Let us remember him who was not for what he was, not for what he did, but because he was, as all of us are, a temple of God. Let us remember that this which is about to return to common clay was molded from common clay. Today we gather here to pay our last tribute to this now still place, lying here before us cold in the coldness of death. Let us always remember him, and let us always remember him. Madam, please. You surely are mistaken. I think it's always him who couldn't have. Carl. Carl. Oh, my God. Where would you be after death? Am I dead? They have your body in a church, Carl. Imagine you in a church. No. No, you're mistaken. This is no church. I'm right here.  But we are most careful when we bring you here. We take every precaution to relieve the shock. Shock? Of finding yourself in the midst of fire and brimstone. Hot. It's so hot. You get used to it. Where am I? Your soul is here with me. Your body is back on earth. At present, resting within a certain lined coffin. Yes. They're soon going to place you within a tomb. Oh, I don't believe you. Don't you? Personally, it makes no difference to me whether you do or not. But for your own satisfaction, suppose you feel for yourself. Well, yes. Reach up with your right hand. Reach up. Feel the casket lining by your head. Go right ahead. There. You see? Yes. But I'm lying in the bottom of a boat. Only your soul is. This is some trick. The boat is set in line. I'll admit, Carl Fisher, I am generally most concerned about my own comfort. But as far as lining one of my boats was set in, no. I fear that would be too much even for Satan. Satan? Yes. Here, let me prove to you the boat is not cloth lined. You see? That's irony.  Yes. I am. But not just a devil. The devil. You mean I'm really dead? One never dies, Carl. The common clay perishes, yes. But only the common clay. Let me out of here. I'm sorry. You can't move until I permit you to. But I moved my hand a moment ago. Felt the lining in my head. That's because I wished you to. Nothing is done here unless I order it done. Then, then I am dead. Only your body. It might interest you to know you caused quite a commotion up there a moment ago. When you interrupted your funeral oration by suddenly moving in your casket. Yes, quite a commotion. Only two people saw you. One of them was a woman. You frightened her, Carl. But they've taken her away now. You mean my body actually is being preached over? Oh, yes. Indeed, yes. You were a prominent man on earth, Carl. Naturally, yours is the most elegant funeral. So many flowers after them could be brought into the church. People standing outside on the sidewalk even. His Lord are there. Life? Certainly. Where else would she be? A church, you say? Yes. Amazing you, doesn't it? You haven't been in a church for 35 years. No. You wouldn't even permit your daughter to be buried from a church, Carl. But she went to heaven. Anyway, stop it, stop it. Do you remember Reverend Brooks, Carl? Reverend Brooks? Yes, he married you. Remember, today he's officiating at your funeral. No, no. Who would you like to hear what he's saying, Carl? Listen, if Carl Fisher has brought tragedy into our lives, let us remember that out of tragedy, good can arise. Soon that tragedy will be forgotten. But let us never forget Carl Fisher. Let us remember him always as a Christian. We hear Carl a Christian, he says. Stop, stop that voice. Listen, Carl. Let us pray for him often and ask Almighty God to grant him pardon. Let us be generous towards him that finally the supreme ruler may in turn be generous towards us. No, no, stop him, stop him. I don't want to hear anymore. Did you hear what he said, Carl? He asked your friends, your family, your wife, to forget your evil, to remember only what was good about you. Yes, Carl, but that leaves them nothing to remember. Oh, let me alone.  I didn't have a chance. Chance? You say you didn't have a chance? Certainly not. Well, I don't waste my breath but pointing out the chances you did have. I was forced into everything that happened. Forced, I say. Where are you? Certainly I was. Haven't you ever heard of free will? Free will. Free will, you say. I haven't had a will of my own in the last 30 years. Haven't you, Carl? No, you know I haven't. I knew I was doing wrong. Sure, I knew it. I'd never have made my millions by being any other way. Your millions? Did you enjoy them, Carl? I was just beginning to when I took charge of you. Is that it? Yes. Your millions aren't worth much here. Oh, where am I? Certainly you haven't lost your imagination. Where would you be with fire on all sides and the smell of brimstone and with me as your pilot on the river Styx? Styx? You remember, it's our largest river. Where are you taking me? I have a special assignment for you, Mr. Fisher. We have a certain reserve space for members like you down here. Inferno, tell me. Am I in Haiti? Does that surprise you? No, no I can't be. I didn't want to die. I wanted to do what was right, but I couldn't. You didn't try. I was going to try. You've done nothing but evil for 30 years. You couldn't change now. I could, I tell you I could. No, Carl. I'll make a bargain with you, Satan. Bargain? No one makes bargains with Satan.  I'll change, I swear I will. You'd never change. I will, I will. Let me go back, let me show you, let me prove I can do what's right. All right, Carl. I'll bargain with you. It would at least relieve the dull monotony. You give me a chance? Yes, for 24 hours. 24 hours? Only 24 hours? Yes. Do nothing but good for 24 hours. And I'll not pretend to claim you. But if you fail... I won't fail. I won't, I won't. It's up to you, Carl. It's entirely up to you. But remember, only 24 hours. Only 24 hours. You really shouldn't have come tonight, Laura. You should rest. I know. But I couldn't rest. Poor Carl. He needed someone so badly those last few days. And I was away. Never dreaming what was happening. You mustn't blame yourself, Laura. No, I can't help it. I feel I deserted my husband. Just when a man needs his wife most. There'll come a time, Dr. West, when I'll be afraid to come out here to the Mosleyam. I wanted to come tonight. To tell him. Goodbye. Yes. I loved my husband, David. Despite everything he did, he was the only one I ever cared for. Here, my dear, I have the key. I say, Laura, it's not locked. But I saw you lock it after the services this afternoon. I did lock it. I'd swear I did. Open the door. Yes. Yes. Pocket flash. Oh, David. Empty. Ask, it's empty. David, for heaven's sakes, what happened here? I don't know. But Carl always said he'd come back. What? Yes. He told me once he had no fear of death. Because he knew he could always make a deal with Satan. Carl told you that? Yes. I... I laughed at him at the time, but... now I wonder. I'd better go now, Laura. Show you're feeling all right. Yes, I... I know I won't sleep tonight. You can relax. I can send you out a nurse if you like. Oh, no. No, I'd rather be alone. Well, if you need me, please don't hesitate to call. Thank you, David. Good night, my dear. Good night, David. Thank you so much for being such a dear. I'll... I'll call you in the morning. Good night. I'm not hearing things. That's an electric razor on it. It can't be. There's no one in the apartment but myself. My dear, did you call me? Carl. Yes, Laura, what is it? Are you really there? What do you mean, am I really here? Of course I'm here. Heaven's, I was right in the middle of my shaving. Oh, no! Laura, what's the matter with you? Why'd you call me? No, Carl, please don't come any closer. Please. The world's gotten into you all of a sudden. Darling, really you. Really me? Now, what are you talking about? Carl, don't you know? Don't I know what? We... We buried you this afternoon. Carl, don't look at me like that. Oh, darling, what's happened? Tell me what's happened. I don't know. Something's wrong. Carl. My... My head. It's whirling. Dizzy. I don't remember what happened. Oh, darling, you're alive. Warm. Breathing. Yes, but I seem to have been away. It was so hot. There was a boat on a river and a satin-lined casket and... Oh, Laura. Darling, darling, you did come back. Dr. West said you would... Dr. West? Yes, David. He said you told him once you'd come back after... after you'd gone on. I have been dead, haven't I? I remember now. I was sitting in my desk, sitting alone at night in my office, and then something happened. You were shocked. The back of the neck. Everything stopped. The next thing I knew, I was riding in the bottom of a boat lined with silk. No. That wasn't the boat that was lined. It was the casket. He told me to move my hand and I'd feel it. Who, Carl? Who told you? It was... the devil. Carl. I died. Went to Haiti. But I bargained with Satan. I bargained with him. He took me up, gave me 24 hours. 