This improvement was a welcome step, addressing some of my concerns. However, I believe that the insertion of the footnote without any explanation of the two perspectives did not contribute sufficiently to improving the clarity for readers.
Accordingly, I presented a new proposal (the fourth point of my proposal) at the MPM held on October 31, 2013, to include an introductory paragraph at the beginning of the Outlook Report. Under my proposal, the paragraph would have explained the sequence of the report and provided a brief description of the concepts behind the two perspectives.