there uh kyle thanks again for the sport buddy get him right out to you yeah commanders fans have it rough i feel bad for shipe dude that's pretty cool she drove by the texas chain saw masquer house oh god interesting that's kind of cool though shorts my game was popping for a little bit of work what's up it was a game recently came out before oh yeah yep actually now you say that i do remember that all right so pension coming up next now we're going through uh tiktok or something someone had a chunky skin in the texas chainsaw game i don't like this game i don't like this game i don't want to play this game i'll go grab these for brine and i think there's only legacy in the back it's like way in the back corner by like the the high end stuff over yeah but it's even further back than that once everybody needs to feel good about myself hell yeah one second all my friends here are pucks fans fair all right good luck here pension let's do it buddy going on everyone sam here with late sports cards have been one box of at 23 tops cosmic chrome baseball hobby for pension c good luck here pension see what we got buddy try my best brandon i tried my best juba pastianos to deep drive left field blue miguel cabrera 299 marco semian trade turner brine reynolds that is don carlo stanton launch into orbit and taylor ward one time in the last 12 aren't they really damn they really caught fire again they're hot tautis they are hot there's been being done yeah harper judge betz j ram you got that guy yeah anything's possible literally nobody can stop baby and tim anderson ryan pick up a pristine nice it's been a minute since i've done a pristine yeah pristine's fun man hell yeah absolutely you can run with that 40 brine no problem yeah good luck man big cards have been pulled out of that here for sure fracter of miguel cabrera and john carlo stanton uh aqua equinox gunnar henderson nice one there pension 2199 miguel cabrera yoshida shohay extra terrestrial talent calls korea i got a gold sandi alcantara 14 of 50 nice one there congrats pension on the atu listen to trez that is anthony santan dare on the uh nucleus brine reynolds refractor face and laugh back about pension mclean gunnar extra terrestrial talent and george springer that'll do it for your break there hang drip thanks again for the support buddy get him right out to my friend well there's two orders in now yeah absolutely absolutely yeah we don't really like we like especially with the volume we do like we keep things moving for sure i have no idea i think there's yeah one or two up front maybe because i had one in a mixer the other i think last week we had a 10 box fire first half on one drive dude yeah the two clock is such a joke the two clock is such a joke bro one up front yep three five really five up front five up front okay that's pretty solid probably whatever's on the website we'll just throw out there yeah website open um all right brandon it's like a play the franchise i do like madden franchise mode i would never play online i'm not like it's not fun yeah franchise is fun to just use an entire first half i used to i used to greet people hard like that oh my god dude i would i would burn a clock dude i'd burn it so bad the two clock and then you just run yeah kill the play oh god ridiculous dude you're such a troll i am a troll dude all right good luck brandon let's do it buddy going on everyone sam here with late in sports guys great dude uh sam here with late in sports cars open two boxes for brandon w got 123 origins international football blaster and 123 legacy hobby it's good luck here let's do it i've been playing madden since it was called tech mobile you're all jesus the shadies man the shadies let's go brandon yeah good stop here brandon let's see a big bang or let's see a pedigree we're a nice numbered rookie anderson aiden o'connell and startups of bijan gamese and the ogs are blaster exclusive i do kind of like the blaster exclusive into your t-shirt much better than last year they kind of stung last year the blasters were the base cards were thinner weren't they that might have been the year before i think they were still the same stock last year i remember at least one of the years being different 49 is will anderson was it last year maybe it might have been last year actually mingo leporta and it's that's a bennett i want to come let's compare let's compare uh cj stroud rookie nice one there me and shady actually like each other but hate each other at the same time javier gibbs variation doose von uh quentin johnson and charbonite startups finish on origins basketball was weird last year after some thought i don't like them right after that thought i'm kinkage 299 i was not a lot of thought i was one of their bills love it spears charbonite and chase brown will levis rookie therias davis and og quentin johnson dj more marvin mims uh musgrave and anthony richardson on the og very nice on to legacy have a go on timmy night stash and unstashed card bandit later have a go on timmy which one am i i'm gonna be the unstashed mark andrews 2 at 299 for the vends that's kind of wild actually that's actually really the state in the final last year who yeah yeah i played you on the final yeah that's great uh hennan hooker under the lights bronze 2 at 100 again