24 hours. Darling. Darling, I don't understand. 24 hours to prove I could do good here on Earth. How is it true? Can it be real? Yes, it is true. It's real. I can't believe it. Things like this just don't happen. But Carl, how? I made a bargain, I tell you. A bargain with Satan. And I have a rendezvous to keep with him. In 24 hours. I'm so confused, Carl. If only... Who could that be? I'll go see. I know. If anyone we know, they won't understand. You go back into the bedroom, dear. I'll see who it is. But the world's got to know sometime. People will know soon enough. Please, dear. I'm too upset for a scene to try to explain to anyone tonight. All right, my dear. If you wish. Thank you, darling. Just a moment. David. I had to come back, Laura. I couldn't stay away. David, please. Forgive me, dearest. But I've waited so long. David, please go. No. Not until I've talked to you. Some other time. I can't wait any longer, Laura. It's not fair for you to ask me to. Not fair? You know I love you, Laura. You've known it for months, years. David. You have known, haven't you? Yes, but... I've waited so long to have the right to tell you about my love. Now... Oh, I... I know it's not right to come to you on the night of your husband's funeral and say these things. But I must know, Laura. I must know. I have nothing to say to you, David. Nothing. I know you were always madly in love with that criminal of a husband of yours. But that's over now. You'll have to forget him. Oh, remember, darling.  Your life is still ahead of you. You can't go on carrying a torch for someone who can't more about making a million dollars than making you happy. David, don't say that. I have a right to say it. Now... I've kept it in check all of these years, waiting and hoping. And now Carl is dead. You hear me? Dead. Dead! You belong to me now. No, David. Not now or ever. Yes. Yes, I say. You're mine. If anyone has a right to you, I have. Everything I've done to get you. Will you go now, David? Oh, Laura. Laura, I need you. Oh, Laura, please, sir, you'll marry me. No, David. I'll never marry you. But I know you care for me. I could make you learn to love me. No, never. I've had nothing for you, David, but friendship. I'll never have more. I know that's not true. Don't say that. It's not. You do care for me. I could tell by the way you kissed me. That's when I first began building my hopes. Kissed you? When did I kiss you? You haven't forgotten. The party in my penthouse. None more than three months ago. Your birthday party. Yes. All the girls kissed you that night. If you'll remember, we even made a sort of game out of it.  Yes, but you meant more than just a compliment that night. You imagined. Oh, no. I kissed you just like the other. In full sight of my husband. And I might add to his complete amusement. Well, wasn't in the room. You waited until he'd left before you got into line. Oh, nonsense, David. No. I knew that night you cared for me. That's when I began planning to make you mine. David, will you please go? Not until you've told me you'll marry me. I've told you I won't. There's someone else. Only my husband. Someone else. Someone who's alive. Please go, David. What's that? I want you to go. What was that? In that other room? Nothing. What are you... Nothing at all. What are you doing? I don't want you to ever come back here, David. What are you doing? I'm locking this door.  There's someone in that room. David. So. So. You couldn't wait until your husband was safely buried. Couldn't wait. David. Well, he won't have you. You hear me? He won't have you. David. Please go now. Very well. I'm telling you this, Laura. He won't have you. Whoever he is. He'll never have you. I promise you that.  She deserves to be killed. Doesn't she? Well, go ahead. Kill her. I don't have to tell you, Carl. I've never cared for him. Go ahead. Kill her. She's lying, don't you think? No one but you, darling. Ever. I can still tempt you, Carl. That's my job. That's how I keep my fires burning. I know you believe me, Carl. No. Don't believe that. She's never lied to you before, but there's always a first time. Darling. Please don't stand there looking at me. Say something.  Say something. Darling. It's all right, dearest. I believe you. People will say when I walk out into the world again. Carl, don't you think it would be best for us to go away quietly? Some place where we'd never be recognized? No, Laura. I have a bargain to fulfill. Only until three this afternoon. You'll spend that time with me then. I'm sorry, I can't. There's more to be done than probably either of us imagine. Where are you going? To the office first. I'll go with you. No, dear. I'll come back to you before I leave you again. To keep my rendezvous with Satan. Good morning, Miss Walling. Good morning, Mr Fisher. You're early this morning, Mr Fisher. I'll spend all morning explaining. And nothing doing. I'll look myself in the office. West. Come in, Carl. I've been waiting for you. Sitting in my chair. At my desk. Yes. This is your gun, I believe. What's the meaning of this? I'm prepared to make a bargain with you. Bargain? Yes. What sort of a bargain? You died without leaving a will. I have one here dated three months before your death. Sign it, the business becomes mine. And I'll permit you to take away half of your seven million dollars and Laura. You permit me? Yes. You couldn't operate your business now? People wouldn't want to do business with a dead man. Do I look dead to you? Don't be facetious. I'm serious. I know all about what happened to you. When I came back to see Laura last night, I heard you talking before I pushed the buzzer. I don't understand it all. But I'm prepared to give Laura up for your business and half your cash. You killed me. What? You killed me. Fisher, keep back. I see it clearly now. I see now that Laura wasn't lying to me last night. She's never cared for you. I warn you, keep back, Fisher. I remember what you said to her. You said, if anyone has a right to you, Laura, I have. After everything I've done to get you. This gun is loaded, Carl. Yes, I see it all clearly now. Stay back. Stay away from me. The night she kissed you at the party. Remember what you said about that last night? That was the night you began planning to make her you. If you come any nearer, I'll shoot. I'm not going to harm you, Dr. West. You'd like to get your hands on this gun.  Kill you?  I've made a bargain not to. Then keep back. I could kill you, though. I've been proclaimed legally dead, you know. You can't hang a dead man. Keep back. One step farther, and I'll shoot.  I just want you to take a good look at me, Dr. West. Stop. Not one step farther. Not one step farther. Oh, darling, are you hurt? He shot you, Carl. Laura, that gun in your hand. I followed you here. I don't know why I brought the gun. Laura, you killed him. Give it to me. No. Give it to me. Give it to me. Carl, you must get to a doctor. The clock. No time for a doctor. You hurt badly. Oh, it doesn't matter. Give me that gun. Carl. Give it to me. Now they'll think we shot each other. You have won your bargain, Carl Fisher. There's no place here for you now. You have heard rendezvous with Satan, tonight's original tale of dark fantasy by Scott Bishop, originating in the studios of WKY. Ben Morris was Carl Fisher, Blois Wright played Dr. David West, Eleanor Naylor-Corn was Laura Fisher, Fred Wayne took the part of Satan, Muir Hite was heard as Reverend Brooks, and Georgianna Cook Hite played the secretary. Next Friday at this time, listen for Scott Bishop's I Am Your Brother. Tom Paxton speaking, Dark Fantasy comes to you each Friday night from Oklahoma City. This is the National Broadcasting Company.


