This story is awfully familiar; I may have bought it before, under a different title or author name?' Anyway, it was good. It was short. Nice characters. Not that much emotion but I can make up for that in my mind. I couldn't see any obvious editorial mistakes. The dialogue read as natural, not stilted. It was a good idea having a character who can see real magical creatures under their human disguises and I guess having him shut away in a facility because of it, is a natural story progression. The elf was fun..
Familiar