just one more order after this one more order in q after this if you want a personal feel free so but another 53 minutes of personals joe burrow to 125 on the mini nice color match on the orange also the liggers locker room would look nicer is that a visitor is that in another in l.a. and they are they are in l.a. yeah i remember when in good burger they took shack the good burger it's nicer than that or it was one that's not worse than that one so they've upgraded sure now it's in point Johnson's flu of warren moon to 25 is an oiler so we had a numbered warren moon seahawks card and an oiler's card interesting oh man i think the pelicans might win this thing yeah i don't want to play the pelicans or i won't play indiana right now either no now walkie's probably a good team to play him though can kade yeah if anyone's gonna shut him down it's gonna be more walkie mini of rice young rice young prize prospects pelicans pacers i like that would be i'd be in on that pelicans are playing good ball man they are we beat the kings three times already this year jesus tyree wilson two two ninety nine brain is playing nice i am playing nice yeah cj's back i know when they're all healthy they're working good yannis is pretty good though the birthday boy redemption the birthday boy is jamir gibbs under light sapphire autograph sapphire number two 25 probably 25 or like 15 blue is 25 the warren moon okay um under i just want to see what it's number two real quick uh sapphire 35 or less that's pretty solid though that's still pretty solid there's a beast i agree on that von herb jones and trey murphy very good draft dude it had a great draft it takes the last few years man aukans is great yeah oh yeah alvarado helps i don't know if he was even a draft alvarado to 100 trenton simpson for the ravens nice one there t simp it's got a little bit more playing time now which is good brian branch gibbs and jordan battle that'll do it for your last night 25 good or uh other night alvarado yeah dude his steals are crazy that'll do it for your break there uh brandon thanks again for the sport buddy gun right out to you yeah so i thought yeah i knew he's out of georgia tech i figured yeah he was nasty there's no georgia tech guys have been drafted recently yeah no problem uh brandon thank you again buddy brandon yeah they've had really good draft uh you're off a look we do all this yeah they have dude they really have yeah herb was hooping last night herb's good man tracan tree is really good too tracan shoot where'd her where's her he was out of albama right yeah he was nasty there they put out some pretty good mba prospects over the past like sexton and herb and miller this year too who's our coach nato's is he still there i think it's nato's he's a good coach right brian again yeah they let maxi handle the ball a lot more from what i've seen r ko yeah now that jimmy's gone he kind of it's kind of his team and then obviously it's indeed's team but right oh you're good dude brian it's never an issue you're good brian never an issue again i know brian you're a big personals guy we have uh channel two which is literally late in late in sports cards channel two and kyle is going to be live at 6 p.m eastern tomorrow doing personal is the entire day so if you want more personals and you don't feel like doing it tonight tomorrow it'll be plenty of room plenty of time for it too so oh yeah um good luck here brian let's do it buddy everyone sam here with late sports cards from one box of 23 tops pristine baseball hobby for brian p it's good luck here brian good luck buddy again brian i did drop you that link in chat too it's like the sub or check it out tomorrow i know it really has been it's a good product a very good product much improved from last year plus a class chris from rell and purple leo beguero 299 uh oh snap ron racunha um again here is the link to personals this is the last order we have in q um so yeah that's all base and then in case the base of latimer and garrero jr here's a tweet i said charles going to vegas i'm taking his over on all the buffets that's great uh travestar now we've got teasker hernandez around the diamond jersey auto nice one there congrats brian taken is over well they said the auto was travestar i'm like that's not true ken krippy jr and a christie matthewson or the original five hall of fame inductees next time you see one of those in the around jake safe travis they are not dudes not they are not take it personal oh yeah it's like a threat honestly risa skins and carlos korea millen gorman and orange 2 at 25 louis orteez nice one pirates or nice one brian but he is a pirate i'm always in for a great mullet dude uh cedric mullins in gold deagle tovar to 50 nice one there rocks seager gunner hinderson fresh faces blue alec thomas to 75 for the debacks gunner and blue to 99 or blue to 75 kory cluber spread sock legend facts big time ray legend as well and yankee legend no is here right he was right uh blue vaughn gracer to 75 and yordan oswald peraza rookie auto for the yanks conard joe and oswald uh oswaldo cabrera rookie refractor shipper jones and kaleb killian rookie auto for the cubbies i'm doing for your break there um brian thanks again for the support buddy get it right out to my man all right um again there's