YouTube team keep it clean. Good morning. What's going on? It's engraving here with another video And in this video, I just wanted to ask the question This is really for a lot of Steelers fans out there. I know a lot of Steelers fans watch the video So I wanted to ask y'all Do you all think that mr. James Harrison the new new England Patriot? New recently signed new England Patriot. Do you think he ruined his Steelers legacy? By signing with new England Now big shout out big huge shout out to Terry fry Terry was the one that sent me the link to the video Where is it more keys pouncy or Maurice pouncy with whichever one of the pouncy brothers is on the Steelers She sent me to the link to the video where he was talking about how he felt like James Harrison his career I mean his his legacy with Pittsburgh is ruined now Since he joined the new England Patriots Pousie was also talking about how James Harrison wanted to be cut he wanted to be released and he was asking for it So the Steelers finally gave it to him or whatnot And he was saying that that's not how you do it And he said that the he pretty much pretty much you say it sound like he said he lost respect for James Harrison to Sound like he said he lost respect for him or whatnot, but I wanted to give my two cents on that How I feel about it I mean I had to talk about it a little tiny bit of the other day when the news first dropped that he did sign with New England which That's funny man, New England they New England wins out on that one man. They went out on that one But I wanted to talk about it too so big shout out to Terry Terry. Thank you. Whenever you watch this video I appreciate you Send me that link So we could talk about this on this YouTube channel, but anyway before we get into that let me introduce myself Me I mean Graven vids and this of course is my YouTube channel engraving vids and I'm a Ravens fan So we know a lot about James Harrison. We've seen a lot of James Harrison and I Want to see him again this year and the only way to make that happen Ravens play New England. So and that's what I want. But anyway Even though Ravens fan on this YouTube channel as you all know it as you all are more than aware of we don't only talk Ravens We talk everybody so if you're a Ravens fan if you a Steelers fan that's bitter if you a Steelers fan That's better. If you a New England fan that's happy if you a new name New England fan That's petty make sure you subscribe to the YouTube channel turn your notifications on and Also leave a like on the video click that thumbs up button. Yeah, JB smooth. You all right He has been on the bingles too so the question again was Has James Harrison ruined his Steelers legacy by joining the Patriots Now big shout out and thank you all for coming through this morning. I appreciate y'all So the people that watch this live and the people that watch it later. Thank you Now shout out to JB smooth because he just mentioned a great point because none of this was being talked about When James Harrison joined the bingles He did join the bingles a couple years ago. It wasn't the best the best Visit in the world. It wasn't the best Stint in his career so to speak but yeah, he did join the bingles and there was none of this Oh, you're ruining your legacy talking. Oh, man, we can't believe you and oh, we hate you There wasn't this outrage from Steelers fans from Steelers players when he joined Cincinnati But now and that's that's in that's a division rival But now why is it that when he joins to England? Oh Everybody goes crazy. Everybody gets upset. Everybody gets mad It's like you're picking and choosing when to get mad for over the same exact thing Now is it because the Steelers maybe feel Inferior to New England is that it because I don't think I don't think they should right now I can understand how they can feel that way because they still lost to them the other day But the way that they lost to them Couple weeks ago. I feel like that loss Let's them know like hey, we can hang with these guys. We can beat these guys So if we were to see New England again, which I know the NFL definitely wants to happen That's all they talk about now Steelers New England Steelers New England Steelers New England They talk about the game like it's already Set to happen, which who knows it could be we'll see But yeah, we'll see how everything turns out but um Ever since the James Harrison signing happened. That's all you hear about Steelers New England Steelers New England What if these two meet in the AFC Championship? What if it happens? So we'll see how everything plays out But I feel like He got cut the Steelers they cut him if they really didn't want to If they really didn't want to cut them if they really wanted to keep him if they really didn't want him to join another team Then it would have been simple. They wouldn't have cut them. They wouldn't have cut them.  I forgot the guy's name I'm trying to remember his name because he comes through in a lot of the videos He got a he in his avatar. It's a blue back. It's his face with like a blue background I forgot his name, but anyway, he keeps saying oh, yeah James James Harrison. He's a one-trick pony He can't cover a tight end. He can't Patriots ain't gonna actually do all that all they need him to do past rush. That's it. He's a strong dude Didn't realize he's 39 years old, but he's a strong dude. We all know what he's done We all know what he can do He'll be fresh Patriots get them for the low. I don't remember exactly what the contract was but I'm sure the Patriots they they don't make these crazy signings You all already know that they don't make crazy outrageous signings They signed people for pretty moderate deals And I'm sure it'll be for bargain. I got a look at the numbers, but I'm pretty sure it's gonna be for a bargain Oh, 59,000. That's what it was. Oh gosh. So there you go But yeah, they don't sign any crazy. They don't sign any crazy deals They're very good with their cap room. I know they know some tricks. I need Raven to learn those tricks, too So we can work around all cap issues. But anyway The with James here, so I don't feel like it ruins his Steelers legacy at all Because if the Steelers were so upset if they if he really didn't want him to go to New England They really didn't want him to go anywhere else Then they shouldn't have cut them. They shouldn't have cut them And I think it almost it just it makes the Steelers look bad If anything it makes the the organization look bad because how can how can you cut a guy who? Is a stealer? He is what Steelers football is about physical mean Aggressive how can you cut a guy who represents your organization represents your team? How can you cut him with two games left in the regular season when you guys are definitely in the playoffs? How can you cut a guy? two games left in the regular season two to You cut the guy two games left in a regular season The older and their all-time sack leader. So yeah, this doesn't make this doesn't ruin his Steelers legacy It makes the Steelers look bad Yeah, it's definitely their fault it makes the Steelers look bad So they can't be mad at him. No Steelers player can be mad at him again. I understand he wanted to play What football play what football player doesn't want to play especially one that's been playing for so long especially one that's made so many plays especially one that has Seemented his legacy in NFL What what player would not want to play and he's fresh again. He's fresh Patriots get him for cheap. They get a guy that's fresh. They get a guy that's hungry They get a guy that's upset. They get a guy that's pretty dangerous. He's gonna be trying to prove himself To see what he can do in this league in the playoffs in the last regular season game when the Patriots played Who the bills? He's gonna be trying to do his thing man. So anyway, we'll see how it goes y'all Let me know what you think in the comment section appreciate y'all coming through. I'll see you all later on I love y'all y'all have a great day


What's up everybody, Jayce here for JaspysCaseBricks.com 2023 Bowman Chrome Baseball Hobby Edition just sold out. 12 box CaseBricks Precation number 3. Well see the difference between Rodgers and Jalen is that Jalen is going to get a rushing touchdown on top of passing. If you drop the Rodgers this year, both of the seats will fill that for you. So there's a snatch amount of the seating for the Philly specials. I appreciate you dropping there, pleasure. Comments. Still playing, speaking of veterans. I think this is a little bit of a team, so it's still a big team for you. Since you have the combination of all your friends through his hands and combination of guys like Graham, and Rodgers. Alright, here we go guys. 12 total boxes right there. Hawkins. I need an extra half, so I need them through by six or less. Oh that's not gonna happen. Oh I need to score a touchdown. Oh then it'll be six or less? It'll be exactly six. Yeah. I need to score a touchdown. I still, I don't even, I still win because they were down by six I had. Oh my god. Caught the legs off. I hope the Jets win. Maybe so that promo ended today at six, I thought it was Friday. It's a wacky thing to have time. Well luckily we pulled nicer ones over there. Imagine we pulled like Salas 101 over here. We wouldn't have been able to be part of it. I was wondering if you had that orange on over here. Well that's pretty expensive probably. It's probably more expensive than the Michael Harris, but I don't know what would be more popular though. But I honestly don't even know what other people have pulled so. I think if we have the lowest number in Salas, I think we might win. Yeah. But if someone pulls a red or something, then yeah it would have to. Also the pulls have to be nice and match black, right? That's what I'm saying, yeah. At lower stuff. Because people rip in every one of these. Yeah. Well Logan, you're dreaming big bro. Packers and Eagles in the championship game? I'm thinking of one game at a time, Logan. I'm not thinking that far ahead. Dreaming big bro. Something crazy's gotta happen. Holding. I'm going to have to crumble a bit. There goes your points. If it is holding for them. Who hit the salt over there? Was it Suncoast? Oh yeah, Suncoast. Oh I got lucky. You might just win, you might just win something. No offsides. I don't know man. For so many years, you guys were the top dogs up there but it's Lyons country baby. The Lyons I think are going to make people look silly over there. And then Minnesota obviously will still be okay. I don't think so Logan. That's a 10. Why don't the Eagles not need it Ted? The Eagles need to win as many times as they can. Because they want to be one of the top seeds. They need the dubs. I mean I think you guys are going to go for an onsite right now. Because there's no way you're just going to let the Eagles run the ball. So onsite if it doesn't happen then I think the game's over. They have two timeouts left. But they're not just going to let the Eagles just like run the ball. In the sense that like they're going to have to onsite it to even give them a real chance. No I didn't, I don't know if the Bears got any on or not. But yeah Ted you know what?  You guys should have been able to beat the Tampa Bay Bucks. See if you guys were going to beat the Bucks then this game wouldn't have mattered so much you know. You'd be going into it one to one you know. Potentially. I'm like behind guys so don't tell me if they got it or not. I might actually have to see if I'm over here. Alright they're going for you guys let me see. That TV over there is like 15 seconds ahead of mine. I'll just say how many days ago have you played? Not many, these days no. I'm not working for them. I'm like you, I'm working too hard. This is the show. I've not done any 1,800 games.  Anyway. Can't see. Which can't see. You're going for this game. The new rules that gotta line up. The number of guys on both sides. He's got five. You got it, Eagles got it? I'm on this left. The 45 yard line. Nine in your picture right there. It would be crazy if it didn't work out that way, right? Like love is like their photograph for the next 15 years. Alright just don't fumble the ball. Don't fumble the ball. That's all that needs to happen. Alright. We'll do the following rally. Louisiana La Pugna for the Rangers. Over to 150. City. They had the season. Like it's a true experience. To be honest, doesn't it feel like they're kind of playing C plus B minus 2 more? Yes or 2 though. If they put it together, think about how many of these they have. They've got to put it in. 30 out of these. They've got to put it in. They're out for it. It's a lot of work on it. You've got to put that hand away. Yes. So just walk through the return. Six. Hands up. Four down. Think that plate's on all the way down. Wow another rally? Two rallys. How about this? Kumar Rocker. Out of 10. Piece of the base. There's always room on the wagon, Ted. Always room. That's right, Ted. Jump on the thunder wagon this year too for basketball, Ted. SGA going to have another M.U.P. year this year.  All right, here we go guys. First six. First six. First six. First six. First six. First six. First six. First six. First six. First six. All right, here we go guys. First six. Luis Torres. The 2.99. Ethan Salas. You're not that frustrated. We've got Yuhu. Luis Guanipa. For the race. Jeremy Bork. Blaze Jordan. That's for free. Out of 100. And Justin Henry Maloy. He's one of their top prospects for the race. Another one for Sport Ports. There you go man. J.D. in the middle of this over here. Lovin' a hoppy. That's a 4.99. And nice. Janet Miller. Out of 150. Robert Moore. For the Brewers. Brewers, that's going to Josh Allen. Dagada for the Yanks. Vargas. Gold for the Dodgers. Out of 50. And Tristan Casas. Bowman Ascension. Case hit. Nice. Retzhawks going to Joseph. And Luis Torres for the Angels. Blue Raywave. Brady House. CJ Abrams. Hanging in there. Arrested in the game. All set. And we got Javier Valdez. We'll speckle to 2.99 first for the Braves. Braves having a solid break to start off. Bobby Whitt. Miller. Davis in the Los Altos. Top Walker. True Gilbert. True Gilbert. Brooks Lee Gold. Out of 75. Serda. We got Cabrera. Blue. Rizzle Green. 2.99. And Vladimir for the Rockies. Gonzalez. Samia Munoz. Out of 75. 4.99 Montgomery. Marlins. Rootsley. Luis Reyes. Cook. Athletics. Los Santos. And we got Javier Valdez. Los Santos. Joy Ortiz. 75 for the Orioles. Andy. Shariah. George. And nice. Ethan Salas. Padre is going to mark. I guess the bill would be equal. As they play that number zero. Okay, you have to take with the teammates. You could have done that the whole game in the school would have been more outside it than what it was. Going forward on the other side of the ball, Minnesota Bikes doing turnovers. That wouldn't be the case. This would have been a game. Seven turnovers in the Bikes from the last two games. They had them involved in it that way. Right now we're going to get Kelly Hurnton who's standing by the affiliated DeAndre switch with a career knight. And he is a nice player. He's presented by the decision maker. DeAndre, you guys found a way to build this ball on the ground. What did you see in the Vikings defense and you could exploit it? We did a hard early on. But I understand it was a good little detail. I mean, it kept working at it. Off the line we did a little bit of it. So we still moved to Bergen. Yeah, I was going to have to ask about that offensive line. You guys ran the ball. That was twice as much of my crew.  It is not just entirely. Once we get success early on, I think it's time to talk to you guys about it. A career knight for you on 75 brushing yards. In your first game as a Philadelphia Eagle about five miles from where you grew up playing ice football, what does it mean for you to have that moment here? Is this what you dreamed of this game? Congratulations, you're great. Thank you so much. Thank you. That was awesome. It was great. That was great job. There was a space where you told him how many yards he had. He's like, wow. I consider the running game and leaning on those guys up front is beautiful, not only. I think that's beautiful football. You look at this. This is what they did this game. It's all about a dream. Lean on what you got. This offensive line last year, big guys moving through one part of the pitch. Put the ball in the other person's hands. He was doing a great job making a good forwarding sound. And they really just decided at some point in the game, we don't know what he's actually doing with some of these covers. He really dropped on his own pretty much. Let's just run the football just game all day. The other thing is an awesome game. You know what game someone does. They start with the rules that bring them to our running backs and offense a lot. They can lean on it and be on the top, baby. And I read it from Brian Johnson. He tells me a game adjustment there. And that's hard to do. The other thing is, the thing we talked about a half time was something a little bit in that first half. Because when they do go over zero, they have to take a stand in them. So they kept bluffing it and bluffing it. And they brought it in the first half. They got caught with that right here. He goes to the road. They're on the same page. The key to cover zero is to have your fast guys run and to throw it to them. So in the second half here, why don't they spin? Who's going to keep up with him? He's a top 10 receiver. I'm telling you. So, he runs. That's right, trans. I mean, I think we all knew Swift as a great player, dude. I think you guys knew it, too, in Detroit.  Has a couple of monster games and then has a shoulder injury. Has, you know, hamstring growing. And then that's it. Just kind of never the same the rest of the year. I think for most people, they know the under Swift and the explosive running back that can put up numbers. But the real question's going to be, is he going to be healthy all year? And I think that's why the Eagles decided to go committee-wise, you know? Keep Gainwell, right? He's on another rookie deal. Same thing as him, right? Bringing Penny for like a million. Resigned Boston Scott for a million, you know? The Eagles are probably preparing just for that reason, you know? But now that, you know, Swift is on the move right now and doing, well, I'm sure he's going to use them as much as they can.  Especially with Gainwell being injured. I just think that's why the Lions traded them, you know? I think they were just fed up with it in the sense that, look, we love you, man. But we need someone that's going to be here every down, every game, right? That's what the Wins go get. Jamar Gibbs, you know, their first round pick. And I like him, so don't worry about him.  Oh, yeah, Swift on your bench, Kev. I didn't draft him. Only because I didn't know how it was going to be this year because I had a feeling that we're going to play Kenny Gainwell a lot and look at what happened in week one. But because he was injured this week, I had a feeling Swift could go off. That's a good round. Great pick up, man. They're putting pressure. And how much you got hit early, right? Oh, a bunch. And credit the Kevin O'Ball too. It's like anything, they're shifting it because they were out. They had to resolve that by the way, by the way he moved Justin Jefferson around. Sure, we were talking about it in the green room, the stuff that they're going to play for an artist.  