no orders in queue right now so i'll wait like one or two more minutes there's one person currently with an active cart right now hey night brian have a good one brian see you sir um yeah like i'll wait one minute here honestly there's literally one active cart um have a good one uh larry anybody else wants a personal put the order in now and we can do it but if not we'll just end it early again there is a big release tomorrow big big big release tomorrow i'm getting one hobby in stock got that bunch of that recently uh 2020 flawless uh 2020 tops chrome f1 that's pretty cool i know we had that 2018 top series to jumbo 21 bowman chrome choice 23 tops mls that's probably no that is uh worth on youtube museum star wars finest finest flashbacks origins jerseys a bunch more jerseys still um so i think that's gonna do it everybody thanks again for hanging out as always let me drop you a link to the uh break schedule for tomorrow there is the break schedule and then fanatics live with lane as well so we have four streams tomorrow two in the morning two at night morning uh forest over here lane on fanatics live um nighttime will be um me over here and kyle over on channel two with personal so have a good one everybody thanks again i will see you tomorrow


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Ffrens, Austrians, felly boblifau yn y cyfnodol iawn. Felly, fyddwn i'n ffordd o blynyddiadau i'r ffordd o liberti a'r llyfr. Yma, mae'r ffordd yn cyfyrdd. Mae'r ffordd yn cyfyrdd o unrhyw llyfr, o'r ffordd i'r ffordd. Felly, mae'r ffordd yn cyfyrdd. Fyddwn i'n ffordd i'n cael ei wneud am yr ydyn nhw, ac yn y ddod yr ydyn nhw, yn y ddod y chyfnodol yn y bodr hyn. Felly, eich rwyf yn dweud. OK. So, the topic of my speech is liberty through literature. I've got a few things I want to talk about today. The first is a message. It's an ideological message. And here's the ideological message. We have won the ideological war. I think this year is a fantastic year, 2012. 1912, Ludwig van Meesies puts out a theory of money and credit. And over the next hundred years we've gone on as an Austrian movement to win this ideological battle. So I'm going to take it as red that we have won the ideological battle. We just have a small problem, though. We have a room here with some people in it. We have a few islands around the world. We've got Auburn, Alabama. We've got wherever Doug Casey happens to be. Acapulco in Mexico. We've got a few islands of sanity, of reality. But the rest of the world is suffering from a mass Stockholm syndrome of believing in the state. But 99.9% of people believe in the state. So although we've won the ideological battle with fantastic books by Professor Hopper, by Murray Rothbard, by Ludwig van Meesies, Professor Salerno, and many other people, we're only speaking to a very, very small section of society. So what I'd like to try and get going today is a movement where we move away from non-fiction books. We move away from arguing philosophy and history and all those really important things. And some of us who aren't capable of doing that, who haven't got the thinking power to do that, try another kind of writing, and that would be fiction writing. So as an experiment, a good friend of mine is by the pool working on his tan at the moment, he's written a very good close personal friend of mine. He's written this book as an experiment. I thought I'd try an experiment and write a fiction novel myself to see if it's possible to create this new genre, which I'm going to call Rothbardian novels, but we might come up with a better name later, such as Freedom Novels or even Laissez Faire novels. We could even call these things. Where we take the wonderful ideas of Meesies and Rothbard and Hopper and we kind of embed them and insinuate them into fiction and into literature and try to persuade people to come to us through literature rather than through heavy-handed books. So many, many years ago, my first experience of Austrianism was by reading Ayn Rand's Atlas Shrugged, a quite dense book and we've got the four-hour John Godd speech at the end of the book. There was one word in it which brought me to the Austrian school and that was Meesies, it's mentioned once near the end of the book. I just thought, who's this Meesies character? I got Meesies books out and I went straight to human action. So my first Austrian book was human action, sort of going in right at the deep end. But how did I get there? I got there through reading Ayn Rand's Atlas Shrugged. So if some of us here can also write in that way and we can put our own ideas into our own novels and we can create the kinds of things that people read on planes, on trains and wherever they are. What do people do when they're on planes and trains? They're reading kindles and they're reading, they're escaping from the mad world that we live in by going into fiction and by going into books and by going into novels and getting away from the madness that surrounds all the rest of the time. So they're a little island and maybe if we can get into the island ourselves then we can help them, draw them to the non-fiction books that the human actions and the man economies and states and democracies have got that fail by writing really good fiction which draws them in that particular