But here in the green room, doesn't just get in the heat up. You're not going to have to try and act so forcefully. I can promise you those don't feel good and they stay in the back of your mind as that game goes on. As they're working that many of you in the pocket might see that again. For those touchdowns, extra impressive occurred. I'll tell you one thing that current has going on. I don't know if Mr. Sharp got into this place because of all the butter. But he's all spoke on a very, very solid achievement. Justin, you know how good this is. We're talking about, it's the best in the business in the entire week, down there in Miami. You've got a guy, I think, who's still up there. He's going out there. He's going to continue to play here. TJ Hopkins, you know. I didn't get excited in the NFL. He earned some money tonight. He earned that big contract. The numbers are great, though. But then, how does it feel, when you look at, respectively, in the NFC, a third-present, one-in-two in touchdowns? What's the difference? What's the difference between last year and all guys in the table for one-on-foot? What are you going to say? This is helping Tony's case that he made earlier. And we found a positive affirmation about is it possible that this is possibly doing a trade for third-present? This is over. Next question. If you lose the season, it's hard to take yourself out of that hole when you look at the rest of their schedule in the next four games, against the Chargers or at the Panthers. Yet, she's bears and hiders. It's a tough statement. What do you say in that locker room? If you plead it, or even yourself, it's your best question. Well, I think the number-one factor in this sport, if you turn out to be different, and you're always on the side of it, it is the number-one thing to take away from this. They've got to take care of the football. I don't care what they have to do with that, and they have to, by the way. They can't do it all. And this line has got to play better, and they've got a lot of challenges. They've got Joey Bosa, a little macaroni board, and they have to deal with Nick Bosa, your favorite, and your card game and that whole crew. It's not good. We're going to turn our attention back to Joey Bosa, because I think he's going to be a equal because we've been waiting for Jason Kelsey and Jaila Hers, and I think he's going to be told we're going to take a quick break because we're head over right now. Nick Brown, you have to deal with the first choice all the time. You don't forget the Kelsey document that follows us immediately after the show. Nick Brown, you've got to go over. Let's go. All right, let's walk this. Jason, make it count. Out of the hallmark now, reach for 4 power and I want the protein to build the decision you need to power up the chairman with the 4 power. If you wish to pull on TV, you need Google TV. Get air flow covered. Get it covered. All right, here we go. Borgala for the Phillies. Elton. Purple for the Astros. Come on. La Verde, that's the angel top prospect. Chris, there you go, man. Born in 2005. Still young. Nick Gonzalez, Pirates, 250. Bobby Miller. And we have a Ricardo Perez, orange shimmer for the Phillies. Or, there you go, man. That's the last one for PR. Out of 50. Luke Berryhill. Yellow for the Astros with 75. Jeremy Cork. Borgala shimmer. Nick Ford. Borgala shimmer. Lucara. And Chris Newell. Dodgers. Kyle. Edmond Diaz. Michael Tamaris. Raise the 499. We give us the 499. Pirates big dog. And Eloi Haminess. 299. Ricardo. And Peroso. All right, whoo. Which I think some of these guys are not affiliated with the MLB, so I'll do a randomizer for the non MLB. We'll just give them out in one lot. And then obviously the sorting team will figure out what teams they go with if that's the case. But if not, it'll go to one person. Cientos. 299. Abrams. And Paul McIntosh. Marlins. Michael Langer. Don't worry. Valiz. Pinto. Wages. Charmada. All right, we got two more boxes. All right, it's R.F. Castro. He's the top prospect for Minnesota. Miller. Jesus Bastidas. Speckle to 299 for the Yanks. That's Matt Smith. Luis Reyes. Ready for even. Dodgers' Cough. And Vargas. Marco for the Marlins. No Michael. All right, here we go, guys. Last box. Vargas. What's that in there? Longerism. 2, 3. You almost had another one at the end. What was that adjustment you got? 299. Victor Astoris. For the Guardians. Henry. Everybody's been studying us. We've won the most explosive offense of last year. And teams have come out with recently very unorthodox differences. How about we adjust to better history and still need to adjust better and move forward? And for Garo. For the Marlins. Marlins, that's Michael. Nice pray for you, buddy. All righty, guys. There you go. That was the break. I'll top a little of the autographs right now but a quick little recap. You guys can see there. 24. 24 autos, two relics there. And the Bowman ascension. Thank you guys so much. Let me quickly switch scenes, for any of those non-MOV affiliated cards. And I'll go to one person. Roll. Two to four, six. One. Two. Three. Four. Five. Six. Philly. So that's going to go to Jeremy Ford. Any of those non-MOV cards will go to you, buddy. Thank you guys. Number four is kind of an X.


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Daily Fantasy is fantasy football without the commitment. Any player, any week, and if they burn you, you can just ditch them, get rid of them in the next week. Who needs commitment? It's 2021. Be a free soul. So what is Daily Fantasy?  You're competing in single day events, you get a budget, and you can pick your players, which is freeing because you can have any players you want. In your regular fantasy league, if you don't have Christian McCaffrey, you don't have Christian McCaffrey. Oh. But in Daily Fantasy, if you want Christian McCaffrey and Saquon Barkley, you can do that. You know, you might have to settle with like Andy Dalton as your quarterback because Saquon and Christian McCaffrey are going to cost you a pretty penny. This guy stinks. But the point is you're free. You can build whatever team you want. If you want to do a DFS contest, there's a lot of options. You can do one for all the games on Sundays and pick players from every game on Sunday. You could pick players from just the one PM Eastern games. You can even pick players from just one game if you just want to do Sunday night football. And if your season long fantasy football matchup is done by Monday night, you can just do DFS for Monday night and get some action done in the game. There's a few good strategies for Daily Fantasy, the most classic of which is just stars and scrubs. You want to mix really strong, expensive players like the Christian McCaffrey's of the world with scrubs. I don't know if the scrubs would like to be called that, but you know, guys who aren't as popular. And you're hoping that if the star players perform as expected and the scrub guys pop, then you can win. So that works really well in like a 50-50 contest where, you know, if there's 10 lineups, the top five scoring lineups, they win money. There's also much larger contests called tournaments where you compete with hundreds or even thousands of other people. There's so many other people that you have to get a little more creative with your lineup. One really popular strategy is called stacking where you pick a lot of players from the same team. So if you think Dak Prescott for the Cowboys is gonna have a big day, it makes a lot of sense to stack your lineup with other Cowboys. You also want Dallas receiver, Amari Cooper, CD Lam, maybe even tight end Blake Jarwin. And you're hoping that you can take advantage of the fact that the Cowboys have a big day and you get all the big performers from that offense. Another counterintuitive one though is that actually it makes sense to stack running backs and defenses. So if you actually think the Cowboys might shut someone else, it makes sense that Ezekiel Elliott goes with the Cowboys defense because that way, if they're gonna run a lot in the second half, the defense keeps them scoring low, that generally makes sense. So you want quarterbacks and pass catchers running backs and defenses. But in the biggest tournaments with the biggest payouts, it's not enough to just do stacking or just do stars and scrubs. So you kind of need to be a little contrarian. It's not novel enough to pick Dak Prescott and Amari Cooper or to stack Patrick Mahomes and Travis Kelsey to win because if there's thousands of people in, then probably dozens of other people did that too. So you need to mix the obvious players like the Mahomes and Kelsey's with the non-obvious players like, oh, Greg Ward for the Eagles had two touchdowns today. And if you can mix and match the right amount of obvious and non-obvious players, you can have a massive payday. And that's kind of what's fun about Daily Fantasy is it's not just picking how the stars are gonna do, you're also kind of trying to pick your gut feeling or just the feeling of the insane spreadsheet you made. But honestly, gut feelings are a lot more fun. Daily Fantasy is fun because you can have any player you want. And then the next week, you can have completely different players that you want. And you don't really get that experience in season long fantasy football. And if you keep these three strategies in mind, stars and scrubs stacking and trusting your gut to be a little contrarian, you can have a lot of fun and make a little money. Be a free soul.


Lecture 35, As-Salaam-Alaikum. Welcome to the virtual university's course on business and technical communication. In today's lecture, we are going to start reviewing the language used in your business and technical communication. We are going to start with the paragraph. In this lecture, you are going to learn about paragraph unity. And within that, we will look specifically at topic sentences and how they can be used to achieve unity in a paragraph. We will also look at paragraph coherence, which will include the use of transitional devices, specifically transitional words and phrases, and common transitional words and phrases that are used to gain transition. We will also look at linking pronouns, which are another device that help with paragraph coherence, and we will look at the repetition of key words to gain coherence within a paragraph. Following that, we will look at paragraph development. Paragraph development can be achieved through a variety of ways. We can use different patterns like exemplification, narration, process, description, comparison and contrast, the use of analogy, cause and effect, classification and division, definition, analysis and enumeration to develop the paragraphs in our writing. So let's start with paragraph unity. What exactly do we mean when we talk of unity? We unify paragraphs by making every sentence contribute to a controlling idea, which is usually stated in a topic sentence. When we talk about paragraph unity, it means that all the ideas in the paragraph relate to the topic sentence. In the following paragraph, which is part of a discussion of recent advances in optical astronomy. Now the topic sentence, as you just saw in this preceding example as well, the second sentence was the topic sentence and every subsequent sentence was supporting the main idea in the topic sentence. Now there are some things to remember when you are formulating a topic sentence. You need to remember that the central idea of the paragraph should be stated in the topic sentence. The other sentences should elaborate on the topic sentence with relevant information and evidence. While you will keep your main idea in the topic sentence of the paragraph, the rest of the sentences will elaborate on the main idea in some way or give information or give evidence about it. Also, topic sentences are a key element in developing unified and coherent paragraphs. And unless your topic sentences are effective and focused, your paragraphs will not be unified and coherent. Although the topic sentence may appear anywhere in the paragraph, there is no set rule for where the topic sentence appears in a paragraph. It is most often the first sentence of a paragraph. There are times when it is the second sentence, there are times when it appears elsewhere also, but the most common location of a topic sentence is the first sentence. A topic statement may also contain a transitional element from the previous paragraph. In the first paragraph of the next example, the topic sentence is the first sentence and it states the subject. However, there are times when the paragraph can lead to a topic sentence. As it is also possible that the topic sentence is not the first sentence, first the entire paragraph comes and then the topic sentence comes. And when a topic sentence concludes a paragraph like this, it receives extra emphasis and can also serve as a summary or conclusion. As you can see in this example, the first sentence on your screen is the topic sentence. And it says time became a key word in the language of physics during the 17th century. And then the following sentences give support to this statement. In this paragraph that you see on the screen now, the topic sentence is the last sentence of this paragraph. The whole paragraph is leading towards the topic sentence which is time-led and independent existence separate from nature itself. And this sentence then is the conclusion of the paragraph also and leads up to whatever will come next subsequently. But basically it is concluding all that has been said, it is summarizing all that has been said in the paragraph. So, these are two different places where the topic sentence can occur. It is most commonly found in the first sentence or sometimes the second sentence, but it may also be found in the last sentence of a paragraph. Now, paragraph coherence is more than simply laying down the facts. A coherent paragraph organizes facts properly, creating a logical argument that makes sense from idea to idea. Coherent paragraphs have a beginning, a middle, and an end. Elements that contribute to coherence such as transitional devices, linking pronouns, and repetition of key words will lead to a logical conclusion. So, these are two different places where the first part of the paragraph is written and the second part of the paragraph is written and the second part of the paragraph is written and the third part of the paragraph is written and the third part of the paragraph is written and will be discussed in the following section of today's lecture. Let us have a look at a weak paragraph. In this paragraph, there is very weak coherence. The ideas do not link together properly. The improved version, as you can see, makes for much better reading. There are transitional elements present which are adding to the coherence of the paragraph. The use of the word in a phrase, in fact, is actually showing that you are elaborating on something and by saying the problem has grown in the last 20 years, you are actually emphasizing that there was a problem which has been talked about in the first sentence. As you have seen, in the first sentence, a problem was told that limited investment in the housing sector makes it practically impossible to allocate sufficient resources for urban dwellers' housing needs. And then in the next sentence, it was rephrased that this is really a problem and it has grown in the last 20 years. And then the writer used the word because. Now, this word because shows that he is going to talk about the reasons, the causes of this problem. So, as you can see, this adds to coherence. Each separate fact flows into the next, creating a coherent whole. The use of transitional devices as verbal bridges to link one idea to the next creates coherence within a paragraph. Transitions are crucial to paragraph coherence. They make a difference between abrupt, choppy sentences and seamless prose. They make them much more effective. They make them flow much better. You will use transitional devices and words to clarify and smooth the movement from idea to idea. Let's have a look at an example where you can see how transitional words and phrases can be used effectively. This is a weak version that you are seeing on your screen right now. There are very few, there are hardly any. In fact, there are no transitional devices and as you can see, the ideas do not link together very well. However, in this improved version, the writer has used words like for example, moreover and therefore, to create connections between the ideas and to show what is coming next, whether they are giving some kind of an example or they are giving additional information or they are showing the effect of something. The following list that we will look at now, it is characterized by type of relationship and it provides examples of some common and useful transitional words and phrases. Cause and effect relationships can be shown by the use of such transitional words like consequently, therefore, accordingly as a result because for this reason, hence thus. A sequence can be shown by the use of words and phrases like furthermore, in addition, moreover, first, second, third, finally, again also and besides further in the first place, last, likewise next, then too. Comparison or contrast can be shown by the use of words and phrases like similarly also in the same way likewise although at the same time but conversely even so however, in contrast nevertheless, nonetheless notwithstanding on the contrary otherwise still yet. Examples can be shown by using words like for example, for instance, in fact, indeed of course, specifically that is to illustrate. You can show that you are talking about purpose by using phrases like for this purpose, for this reason, to this end with this object. You can also talk about time and location and transitional devices used for time and location would include nearby, above, adjacent to, below, beyond, farther on, here, opposite to, there, to the south, to the north, to the east, to the west, whatever before, after, later, afterwards, immediately in the meantime, meanwhile, now, since, soon, then and while. So, as you can see this is a very effective list and if you use, keep this list as a reference to guide you to use transitional devices wherever you feel that there are jumps between your ideas, you will be very effective in creating good coherent paragraphs. Now, another thing that adds to paragraph coherence is linking pronouns. The use of linking pronouns, pronouns like it's, your, there and so on, when referring to other nouns and pronouns actually adds to the coherence of your paragraphs. We use pronouns to refer to people, places, things and we use linking pronouns to refer to other nouns or other pronouns. Linking pronouns connect your sentences and help to keep your subject in focus. Let's have a look at a paragraph where linking pronouns are not used very effectively. It says in 1912, the German chemist von Lowe hypothesized that in a crystal X-ray, scattering patterns are related to atom spacing. A series of experiments demonstrated the wave nature of X-rays and the periodic arrangement of atoms. Spots on a photographic plate provided the proof for the hypothesis. Now, let's see how the same text is improved by using linking pronouns. In 1912, the German chemist von Lowe hypothesized that in a crystal X-ray, scattering patterns are related to atom spacing. His series of experiments demonstrated the wave nature of X-rays and the periodic arrangement of atoms. Spots on a photographic plate provided the proof for his hypothesis. Now, here you can see how the link is made with the experiments of this chemist. You will also repeat keywords to emphasize your main points. However, you need to use this technique sparingly because too much repetition leads to monotony. Now, keep in mind that if you are repeating for coherence, then don't repeat too much because if you repeat a few words repeatedly, it will look very monotonous. However, repetition affects coherence and improves coherence. However, a lot of repetition makes a paragraph monotonous. Let's have a look at an example to elaborate this point. This broadcast packet switching should be distinguished from the store and forward variety. To handle the demands of growth, our system can be extended using repeaters for signal regeneration, filters for traffic localization, or gateways for internet work address extension. Now, this text is made better so that some words, specifically packet words are repeated. Let's see how this broadcast packet switch should be distinguished from the store and forward variety. To handle the demands of growth, our system can be extended using packet repeaters for signal regeneration, packet filters for traffic localization, or packet gateways for internet work address extension. The main point packets is now highlighted. Now, this was a paragraph coherence. How we use linking devices, repetition of words, linking pronouns, transitional devices, etc. to create coherence amongst paragraphs. Now, let's have a look at how we develop the paragraphs. You will develop your paragraphs with a variety of patterns that reflect your thinking about the material that you are using. As you write the