way. Now I just wanted to talk as well about the benefits of writing. For those of us here who aren't going to write a great Austrian philosophy book what are the benefits of writing if you actually go for this? The first thing you do is you'll create a creative milestone for yourself as an individual. So if Sean, you were to write a book, I'd love to see that book. I mean it would be called The Singapore Trader or The Expatriot, that would be a great title for a novel. What a fantastic idea that would be. I would love to read that book just by thinking of that idea. But if you did do that, that would be a creative milestone for you to create that idea. There are some other benefits as well to doing this. One of the key things is you develop a sense of marketing. You develop a perpetual income stream. You can be anywhere in the world writing. You can be on a beach in Thailand writing and selling your books and selling your ideas, moving around. You don't need to be tied into any one place. So if anywhere like the city of London goes down or wherever you happen to be goes down you could always go somewhere else and still have this income stream going. I think that's a good thing as well. The other thing as well is your books could be taken into movies. If you're really successful you can move into doing screenplays. You can do all sorts of ideas, things tied to your work, tied to your novels, which could enhance us as well and draw people into the Austrian school by your creative processes. Now if anyone is interested in writing a novel there is a process to it which applied, well my friend, my good friend Jack England applied when he was writing this book here. It's actually a lot easier than you think it would be. The only thing it does require though is time and a commitment to doing it and completing the book. So the first part of the process is to take two ideas and bring them together.  There's usually three drafting processes. So the first draft you just write it out in full without stopping. You just keep going, you keep writing, you don't stop. You don't correct, you don't go back. So if anyone here has ever tried a novel try to write a novel or write a piece of fiction.  You must just go through the whole process from the start to the end and just get to the end. Then you do a rewrite process and then you probably need an editor as well to help you craft the book afterwards as well so need to get a trusted friend who can help you create the novel. Now the interesting thing after that is reading some of Jeff Tucker's work and James Alcher and Fred Reid on lourockwell.com. One thing we've got to get away from is going through the publishing industry, going through the mainstream media. What will happen there is they tend to lock up your rights, they tend to take your book ideas off you, they tend to lock them away and they might publish you for a couple of years and if you stop making the sales they'll take your books off all the outlet streams. If you control your novels yourself, you publish them yourself so something like Create Space or you go through independent publishing then keep control of the copyright and then market the things yourself, get marketing help in and then keep control of everything and it'd be a really good exercise in learning how to market learning how to push your ideas into the world and again, helping you develop this income stream and helping you take control of all of your work. The idea is that we try to use fiction to capture the world one kindle at a time. So if you take a random hundred people on trains and planes, if we can just get them to be reading your stuff, your fantastic work on a kindle and through that fiction, through those ideas we can direct them into these other greater books, the non-fiction books, the male economy and state and so on and the human action and using our new genre, our new freedom novels genre. Now there's been a problem in the past with something like Without the Shrugged or with 1984. They're quite grim books, they're quite dystopian. I think what we need to do if we're going to go down this path as individuals is write books which have hope in them. Too many of these books like 1984 are very unhopeful. We have Winston Smith at the end, Loving Big Brother and all those kinds of things. Without the Shrugged as well. It was never really finished. John Galt's on a helicopter going to New York or Washington and we never ever see what happens next because you get stuck because with Einran being a believer in the state she got stuck. I think she couldn't say what John Galt would do to recover the world. That's why she was maybe unable to write a sequel to that book and why many of her objectivist followers have been unable to write a sequel to that book because if you use the method of the state then things are going to go wrong.  