topic sentence and its supporting sentences, look for ways to structure your argument and structure your thinking. Jyobhi aapki thinking hai, jyobhi aapne points likne hai, aapne topic sentence se related, jyobhi supporting sentences likne, unko aapne kis structure mein likna hai. One author may advance his or her material by narrating a series of event. Another author may undertake physical description. Another author may undertake an analysis of the topic. Ek hi topic ko different log, different tarahan se expand kar sakte hai. Narration ke saath, physical description deke, koi cheezin analyze karke. Aapne bhi yeh sohsna honka ki jo aap ke pas material hai aap usko kis tarahan se develop kar sakte hai. We are going to have a look at some different patterns of paragraph development to give you an idea. Let's have a look first at exemplification. You will use exemplification paragraphs to provide instances that clarify your topic sentence or topic statement. Exemplification ka matlab ke aap examples deke baat karenge, jyobhi aapne apne topic sentence me baat ki hai uske baare mein aap koi examples, koi instances batayange. In the following paragraph, the topic sentence is supported in examples that illustrate, support and clarify the main point. Vitamins and minerals can be added to enrich in brackets. Replace nutrients lost in processing of fortify, brackets add nutrients not normally present, foods to improve their nutritional quality. Ye to ho gya aap ka topic sentence is me baataaya jaara hai ke vitamins or minerals, kis cheez ke liye kane mein add ke jaate hai. Aap dekhte hai kis cheez ko kis tarahan develop kiya gaya hai. Breads and cereals are usually enriched with some B vitamins and iron. Common examples of fortification include the addition of vitamin D to milk, vitamin A to margarine, vitamin C to fruit drinks, calcium to orange juice and iodide to table salt. Jaise ke aap main dekhaap iss example mein topic sentence ek tha aur pe jo baaki sentences thay wo us topic sentence se related examples dere thay aur us own examples ke through us topic sentence ki detail bhi milge aur us topic sentence ko develop bhi kiya gaya. To ye exemplification ke laati hai. Now another way of developing a paragraph could be through narration. You will use narration to establish a series of events that tells the reader what happened. Narration follows a chronological pattern of development. Iska matlab hi hai ki narration jo hai wo chronological pattern istamaal karte hi hai.  Narration is a convincing mode of paragraph development to the extent that it tells a coherent story and narration is often used when you are telling the story or when you are describing how an event happened or what happened first what happened next etc. It follows a timeline and it is usually very easy to understand because things are in a chronology because things are being talked about in the same order as they happened it is easy to understand what happened and what happened first what happened afterwards. In the following narrative the paragraph is followed by two descriptive paragraphs. Note the use of transitional words such as thereafter, first, next and after. These type of words are typical transitional devices used in a narration paragraph. Jaise ke aap dekh rahe hain is paragraph mein first, next etc. istamaal kye gaye hain after this process is written with all these things what happened first, what happened later and this is a narrative paragraph. The paragraph you are seeing is a descriptive paragraph and it is related to the narration but when the first paragraph was a narrative, the next paragraph is also descriptive. You can see that it is not necessary that all the paragraphs follow one pattern different paragraphs have different purposes and according to that you develop it. You can also give a description of the process in paragraphs to develop sequences that describe how an action is carried out or how something works. When you are talking about how of something then you are actually describing a process. When you are talking about how something works then you are explaining its process so the readers will know how it works. The paragraph that we will see now shows a typical sequential treatment of a general physical phenomenon. Note the concentration of process verbs such as to find, samples, sums and provides. Another type of paragraph that we can use descriptive prose to provide a physical picture or a functional view of the subject. If we want to describe something, we want to explain how it is then we will use the description to develop that paragraph. Physical description develops a picture by identifying the shapes, materials, position and functions of the subject prose often serves as the raw material for more elaborate forms of analytical prose. If you have a descriptive paragraph then on that basis you can write more analysis or more analytical paragraphs. Let us have a look at an example where boundary layer test section is being described. Another way of developing your paragraphs is to use an analogy to explain one object or process in terms of another. When you are explaining something or something else then you will call it an analogy. You need to be very careful that you are actually using analogies properly because the appness of the analogy is generally a point of very subtle judgment. You have to understand that the things that you are matching with each other can be matched or not. Some analogies can be more valid than others. For example, comparing an apple to the space shuttle is not likely to be an effective analogy because in a save and space shuttle there is no connection between them or any kind of analogy can be used. However, explaining the internet by reference to a highway system might be a good analogy because they are both seen to be roads to some kind of information. In the following analogy that you will see, a body infection is compared with an invading army of attack organisms. Similarly, when you are writing something you can develop your paragraph but keep in mind that the analogy that you are using is really something that you are comparing with each other. There is a connection or connection between them which is common. Another way in which you can develop your paragraphs is through the use of cause and effect relationships. You will use cause and effect in paragraphs when you are in a situation or event out of another. When you want to show that something has happened because of something else or you want to show that something has happened because of something else you want to show an effect of something or you want to show an effect of something else then you will develop your paragraph with cause and effect in development that attempts to show how events are influenced by others or how they are caused by others. Basically, they show the linkage of causation. In the following paragraph that you will see the development follows the inductive pattern of reasoning from effects back to causes. In this paragraph it will be shown what are the effects and what are the effects because of something else. What was the cause of global climate change resulting from the accumulation of greenhouse gases. For example, it is likely to have significant health effects both direct and indirect. An average global temperature rise of 3 to 4 degree centigrade predicted for the year 2100 by the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change trees the number of days in the United States with temperature over 38 degree centigrade with a resulting sharp rise to heat related mortality. Deaths will occur primarily from heat strokes, heart attacks and cerebral strokes. The very young, poor and elderly as well as those with chronic cardiovascular and respiratory diseases are most at risk. During the two week heat wave of July 1993 in the United States, 84 people died in Philadelphia alone as a result of the higher temperatures. As you have seen in this example what are the effects and what is the cause of death or what is the cause of the calamities. Another way of developing your paragraphs would be the use of classification and division. You will use classification and division to develop material by relating parts to holes. You will use classification and division to develop material by relating parts to holes. You will classify things, divide and group them and then you will talk about them. When we talk of classification or processes by grouping them into classes you can classify organisms, mechanisms, processes according to shapes, magnitudes, effects and so on. If you are taking an organism or a mechanism then you can classify it in different classes. You can take different shapes and different effects. You can see the effects of a process and you can classify different effects of a process. In division you develop a topic by breaking it down into smaller parts. In classification you will collect similar things and in division you will divide one thing into pieces. Classification is the tutorial strategy. It is an effective approach for showing the terrain of a subject by elaborating on its essential types. In classification basically you can show the entire scope of a subject by breaking different types and you can see how many categories there are. In the following example the definition ceramics are broken down into types. We can also develop paragraphs by definition. You will develop paragraphs by definition when you want to set working generalizations that will help control the meaning and scope of important terms. When you want to define the important terms or concepts that you are talking about you want to define them and you want to establish a scope. Defining is an effective way of controlling the scope of terms. In the following paragraph an extended definition is used as part of the introduction to a research article. As you can see the development is used as a definition because in introductions you can discuss the scope and the things. The intention in this example is both to establish the terms of the discourse and to establish the importance of the subject. How important it is and why. By exploring the meaning of the term by metals the example creates a shared concept that focuses the discussion that follows. Note the use of other devices such as functional description and enumeration. Another way in which you can develop paragraphs is analysis. Analysis examines a subject by evaluating one of its aspects weighing evidence and possible causal linkages. Analysis evaluates a subject and evaluates an aspect of it. You can discuss the evidence and judge and weigh it and discuss the causes. You can analyze why and what are the reasons. Analysis resembles other forms of paragraph development especially classification and division. The object of analysis however is to get to the center of how something works. We are going to have a look at a paragraph that considers the link between cancer, poverty and stress. It says one possible explanation for these statistics on cancer can be found in the high levels of stress associated with poverty. In this beginning sentence they have told that we will talk about the link. Studies have found that stress can dampen the immune system. The body's first line of defense against cancer and experiments with animals have shown that a stressful environment can enhance the growth of a variety of tumors. The link between poverty, stress and cancer mortality in humans has not been proven. Studies have shown a link between stress and other illnesses. In this analysis they have told us what are the things that can be caused by cancer and what are the links between cancer and stress and poverty. They have also analyzed what are the things that have not been