They'll be full of forward thinking, optimism and hopefully people will be kind of switched on then to those ideas from those novels. So that's my kind of plan is to try and encourage you to hopefully encourage you to write if you can't write a really great Austrian non-fiction book maybe to write a fiction book and to try to capture the world in that particular way. Okay, that's pretty much everything I've got to say so thank you very much. By the way, there are copies of this available in the 4A. Yes Kurt? You know, I'm an objectivist for someone in your character captain where I believe this is a kind of thing for a short story of how people get for a short story of how people get started and how people can write a short story through black pages. Yes, people can do whatever mechanism they want to do but I think with the kindle experience I think people want to get into a deep experience when they're reading they want to lose the world and they want to go into a deep experience and get carried away for 8, 9, 10, 15, 20 hours just to escape this strange world that we live in. So I would think that maybe writing novels rather than short stories would be a good thing here. It is a hard piece of work to go along with a novel the first draft is probably going to take 3 months and I would find that one of the best ways of doing it is to almost be in a dreamlike state to let the unconscious part of your mind take over. So if we've got four parts of the mind I'll just go through these now. If we look at the brain there are four thinking segments in the brain so the link there by the corpus callosum and the hippocampal commissure there this is the left brain here this is the right brain there we've got the logic brain there we've got the kind of creative mind there we've got the kind of social brain here and we've got the kind of doing things part of the brain there and what we've got to do when you write is to link all four of these areas together and let them all come through so to get to the kind of creative bit the best book I think is by Stephen King it's on writing and what Stephen King suggests is that when you're writing you don't plan anything at all you just let it come through the unconscious mind so his technique is the first thing he does is he wakes up in the morning he's in a kind of a dreamlike state and in his dreamlike state he lets ideas flow from his unconscious and then those unconscious ideas go onto the page then he moves, so that would be the the kind of creative part of the brain letting his unconscious flow through there later on he applies logic to the books and he goes through and he adds colour and he adds sounds and he adds texture and he adds a sense of time and he adds various other things now one of the best books for doing that it's a bit cheesy to talk about it's how to write a damn good novel it's why I got it called Ian Frey so that would be a really good thing to another good book to get hold of if you're really fancy doing this huge creative thing get hold of that book too so use the Stephen King book on writing to format your ideas from your unconscious mind let them flood onto the page and then go through the second draft using the ideas in Ian Frey's this is the kind of thing that an editor would do as well this scene's in the wrong place, put it in this place this character needs more development that kind of thing now the doing part of the brain here this is the kind of rules falling part of the brain there's one essential book that everyone should get that's Strunk and White I think it's called Elements of Style and that just tells you rules of grammar so when you're writing from your unconscious in this half-dream-like state everything's rubbish, all the commas are in the wrong places and the words are in the wrong places and so on this book is brilliant and it's key phrases omit needless words so one thing you've got to do is be ruthless absolutely ruthless on cutting out stuff that's not necessary in fact you shouldn't even say not necessary that's two words, you should say unnecessary so you're constantly going through looking for anywhere where you can shrink things down so you don't say run quickly you say sprint constantly shrinking ideas and phrases and words down and then the bigger idea is putting the scenes in different orders and so on the final part of the writing process is the social process here which is in the kind of left low limbic system here in the brain this is just by just talking to people you must go out into the world and talk and relate to people and sit around pools late at night talking to Mr Tucker about his bow ties and things so that's the thing that you do that's the thing a lot of writers miss out they just sit in a little room with a Venetian blind down and they start writing fiction gets too insular so go out into the world meet people and talk use the read Stephen King's book he will help you unlock your mind and unlock your thinking and let you get your unconscious mind onto the page then use Ian Frey's book called how to write a damn good novel to add all the things in your text which is missing colour, sound sense of smell I'm very bad at the sense of smell I don't have a nose in my brain there's nothing there just go through and add add things she smelled of lavender she smelled of lilies I don't know why I'm talking about women and what they smell of but when a soldier is on a battlement and he's about to be killed by the Persians there's all sorts of other smells you can introduce there so I have to manually add those in and then go through this drunk and white elements of style and punch up that grammar and really tighten all that stuff together and if you go