proven and in experiments different studies have shown what are the links. They have analyzed all the things that have been done in the research and explained in this paragraph. Another way is enumeration. You can develop paragraphs by enumeration. By using enumeration in paragraphs you itemize or list a set of topics or a series of some kind. If you are number wise it is not necessary that you have written your number but you discuss different things and discuss different things. Enumeration is a powerful way to establish a series of observations and to emphasize each element. Because you are discussing everything separately if you are talking about different causes or different elements then if you list them one by one it will be an enumerative pattern of paragraph development. In the following paragraph the items are enumerated in a series of itemized recommendations. They have given recommendations and they have itemized the enumerative paragraph. They say have your blood cholesterol measured if you have never had it done. Fingerprint tests at health fairs and other public places are generally fairly accurate especially if they are offered by a hospital or other reputable health group. When you know your number follow these guidelines from the National Cholesterol Education Program. They have given an introduction to the paragraph. It is important to know where to get it done and after that they will tell you what to do next. If your cholesterol is under 200, maintain a healthy lifestyle including eating a low fat diet, getting regular exercise, maintaining a healthy body weight and not smoking and get another test within 5 years. The next item on their list is if the result is of any other type. If your cholesterol is between 200 and 239 have a second test performed and average the results. If that number falls in the same range and if you do have any form of cardiovascular disease, change your diet to improve your cholesterol. In addition eliminate any other risk factors you have and get tested again in about one year. So this is the second thing they did. The first thing they told you is that you get a test and get the result. Now they told you that when you get the result keep in mind what type of result it is, what the patient needs to do. They have given one option if the result is of a specific type and then a second option. Now let's look at the third option. If your cholesterol is 240 or more your physician should order a more detailed cholesterol analysis and therapy based on the results. You should begin a cholesterol-improving diet immediately. As you have seen, they told you about three different types of results and on the basis of the three results they also told you that the list of items that they have listed have a logical order. So if you are using an enumerative pattern then you will write your points in some order. The order they ordered used an increasing amount of cholesterol because the order was more or less. First they talked about less cholesterol and the result was lower, then 200 to 230 and then 240 or more. As per your context and your topic any logical order will list your items in that order. In the next lecture you have learned about paragraph unity. We talked about how topic sentences contribute to unified paragraphs. We have said that topic sentences should be clear and the remaining sentences should be related to topic sentences and only then the paragraphs will be united. We also said that there should be a link in a paragraph and this link can be from one of the transitional devices. We have seen different forms of transitional devices and we have seen a list of transitional words and phrases which I have suggested that you keep it handy when you are writing so that you can use without repeating the same transitional words or devices again and again. We also saw that the use of linking pronouns can add to the coherence of paragraphs and so can the repetition of key words but I also warned you that you should not repeat words too often because if they are repeated too often then it can lead to monotony. Finally we looked at paragraph development and we saw that paragraphs can be developed in a variety of ways. First we will write a topic sentence and then we will write unified sentences related to that topic sentence that we will develop with some pattern and we will develop ideas with some pattern and those ideas were exemplification where we are giving a topic sentence related examples in chronological order describing some events or a series of events or description of a process in which we are telling how something works or we can give a description of something it is not necessary to give a description of a process but we can give a description of a physical thing or we can compare or contrast we clarified that comparison happens when we are talking about similar things and contrast happens when we are highlighting their differences we also saw that paragraphs can be developed through the use of analogy where you are using one example to talk about something else but the warning as far as that was concerned was that whatever two things should have something in common we looked at the example of talking about an apple with reference to a space shuttle and we saw that that was not an effective analogy but the use of the internet and the comparison of the internet with the highway was an effective analogy we also looked at cause and effect paragraph development how we could talk about the causes of something or the effects of something to develop a paragraph then we looked at classification and division classification when we put similar things in categories or division when we take part of one thing and mention those divided things we looked at paragraphs developed through analysis where we were weighing the causes of something and the different analysis of whatever subject that we were talking about and then we also looked at enumerative paragraphs where you list things or you put things in step by step as an itemized list and we talked about the fact that when you are using enumeration you need to be very clear in your mind that the things that you are listing should be listed in a logical order the example we saw was listing things in an increasing amount where you could use any other logic for listing your things as well so today we talked about different forms of paragraph development or unity key in the next session we will review more language if you have any questions please feel free to email the address is englishatvu.edu.pk until next time Allah Hafiz


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So obviously big news of the weekend, no Greek deal Referendum to be held in the 5th of July to talk to ask the great people if they want to accept the bailout or not No extension of liquidity to Greece capital controls in Greece you can't withdraw more than 60 euros a day If you're a local from cash machines and currently there are huge queues of people Trying to get gas trying to get food trying to get money at the banks obviously everybody all waiting till after The deadline to try and take the rest of the money out We've never seen queues like it on the build-up until today And I've just been looking at some images online and Greece is a bit of a mess So looking at European and my for global markets most equity markets feel in the pain this morning Gapping down lower even as far as China Chinese stock markets down Limit down again today the Chinese version of the NASDAQ down another seven percent It's actually down 33 percent and there's a few number and there's a small number days. That's down about 20 percent in three days German DAX currently is down four and a half almost five percent With most European Boris is just opening as I'm recording this video. So the UK 100 gapping down much lower And but it has managed to rally back back up just below potential resistance at 17 and 747 But we're basically just waiting to see how the rest of the other markets react when stocks actually start trading The Greek stock market is going to be shut off the week as our all Greek banks So that that should be contained for now, but as you can see the UK 100 gap much lower So this is where we closed there on Friday. We actually almost hit 6500 at one point So we're quite a far far bit away from the session lows So we're currently close to sixty five eighty nine or quite close just at sixty 6600 so moving on to Japan to to five you see we are also the gap this morning 20,000 87 the support level to be aware of right there And then moving on to dollar yen dollar yen again off the session lows Was quite close to 121 eight spot 87 But has managed to ride back up to 122 87 is your dollar that I will have a look at that's for the Any major euro FX pair which should have significant moves on it looking at crude that's down as well Trading below potential support at 59 50 currently trading a dollar below that at 58 50 Gold not doing as much as you would expect some of the yen actually when we looked at that chart There's not a lot of safe here in buying, but there's lots and lots of selling And that's just pretty much right across the board looking at the at the end of day charts And you can see they were just below 1186 to be fair That has been a resistance slash support level for a number of months and today seems to be no different in that regard So let's have a look at your dollar Euro dollar having it's again off the session was gapped way lower went all the way down to one spot 955 but I since rallied it a lot back. So just below potential support slash resistance at one spot 11 now I'm most I'm just noticing here as the markers is opening doors German Dax now down almost 5% just as the the underlying markers begin to open and but as you can see there the Euro a dollar has managed to make a little bit that lock round But it's failing currently to break above one spot 11 Which will be acting now as a potential resistance level. So then finishing up with GBP USD It's fairing a little bit better, but one spot 5743 is still a short-term potential Support slash resistance. So it's broken support now. It's big tech as resistance from the wrong side of that just now We've launched a negative Could have technicals on here across over the mighty Um Cross on the RSI and the slate and the same for that slow stochastic there as well pressure will be on So what is expected to happen there on today? Well, if you keep your eye on financial stocks, they're probably feeling the brunt right across every major index You can just see here that the Germany 30 down almost 5% UK 100 is actually performing relatively okay Considering down about 2% I think it's very much just that we're a little bit Unchartered territory right now In regards to what's going to happen next the markets don't tend to like that So people will be taking money at the table, but there is bargain hunting opportunities for those people that like that white knuckle ride We just don't really know what's going to happen with them whip with grease next And if we do go to a referendum on the on the 5th of july I think it's highly likely that the Greeks will vote to have the bailout and They will be new elections called and grace But someday I said it's not too late for a deal to be reached But the markets obviously react you can see the you can see the germany 30 actually down more than 5% now as we're as we're According to this video. So look that germany market getting hit particularly hard Basically, keep behind the chart for them. Keep looking at insights our global analyst team will be doing lots of updates on here to make Sure our clients are well informed and join me again tomorrow to find out what happened next