through these four processes in the brain and talk to people here as well then what you create is a really rich, deep full kind of text which has a lot of three dimensionality or four dimensionality to it you must add time, a sense of time to things as well so I think a novel is the best way to go rather than short stories I think it's it's a deeper experience we're trying to capture the world one kindle at a time so we need to get people really into the kindle that they're reading on to really capture their attention and if we can just slip in a few a few key phrases every now and again and we can pull them along, yes Can I ask you what's your position is on private property sorry, on intellectual property and depending on your answer whether you're a consultant or around age how do you actually offer a good pay to be able to Yes, it's a really interesting question I mean I'm the question was what's my standing on intellectual property am I a conzellian or a rendian I'm very much a conzellian that's another reason why I think we should go down the independent publishing route ourselves through all these wonderful technologies we've got if you just look up on Fred Reed's articles on New Rockwell or you look at James Alcher's articles on his blog site you'll find all sorts of really good long deep articles about self publishing about keeping control of your own stuff and the reason for that is to not let the publisher have the copyright because if the publisher gets the copyright first of all they'll give you a pittance they won't market you unless you're famous so they do two things, they get you into book stores and then they do a nice cover, everything else is down to you so if you can get yourself onto Amazon and various other outlets and you can get yourself a nice cover pay someone a few hundred dollars to give you a nice cover or do it yourself you've done everything the publisher is going to do for you and the problem with publishers is they will just pull your books off their bookshelves if it's not making enough money if you do it yourself you can sell your stuff forever and then you can hand that on as to the copyright thing itself I think what we have to do is we have to make it so attractive and so reasonably priced that no one needs to copy it or whatever so make your prices, that's why Kindle is such a good thing because you can charge $1.99, $2.99 you're not having to charge somebody $14.99 so just make it so distributable and so cheap that it's good the way you give it to them, they don't need to go they don't need to go to Pirate Bay or anywhere else and download elicit elicit according to the state so I'm very much a conzellian there and I don't think losing intellectual property prevents us from creating in fact I think it will create more stuff because if you look at music in England classical music in English to England died because of copyright that's why the only English composers we can think of were usually people from Germany who moved to England like Handel so all the Germany was fantastic because there was hundreds of Germanies there was no copyright so you got Beethoven you got Mozart, you got all these wonderful wonderful classical musicians because there was no copyright so I don't think that we would have a problem with losing copyright I think it would actually be more creative and then I could, if Sean wrote the fantastic book about the Singapore trader I could even take I could even write the sequel to it if he didn't without intellectual property or if, where's Vincent? if Vincent wrote the Accidental Belgian which I would love to read I could help him with that or I could take it on and I could extend it or if, Sandro, where are we? the life and loves of a perpetual traveller I mean what a book that would be I'd love to see that book I'd want to read it right now without intellectual property fine, he writes, he does it distribute it in a way that I don't need to go and steal it off Pyro Bay and I think things will be more creative like German classical music Geoffrey Thank you for your comments about copyright one important presentation of more recently obviously people are aware of what an evil scam copyright is and when they have a book they publish it on a system retaining the copyright issue to death and then only to discover later that they signed a contract in fact they only control the rights of the book while the publisher takes it out of print which never happens at all so you will not regain the rights of your own work 70 years after you're dead when everyone else can get it as well so it's not enough to regain the copyright because you can't sign a contract so that's the best thing to do so yes, independent publishers and self-publishing and publishing into it it should create the comments in a way in other words it's not enough to regain the copyright but make a couple of comments so that you can ensure your work is very market level there's also a widespread confusion that somehow the commercial ethos is compatible with copyright whereas publishing into the comments is somehow just definitely a work out of the world that's definitely okay and that's just wrong which I think you applied in your response so I'm not a conciliant I'm a tukarian if there's such a thing that exists